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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Stormborn Apostle on February 25, 2008
CrazyIvan---Things will continue to develop in the next chapter (which looks like it'll ACTUALLY BE ON TIME, OMG), although much more action will occur in chapter 21, when the team crosses the desert.

Incidentally, in my notes, I always refer to Slash and his Pokemon as "Slash's Pack", and I'll be trying to work that into the story itself as a title for them. As Slash develops, he and Psymakio will continued to be viewed as "alphas" by the other Pokemon, and they'll end up more like a pack or family than a trainer/Pokemon team.

One of my fans who I talk to on my livejournal made that avatar for me...I like it because it's not just a picture of a Gardevoir, but of Psymakio in particular---how I envision her to look. I know that y'all probably can't tell a difference, but the girl in that picture? That is exactly how you should envision Psymakio. Small and sweet and cute, heh.

It's also the first fan art anyone's ever made for me. I am humbled...
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From Stormborn Apostle on February 19, 2008
Imasuky Lomae---Heh, awesome. I invented a word! Great success!

GenoLiger---Glad you liked Afterglow, heh. Good luck on your story---the first one is always hardest (and it's always the least polished). When I look back on some of my early work and compare it with where I am today, I'm a little ashamed, lol.

In case anyone is interested, I uploaded an avatar today (you can view my profile to see it): a cute little picture of Psymakio that one of my readers made for me. Hooray for fan art! ^_^
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From ANON - GenoLiger on February 17, 2008
I liked the oneshot. Also I'm writing a story too. but it's a naruto fanfiction.Started yesterday.I have no idea how long it will be but it's gonna be my first.Oh and about the Bret thing Bret is my real first name and I use it when I make a character in a game as my name. I decided to use Genoliger because it's a combination of both my favorite zoids.Well I might be done with the first chapter of my story in about a week. So if anyone could beta read for me i would be really happy.
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From Bishonen on February 16, 2008
I looked around use a few differnt sites and you are the only person to use the word Garderotica.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on February 16, 2008
Time for me to sit down for about an hour and reply to these reviews, huh? :-D

GenoLiger---No comment, heh. I'll probably send out another plotmail soon, though...

CrazyIvan---Sinners doesn't follow the manga at all---namely because I've never read it---and only has a basic link with the games (primarily third gen). Slash comes from Oldale, not Littleroot, and he is not supposed to be the protagonist from R/S/E. The basic rules of the games are followed---although some of them will be bent, of course, and purely game mechanic things like move limits will be ignored.

Xain---OVER 9000!!!!!!!

Imasuky Lomae---You wanna know something neat? I think I invented the word Garderotica. Kind of hard to believe, considering how hot Gardevoir is and how easy the words fit together, but all google results for the word come back to me using it. So it's either something I coined, or it's hidden really well, heh.

It is important to note, however, that google does not seem to return search results for anything on AFF (the dicks), so it's possible other uses of the term are just on sites that google has blacklisted.

trecers---Not to the best of my knowledge. This story is set in Hoenn, and fourth generation Pokemon will be relatively rare---particularly legendary ones. Although there are a few exceptions to that, too...

Josh Palmer---You're right to be worried. The world is not safe, especially not for two lovers in a forbidden relationship, and their enemies are powerful and numerous. I have not decided on an ending for the story yet, but one thing is for certain: if the two survive their adventure, they will not emerge unscathed.

The story will lead us all to places far darker than I'd like to go. But I have no choice; my muse has ruled, and my die has been cast. I caution all those who continue to read Sinners to be ready for tragedy at any turn---just as in real life, you may not see it coming.

Hell, I may not even see it coming.

Will Kiako betray Giovanni? Kukuku, more on Kiako in chapter 20.

Reo690---I CAN'T :'(

Did you know that some penguins have a surprisingly high rate of bisexuality?

Xain---Steven was so awesome in Ruby/Sapphire. Shame they had to make him an optional fight in Emerald. Bleh.

Imasuky Lomae---Gardevoir yuri is hot.

Psymakio might have a little girl-girl action at some point...in a oneshot, though. :3

Negativety101---I know. A lot easier to edit for me, too. We'll probably be in trouble again by the end of arc 2, especially with the chapters being so much bigger than they were in the first arc. Balls.

Imasuky Lomae---Whether it is or it isn't, it is in Sinners. Or at least close to being one, heh.

Tai---Indeed. Whenever I mention fourth-gen Pokemon, remember that I do NOT own Diamond or Pearl and I do NOT watch the anime, and am going completely by Serebii.net, heh.

Zendragan52793---Glad you like it, but you don't have to worry about it ending anytime soon, heh. We still have a LONG way to go.

Xain---February 14th. Incidentally, I got my passport on the 12th---long story, but I'm not a completely certified U.S. citizen, haha. I will be soon, though...

Negativety101---I just posted the Valentine's special (a wee bit late, lol), and yeah, it's happy. No angst or anything. So yay.

