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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle

From dooomdude on April 19, 2008
Still loving it Slash! Cant wait for the next chapter! Hope its Soon!
Oh made this the other day, thought you would like it...

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From xain34 on March 31, 2008
The rant above is not to be taken seriously people. -_-
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From ANON - Hsda Mk. II on March 30, 2008
Hm, interesting.
Some general questions, though;
1. Have you ever played Exalted? Because the relationship between Psymakio and Slash, especially with the description of their 'auras' in your one-shot, resembles the Solar-Lunar bond, and the previous mention of auras makes it sound like Slash is a Twilight. There's also the general 'flashbacks' with the described "Dark warrior strength held in check etc etc" which calls to Exalted's reincarnation cycle and an Exalt's tendancy to experience visions from their previous selves. Or maybe it's all a big coincidence.
2. Is Jirachi actually going to show up? Because I'd find that hilarious.
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From xain34 on March 30, 2008
"Xain---Do not underestimate Kiako. While he may not be a god, I have a tendency to finish that statement with 'not yet' for a reason."

And you don't seem to get that there's more to my character Steven then meets the eye. ^_^

If Kiako can take down three legendaries on his own. And not even break a sweat then i'll shut my mouth. XD

But in all seriousness if your guy isn't up to the task i'll use what's called a time relapse and slap myself while I GET OFF my fucking ass and kill Kiako for you. O_o

I MAKE NO SINCE I AM LAW! XD

And I like the....uh...Anniversey special? I think...My internets kind of fucked up so I may not beable to respond for awhile. O_o;

Bye for now Slash, and good luck on the next chapter. And you owe me 20$...>_>
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From Stormborn Apostle on March 30, 2008
Imasuky Lomae---Heheh.

Anonymoose---The beginning chapters aren't nearly as good, as I was still getting into the groove back then (I hadn't been writing for years when I began Sinners). I've been toying with the idea of re-writing them, or at least heavily editing them, but...I don't know. We'll see.

If you want to know more about Kiako and other characters, you (or anyone) should sign up for the Sinners Mailing List. I've already sent out an e-mail or two that have shed some light on Kiako...whether the readers know it or not. ;-)

And yeah, of course the desert won't be easy. I didn't stick a long "watch the fuck out" scene in there for nothing, heh.

I just uploaded the anniversary special; there are currently no oneshots on my schedule, and there may not be for some time. The past month has been very hectic with my writing, and I want to relax for a bit before I go back to Sinners. Oneshots will happen on a whenever-I-feel-like-it basis; the only one that I know I'll do is a Christmas special this winter.

Shadow---I've been getting kind of sloppy with review responding lately, heh. I'll need to shape up on that.

I would love to have a relationship with a Psymakio-like character, myself. I really don't have a lot of love for humans (which reflects pretty clearly in my writing), particularly with the issues of hypocrisy and corruption...to meet someone who is beyond such crap would be a blessing.

Dante Inferna---Considering that Slash is slowly becoming enhanced by the effects of the mating bond, such an event might be more dangerous than you would think.

GenoLiger---Actually, Animal That I Have Become kind of applies more to Kiako than Slash...which will become evident as more of Kiako's life story is revealed.

I may update Janus in the near future...it's a lot less stressful than Sinners work, heh.

Hsda Mk. II---I'm glad you like it. With the portrayal of humanity, it is indeed mostly negative. Humanity is pretty dark (and in my view, most dark). Slash grapples with the same problem, and, after a terrible experience that shakes the group to its core, he will find himself asking the question "should I bother saving a world that is so corrupt and cruel?" His answer will define the path that Sinners eventually takes.

There are good people---Watson, namely, and more will be coming as the story progresses---but one thing you'll notice as the story goes on is that, while many people are indeed cruel, there are no characters that are utterly, irredeemably evil. The people of Hoenn are not dark by nature, but are instead corrupted by centuries of bigotry and foolishness that was started long ago...in an event that significantly shapes the story. The question of whether or not humanity can be redeemed is one of the key themes in Sinners, and not even I know the answer to that question. Not yet.

