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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle

From ANON - Zannthebored on September 06, 2008
DEAREST ARCEUS!

Browsing through Encyclopedia Dramatica today, I found an article about Slash himself. Not only was it offensive towards him, but it was probably written by Jack Nativity (mind you, I'm going on a few hints in the article, so it might not be).
http://encyclopediadramatica.com/Slash_Firestorm
Read and be totally appalled. Or shocked. Or enraged. Or anything.
I don't mean any offense by posting this, I just think it ought to be known to all fans.
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From ANON - Jirachian in the pit on September 02, 2008
Hello is anyone out there i'm not dead just in a lot of pain can somone lower a rope so i can get out of here and punish the person who wrote this sinful story
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From ANON - Max on September 01, 2008
Well Slash, been a while... (cough) so how's that chapter comin'?
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From RoboRed on September 01, 2008
Lol...someone had to do it eventually...I knew it. :P
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From ANON - Hallation on September 01, 2008
REVIEWERS!
TONIGHT
WE DINE
IN HOENN!

300 reviews and counting.

THIS
IS
SINNERS!
*Kicks a Jirachian down a pit*
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From ANON - argentum on August 31, 2008
What can I say...except wow, this rocks. I'm no unskilled writer myself, and this looks well put together. Looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.
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From Iota on August 26, 2008
Hey hey.

Well, I didn't like my 19,000+ word chapter before I posted it...so I deleted it completely. Anyway, I just published the second version, 21,000+ Words, and now I have breathing room...Yikes.

This chapter hit hard emotion wise, which is a very difficult thing to write, for me anyway. It'd be tough sitting down and writing realistic reactions to something like this, and your ability to do so is off the charts. Excellent Chapter, a great, even theatrical twist thrown in there, and of course, a dose of humor.

Honestly, when I write, I try to bring my chapters and writing skill up to par with yours, and that's not an easy thing to do. Heh.

All the best, and great job.
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From CrazyIvan on August 18, 2008
Alright, I deleted my last three in a row review spree, and went ahead and combined them all together right here, no edits. No need to have them adding three short reviews for random posts.

Review A
Yet another good, quite long chapter, congrats, you've created a chapter longer than some stories, and a quarter the size of the first chapter in my, well, what I'm now calling "My Epic"

Anyways, I read ED artical, I'll admit, I laughed, I think I also randomly god banned from 4chan because I started spam posting a bunch of Demolition truck thumbnails when I was bored and didn't have anything better to do. The ED artical was in bad taste, but they always are. Just ignore it. Luckily I found nothing about me on ED, which is a good thing, I might have had to call in someone to "Take care" of it.

Anyways, great chapter, continue on as I'll always be watching, from the screen, and from the sky.

This is CrazyIvan, signing off, semper phi, carry on...

Review B
Okay, I'm almost positive I had made a review on the cacturn chapter than involved questioning how Slash was so efficient at QCB. It's not like you can just pick up a knife and start killing stuff in an effective way (not just repeated stabbing), but it appears to have gone missing.

Also, I guess I wasn't paying attention, and I don't even know if you're still here, but Jack, Jack Nativity.
I have to give you applause, while I may agree on some points, and disagree on others, I have to hand it to you, that is the longest piece of constructive critisism I have ever seen.

And while there does seem to be alot of dues ex machina going on, it is Slash's story, and he does what he want with it.

I'll admit some of the things are cliche, but what isn't these days? My fic is a government agent kicking ass, there is absolutely nothing orignal about that what so ever. On top of that, he rescues an undercover, hot agent chick, and bangs her. IT'S LIKE A FUCKING JAMES BOND MOVIE FOR FUCKS SAKE! (Although in fairness, the chick is based of my own ex girl-friend, [funnily enough, I find Rhett Olson as my Western counterpart in most of my fanfictions, and my own self as, well, me. I tend to reuse names and characters quite often, and it seems to work out well enough)

My point is, in this day an age, there isn't much orignality left to go around, which is why I work so damn hard on my epic, and it's still full of non-originality.

Alright, anyways, trying this again.

