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Reviews for Play With Me?

By : vbruce
  • From draelynn on February 15, 2009
    Exactly how do you get so good at crack? Thank the gods your are so prolific because too many of us would be jones for our next fix... damn crack peddlers! I love how you summed up lil Brad and lil Schu in so few words. 'Soft souled' lil Schu was probably one of the most poignant and potent descriptions of our favorite sociopath, those few words clearly pointing to the horror his life must have been to turn him into his adult self. And Brad as tyrannical toddler tyrant - fitting and perhaps a bit predictable EXCEPT in the 'my crybaby' and 'I woulda.' Possessive, protective and in the last chapter... clearly homicidal even as a child. Somehow I found that entirely chilling. If he did get his hands on his gun as a kid, he still wouldn't hesitate to pull the trigger. I could clearly see that piercing hollow glacial stare on his little face. Monsters aren't always made... some are just born. I'd love to see you pull that same attention to character detail to Aya and Yohji - they've had their moments but I challenge you to stop me dead like your Brad and Schu did. Come on woman... need my fix... don't leave a sister hanging...
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  • From RubyRoh on February 15, 2009
    I've just found this and had to let you know what great fun I had reading it! The older members as kids are so cute, but I can still see how Crawford grew up to be the man he became. Seems that even as a kid he liked to get his own way and as he's grown up he's simply replaced physical biting with its psychological equivalent.

    Anyway, this is a good, fun read and I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From KDSarge on January 31, 2009
    oh, I love the "camping!" But...is that it?

    MORE!!
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  • From KDSarge on January 31, 2009
    "MY crybaby" aww!!
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  • From KDSarge on January 31, 2009
    Two chapters in and laughing my ass off...
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  • From katami on January 23, 2009
    They are such cute little demon children! I love the end with Brad and Aya. And leave it to Brad to insist that they must have s'mores - such a cute little tyrant! I love them all as kids!
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 16, 2009
    Oh, goody! An update! It seems as though the 'boys' are getting on better with the addition of fire and food. I don't know when this adventure will be over for them, but I am no longer worried about them surviving an attack from adult sized bad guys, like the jerk from the park or any other villains who may appear. Ken, Omi and Farf have sharp pointy things and Nagi the ability to see they hit their mark. This is so fun! Please continue!
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  • From Tazzy on January 16, 2009
    *squeals* You updated! *Dances excitedly*

    *grins* Aw.. they're all cute little assassins aren't they? All fierce and deadly, covered in feathers and making S'mores. *snerks*
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  • From zetsuai2005 on March 29, 2008
    I'm amazed that Farfarello didn't gut the creep. Can't tell if the situation has changed him or if he is just rising to the occasion. I'm happy to see an update, I really like this story. With you writing it, it has so much potential. I like the better sides of Aya and Schu and Brad coming out, though I'm not sure what has made the difference. Has being shrunk left them with their adult minds in a child's body or are they reverting to what they once were as children? Yohji is too cute for words. Well done!
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  • From katami on March 28, 2008
    Aw, I knew Brad cared! I love this story so much! Please tell me Farf is going to be killing that jerk. Nagi could splat him. Splat is good.
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  • From Tazzy on March 27, 2008
    *cackles* He's my crybaby....

    Love that line and it does show how Brad's relationship with his team is.
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  • From annime on March 27, 2008
    Little Schu is so adorable. I just want to hug him. I liked how mini Brad was protective of him.
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  • From zetsuai2005 on January 24, 2008
    Aya comforting Schuldig? This is getting weird. Funny, but weird. I'm afraid of what may be coming next, very afraid. But then you warned us. Short, but well done. I'm afraid to ask for more, but I'm addicted. Bring it on.
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  • From Tazzy on January 24, 2008
    *shrieks with laughter*

    Yohji is *priceless* HOw'd I know she didn't have any clothes on?. Beautiful six year old response. *snickers*

    Can we spank Brad yet? He needs it or a time-out. After all, Schuldig hasn't done anything since they got shrank to warrent a beating.

    And Aya and Schuldig is *precious*!!!
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  • From seeker212121 on January 21, 2008
    Kawaii! I love it! I like the stories you write, so I keep an eye on AFF for when you post. Keep up the good work and I wait with bait breath for your next chapter.
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