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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From yawg07 on April 20, 2009
    AHHHHH! lol I was hoping for Flannery/Blaziken action SO BADLY.
    Ah well :D I'm sure it will come along, work us up a one-shot please! :3

    I liked the chapter, story is moving along, I just wish it was a few weeks ago. *teases*
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2009
    Well, it could have been Blaziken and Flannery who then decide to have a hawt foursome but... Somehow I doubt it.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 20, 2009
    Vyers---The consequence of my late-night updates, heh.

    Imasuky Lomae---Well, there ain't that many possibilities, lol. And none of them are very good.
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  • From Bishonen on April 20, 2009
    Great new chapter i can't help but wondre who swa them at the end.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 20, 2009
    Jasmin Kaiba---The original plan for Flannery was minimal time, but now I'm starting to fall in love with her. Her role in the story will be larger than I intended.

    dave---Blaziken was always my favorite starter third generation, though it was always hard for me to decide if I should focus on physical attacks, special attacks, or just balance him out.

    RichardtheDragon---Sometimes the best thing a friend can do is kick your ass, lol.

    Imasuky Lomae---I should make a oneshot featuring my weird little vision...Slash picks up a stone and skips it across a lake. Graveler, a slightly larger stone, punches him in the fucking face to avenge his tiny comrade. XD

    And yes, Blaziken is very protective. Like Slash would be if he had to watch people hitting on Psymakio all the time (and had fire powers that he had to hold back). No sexiness will happen between these four in the main story.

    Vyers---Not so much a zombie, though corrupted Pokemon will continually resurrect until their bodies are physically unable to move.

    Nona---I loves me a Crawdaunt. As for what's in store with him...well, he'll be fighting a Pokemon that's completely equal to him in terms of type advantages. That should make it obvious. :-D

    Psyence---His power level...it's...1006.

    Yeah. Kick his ass, Nappa.

    SF---Glad you like it.

    Knight---As for when Slash will snap...well, I'll say that it's inevitable. As for the next scene of lemony goodness...unfortunately, not for a while. Not until the Fallarbor crisis is over, at the least.

    Ragdoll---Glad you liked it.

    Psyence---As you'll see in the next chapter, Psymakio will have to limit her power to avoid drawing corrupted Pokemon at night. Even when she's at full strength, she'd have to be looking for it, and there's little reason for her to do so. As for Flannery/Blaziken action...it's possible, although not anytime soon. Unlike a certain horny trainer and his horny Gardevoir, those two have better sense than the fuck under a volcano, lol.

    zero---You'll find out pretty soon. :3

    Imasuky Lomae---Two years of Sinners. Blows my mind. Longest single writing project I've ever had.

    Psyence---My favorite story hasn't been updated in a year. PRAY THAT I NEVER TAKE A PAGE FROM THAT.

    J. Winter---I love any list that includes "anal" like it was something to pick up at the grocery store. XD

    Next chapter will be uploaded in approximately one minute.
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  • From zentillion on April 15, 2009
    Chapter count: 4
    Not a bad start to the second arc. Anal, getting to learn more about Kiako, the appearance of Rayquaza, an epic gym battle, and some new curiosities arriving, to boot! Six chapters to go, as of current... can't wait to see what happens. :D
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  • From Bishonen on March 29, 2009
    I just wanted to say Happy Birthday Psymaiko since it's March 29th and that I still think this is the best story on the site.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

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  • From ANON - zero on March 18, 2009
    gret work i read the series and you got me jook on it can't wait to see what happends next
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on March 02, 2009
    Excellent, as always.

    Turns out I hadn't read the previous chapter, either, so I got to have a really decent length's read (:

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  • From Church on March 02, 2009
    Woot its been awhile since I last read any of your updates and you have two! When will slash be able to bust out all that dark energy within him hte seeds of anger and doubt cloud his mind and can come up again easily if the slighest harm or well disconnection from Psymakio happens. I would definetlly see what would happen if he went nutz. Crawdaunt fuck ye! I like the intro with Flannery and her Blaziken that dude is one bad ass mother fucker. Overall good job dude but...when shall there be more smut!?
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  • From ANON - SF on February 28, 2009
    Sweet!!! You just get better and better in each chapter, Slash! Keep them rolling!
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  • From ANON - Nona on February 27, 2009
    Wow. I must say that the latest chapter is perhaps the best yet. I really think that things are going to get even more exciting from here, and you certainly are able to deliver on that front. Interesting to see crawdaunt's evolution and what all it entailed, and obviously I'm curious as to what exactly Flannery is doing out here, and what she has to say to Slash. Great work, and I can't wait for the next update; keep 'em coming!

    --Nona
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  • From Bishonen on February 26, 2009
    Awesome chapter so many good points so im only going to say a few things about two of them

    1.When Graveler hit Slash the first thing that popped into y head was “Shut Up Bitch.”

    2.With the threat of haveing Slash's arms ripped of the only way anything could happen with Flannery would have to be in a one-shot.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae


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  • From RichardH on February 26, 2009
    man, I'm glad I don't have friends like that Graveler..... either way, huge success on this chapter
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  • From daveb on February 26, 2009
    Spectacular as always. I'm glad to see Blaziken appear. Best Pokemon EVER (with Gardevoir, Lucario and Staraptor coming close seconds).

    I may have to write my own serious story featuring those at some stage.
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