Semper phi, carry on...

PS, Slash, if I find out you delete this review, I'll drop a tungsten rod on your house. I'm not really critisizing you, but you do tend to over react a bit. Just try and work on that, and no, I won't use a joker line, because the new batman movie is just (tilts hand back and forth). Also, needs more jet powered super car batmobile, not look it's a fucking battank.

Review lol 3
LOL 3RD REVIEW IN A ROW

Sorry, with a bit of quick CTRL+F ing I found the review, guess i missed it on the run through of the reviews there.

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From Bishonen on August 18, 2008
To RoboRed

I saw that pic a long tim ago and this story wasthe first thing I thought of i agree with you 100% it could totally be her.

Oh and Slash if there is no update soon i still have the flounder and it�s staring to rot so getting slapped by it will be even worse now.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From RoboRed on August 17, 2008
Switching gears for a moment, I was re-reading the most recent two chapters, and I remembered this picture:

http://agnph.com/gallery/albums/userpics/14282/normal_sir2chbyuranoyoruWarriors.png

Possibly Miyako fighting The Shadow and its offspring?
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From ANON - ConcernedReader on August 17, 2008
Wow, I read the ED article and that was pretty ridiculous. I am sorry, but I had to toss some lulz at it a couple times, the gaudy epic style the thing was written in was just kinda hilarious. Ive been reading your story on and off since you began Arc 2, after a friend said I should take a look at it, and Ive been pleased by your work ever since. I don't wanna add another 80 million paragraph pixel wasting discourse to the book that is your review page. SO I would like to say to not let those sickening idiots in the world ruin your literary morale. You don't seem to be the type to get discouraged by people, but just in case, regardless of how much ED and those TRUE retarded stinging hornets that are internet trolls hate you. We at AFF love yah, amirite?. You keep chugging them out and we'll keep reading them. I wouldn't want a bunch of irritating people and their superfluous comments get you flustered. -My regards. Concerned reader
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From ANON - ssbn732 on August 17, 2008
Great chapter, I might add however, the first part of it put me back on a path for depresion, a path I finaly thought I was off.

I dont know weather to hug you or slap you, either way, keep up the great work.
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From Stormborn Apostle on August 16, 2008
Max---Finished outlining it, currently 5000 words in.

Anon---lol, I was seriously considering signing up to AFF with a 'female' pen name, since I was intending to write quite a bit of romance stuff, but decided against it. I ain't ashamed of being a romance writer...I write plenty of lemon stuff to balance it out, in any case.

Although, if I ever write an original romance for publishing, I might insist on a female pen name, lol.

Serebii and Bulbapedia are the only sources of fourth-gen data that I got. By the time I can afford a DS and Diamond/Pearl/Platinum, the fifth generation will be out. :-(

And yeah, someone informed me about it, lol.

Hallation---Now, now. It was someone else who threatened to write it (though I don't remember who, and it might have been another incarnation of another spammer). Besides, like I said, I'm flattered---I've been an ED fan for a long while, and the fact that someone actually gave enough a shit to sit down and write something about me is a testament to my fame/infamy (either one suits me fine). Like above anon said, any publicity is good publicity.

Ragdoll---I try to fight my muse for the bad stuff (though I usually lose), but thankfully it's not stupid enough to kill the male protagonist in Arc 2, lol. Now, are other character deaths in the cards? Yes, I can outright say that now. But considering my update pace, it'll be a long ways away. :-D
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From ANON - Ragdoll on August 16, 2008
Wow, that article must have taken a lot of time an effort.

And yeah, I was hoping you had a way to pull Slash out of it. As a musician, I understand that your muse pretty much dictates everything, but killing off a member of the trinity so quickly might be, for want of a lesser cliche, "killing the golden goose".
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From ANON - Hallation on August 16, 2008
Regarding that ED article..

Christ, I stay out of INTERNET FIGHTS, but bloody hell...

Jack Nativity is fucking butthurt more than a shota raped by a bull walrus. Honestly. Let the shitty writer keep writing shitty. Some people like shit.
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