Xain---Do not underestimate Kiako. While he may not be a god, I have a tendency to finish that statement with 'not yet' for a reason.

Satoku---MAGIC
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From Satoku on March 28, 2008
That's so unrealistic. How come neither of them ever have to pee immediately after waking up?

But I jest :P. Very well written story, I'm hooked and waiting for the next chapter.
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From xain34 on March 28, 2008
Alright Slash, if your character dies in the story without being able to take out that fucker Kiako. I'LL pick up the peices and finish the fucker off myself. XD

You know I got the character that can do it too. O_o
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From ANON - Hsda Mk. II on March 25, 2008
Wow, I am absolutely floored by this beautiful story. I absolutely love the characters, and the relationship is incredible. I really can't describe it, but it's my second absolute favorite fanfiction ever, and I've read hundreds of incredible stories.

The only thing I don't like is the dark portrayal of Humanity. I prefer to see it that Humanity is on all points of the scale of Light and Dark, if such scales are real, because everything known to be bad and everything known to be good has come from Humanity.
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From ANON - GenoLiger on March 22, 2008
Well I'm back.I liked the most recent chapter.THe perfect song for if Slash is overcome3 by rage is "Animal I have become". It even has a lyric realting to slash's Dark Heart.Well I'm gonna be anticipating the Sinners aniversary One-shot.Well Goodbye for now.I'll see you all on Brawl.Also As Mugen from Samurai Champloo said "I'll take all you bitches on"(One of my all time favorite quotes).

PS.I find the janus story very intresting.
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From DanteInferna on March 20, 2008
I wonder what happens when that 'RAGE' door comes off...?
Something fun to watch, thats for sure.
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From ANON - Shadow on March 20, 2008
I wrote the same review for your prior section of the story, but since it seems like there haven't been a lot in the last couple months there, I figured I'd copy it here too.

You really do have an amazing story. What interests me isn't the sex, or the main plot, but the way you describe the bond and love between the two. Eeven as a very secretive person, I can understand how interesting a psychic bond could be, what with the feedback, and everything about your soul exposed. Plus, I'm not completely attracted to my own species(or any other, for that matter), so the idea of having a relationship with a creature similar, but different, more innocent and free of humanity's cancerous touch, like a beacon of light really, makes it sound even more wonderful.
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From ANON - Anonymoose on March 17, 2008
Woo-hoo! It's back! And welcome back!

I'll be honest with you, I think this is the first chapter of Sinners I really allll the way through. Most other chapters I've skimmed, especially at the beginning of the series, but now I'm really hooked. I should probably go back and re-read some chapters so I'd find out what's Kiako's story with his body.

Looking forward to the adventures in the desert. Team Slash was warned about the dangerous Pokemon within the desert. Of course, that HAS to mean they're going to get into huge trouble with said Pokemon. Poor team got jinxed, heh.

And now I have to wait next month for the next chapter. Nooooo! Ah well. I haven't read the other reviews yet, so I probably am just repeating someone else's question -- any hints as to what the next one-shot will be about?
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From Bishonen on March 17, 2008
Here's a gift for Psymaiko's birthday

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CG5Iv8VE1hM

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on March 17, 2008
Xain---If I remember correctly, those little veggie-monsters had a power level of 1200 each. You need to get stronger if you want to stand a chance against those freaky little fucks.

Araquiell---Heh, it seems people like dialogue. Whew. I have been pleasantly surprised by the reception to 20. Although I can't be sure about anything in Sinners until it's been written, the next few chapters should go action, dialogue, action/dialogue, END OF THE FUCKING WORLD. :-D

Not literally, of course, but...I'm very eager to get to the Fallarbor confrontation. I think everyone's gonna be surprised with what I've got in store for them. Some crazy shit is gonna go down. ^_^
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From ANON - Araquiell on March 14, 2008
WOOHOO! another chapter! I really enjoyed this one as well, I don't mind that it was a lot of dialogue, I think you're doing an amazing job on this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, everything's getting very exciting. I do like how you've gone and put a bunch of information about things like the desert and all that, really makes the storyline and the challenges they face seem much more real.
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