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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From ANON - david on October 30, 2008
    dude... awesome
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  • From Bishonen on October 27, 2008
    I've got a new chapter for Garderotica i'm doing my own take on human pokemon lovers it's more fluffy but has nowhere near as much plot but who cares Lesbain Gardevoir porn!!!!

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - eth on October 25, 2008
    YOU NEED TO MAKE SLASH LIVE. I DON'T CARE HOW MUCH DEUS EX MACHINA YOU HAVE TO EMPLOY BUT DAMN IT THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO HAVE THIS HAPPEN.
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  • From Perfect Purity on October 14, 2008
    Perfect Purity here, bringing you a nerdy Poke-fact:

    It's true that Ralts can't learn Psywave in any game, so that would have to be changed, but moves can be passed down through parents (breeding); namely, the father. It's possible that Psymakio's father knew Teleport (even if he was a Gallade, he was a Ralts first) and passed that move to his daughter, so having a newborn Teleporting Ralts is perfectly fine. :D

    And new chapter by Halloween? Sweet. Can't wait. :D
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  • From joseph33759 on October 06, 2008
    Hello, seems like you've been busy with this story I'm glad, I like this story very much however I hope that Slash finds the loophole in that deal there always is one. It is a proven fact about that lol

    anyway I like where you are coming from about the darkness and light not being inherently what everyone thinks of them(evil and good respectfully) but rather the intent behind them
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  • From Bishonen on September 30, 2008
    This made me think of the desert

    http://rhemora.deviantart.com/art/sexy-Gardevoir-93638934

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From RoboRed on September 30, 2008
    I just hope he makes the Christmas special this time. I was so looking forward to it last year, and was totally bummed out when he didn't have time for it. :(
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  • From thecakenator on September 29, 2008
    :(
    Looks like I will have to wait a bit longer for my Sinners fix. I can live with Halloween, though... I'll just have to put aside a few hours for reading it, heh
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on September 25, 2008
    Aaaany time now Slash D
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  • From ANON - 3AM on September 19, 2008
    Ummm... it was implied, but I just today, read everything posted in your account, I had a free day and 250k word stories only last me about two days, so your work to date didn't last me very long... Now you have not yet satiated my appetite for moar!! I have become addicted; that is the only reason I ever review... but again, good stuff, I just can't ignore the problems even if I will tolerate them.
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  • From ANON - 3AM on September 19, 2008
    Warning: This review is serious, I will criticize your writing skills, but please finish it.

    So today, I wondered over here after stumbling across the Encyclopedia Dramatica article about the Author. Needless to say, I expected to find plenty of horrible prose, tired themes, recycled characters, and poor plot advancement. I found all of that, plus convenient events and lanterns hung over every plot element. Pretty much, no Mary Sues, I can't really decide if your antagonist is a Larry Stu, but at least Slash isn't one yet, I'll see after you delve deeper into his new ability involving 'dark cores'. So what I found was dreck dreck dreck! However, it also contains two of my guilty pleasures: Fluffy, angst filled romance and Pokemon. Now I don't doubt your writing ability, I am willing to believe that you simply crank out ideas as fast as you can to stay on track and release it ASAP for the benefit of your fan base. I absolutely love your characters, and I am enthralled by the story you are telling, as an English major in my second year, I can't really offer you helpful critiques or potential improvements to help you, because I don't think you are focusing on your writing, but rather your story. Besides, this is Adult Fanfiction, I don't think many people come here for quality prose... :) I would like to make a suggestion, I think that you would benefit as a writer by simultaneously posting your Sinners stories at the regular Fanfiction dot net website, the community there is a bit more helpful with literary issues, and is just as friendly. In closing I would like to offer my services as a Beta for you. I am very ardent about my offer! I can read, revise and return to you, 22,000 word updates one hour after I begin to read. I only have my classes, a weekend radio show, and a Chess club to run. My services will be available almost 20 hours a day, seven days a week. It is my wish to truly help you make this story something beyond enthralling; something that can leave a legacy.

    ~3AM @ FFN
    My 'dealing with strangers' email, that I still check: drmemenzo@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - Shade on September 16, 2008
    Haha, I just got done reading (read: skimming) Slash's ED article. The whole thing is nothing but TL;DR raging. If anyone here gets upset about it, I feel sorry for them. Really, to think that someone would take the time to write it, obsessively keep an eye on reviews and take the time to sift through the ENTIRE STORY to find pieces to quote that somehow cast Slash's writing in a bad light... well, the whole thing is laughable.

    Someone has a grudge against our dear author here, and their only outlet is Encyclopedia Dramatica. Really, it got a chuckle out of me. The guy who can't write an article without taking cheap jabs, quoting parts of the story out of context and using 4chan slang every other sentence... is complaining about Slash's writing ability? Someone who's written a story hundreds of thousands of words long? lol.

    Don't get upset over it. Don't feel the need to defend Slash, defending against a 4chan blowhard isn't even needed because no one should care.
    --
    To Slash: I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter from one of my top thee favorite authors (you).
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  • From Bishonen on September 10, 2008
    This is my comment

    http://encyclopediadramatica.com/Image:Sinners_Incomprehensible_Fan.jpg

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Hallation on September 06, 2008
    >Zannthebored
    Look about ten comments up. Already been mentioned.

    >Robo
    You won't get an ED article to be re-writ, anyway.
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  • From RoboRed on September 06, 2008
    Woowwwww...
    Just wow...

    I could unleash a barrage of angry comments and request that the article be edited due to tilted viewpoint...but I won't. I have so many other things to do right now. Stuff such as college, my job, upgrading my computer, fixing up the car, extracurriculars with my buddies...stuff that makes me realize how much more of a life I have than the schmuck who wrote this article. Besides, he's just some squeaking little pinhead who just wants attention. I say we deny it to him. >:D
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