Imasuky Lomae---Oh fuck, long review. OKAY:

The earlier chapters of Sinners don't really compare to the later in terms of quality, although I probably will not re-write any of them. I may, at some time, do some editing of some key scenes---the Jirachian Intro scene, for instance---but no complete re-writes. Too much work, too many views, and too easy to fuck something up and forget a key plot point that will confuse new readers if missed.

I also think that Ralts/Kirlia's evolution and development was a little quick...but, then again, it's not SUPPOSED to be human-like development. She doesn't go from child to teenager to adult gradually because it's not her way---part of the fun in writing for Psymakio is that she's NOT human, and I have to write her in an entirely different---yet still identifiable---manner.

While much of the story wasn't planned out early on, a lot was, and I did leave lots of little hints and foreshadows in the earlier chapters (which is another reason I wouldn't attempt complete re-writes, don't wanna lose them), and some of them---but not all---have become clearer lately. What Kiako wants Gardevoir for, though...that's yet to be revealed. All I will say is that it's not going to be good.

Wanna know something funny? Maxie died because I didn't like him. My muse let me have my way with him, and I ended up not having much of a personality for him, so...adios, Maxie. I could have had him captured and jailed, but nope---Maxie is the first significant Sinners character for me to kill off INTENTIONALLY, without my muse's demand.

Watson, now, he's an example of the exact opposite. I knew he'd show up early on, but it wasn't until I started writing him that I realized that my muse wanted the old man to be a major character. The personality flowed naturally, and the games' ambiguity about the characters allowed for me to craft whatever backstory I wanted. His past with the Magmas will be revisited in the present soon or later---ka like a wheel---and he may pay for his sins...or he may be redeemed.

Or both.

Gardevoir learning to read was another of those little bonus moments for me. It's just so cute, although I personally like "popcorns" and "what is a porn tapes" more, heh. Incidentally, the "I could read the tablet" snippet isn't a cop-out---there is a reason, and it will be explained in time.

I am also proud about the first real sex scene being in chapter 16---and you all waited patiently (although some of you were a bit grumbly, lol) for the big mating event. I think that says something about this story...no one can claim that it's nothing more than meaningless smut, because I got the audience to stay interested for sixteen chapters before having the characters going all the way---and the first even quasi-sex scene was in chapter 13, which is still quite the wait.

Slash and Gardevoir will never have a master-slave relationship, and never will their bedroom life drift into S&M. The issues of dominance and submission will be rather light, although it WILL develop over time. I don't know exactly where they'll end up, but I do know where they won't end up---never will they bring pain or excessive force into things. It's just not their thing, lol.

More on the Interloper, and the other Voice, in the next chapter.

As for Slash's role in his destiny...well, there are three main themes of Sinners: love, redemption, and faith. Whether the themes falter or shine, and whether Slash can command one or all or any of them, is yet to be seen.

The Song is ENORMOUSLY important, even if it does not seem so---remember it. Just because the chapter is a short interlude, written on a whim, doesn't mean it's not important. In fact, it's those chapters, the ones that pop out of my mind fully-formed and outside of an outline, that show the true heart of the story.

While I still don't think that I write battles very well, I am glad at the outcome. Slash's pack is shown to be a powerful and innovative team, but not invincible by any means.

As for the Gym stuff...I don't go by exact size measurements, heh (all the Pokemon of a species wouldn't be the same size, anyway). I view Xatu as being the size of, say, a large hunting falcon. The Dewford Gym didn't have many special protections---no shields---because of the low level of the Pokemon making the chance of spectator injury negligible (plus the Xatu would monitor the situation). Watson's Pokemon are so powerful that they must fight in a highly-controlled station by necessity.

Sidney---and possibly all the Elite Four members---will make an appearance eventually. They may not be fighting against a trainer, however...

Anyway, the Halloween Special...yeah, the image you get from that is cute. Gardie might be developed like an adult, but her experiences with human culture are on the level of a child---letting her experience some of these little niceties.

I would like to see a sugar-crazed, hyperactive Gardevoir myself...she could have gotten so hyper that she'd force Slash down and lick HIM. :-D

Now, ASH RAPE---in the Sinners continuity, Ash is sitting in jail somewhere, convicted of---among many things---Pokemon abuse. But I can imagine his charges being much more broad...falsifying his Pokemon records (Volt Tackle, my ass), using illegal methods to power up Pokemon (that water wheel bullshit), forgetting to feed his fucking critters...

He is an ass, and he had it coming...IN HIS ASS. :-O

Bret---Move lists have been planned out for a while, set by events and not specific levels or anything, heh. Some moves are on the list that they'll never use---and other moves cannot normally be used by them (but it would be believable if they were, so...).

Tai---Yep. Slash's blossoming abilities will never reach the point where he can fight like a Pokemon. He'll have some gifts, yeah, but never will Slash Psybeam someone. He's much more inclined to just beat the crap out of them or shank them.

GenoLiger---Why cum ON her, when you can cum IN her? :-D

anonymous---Alts? In my AFF?

It's more likely than you think.

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RoboRed---All readers must learn this like it was a physical constant of the universe: I fail at deadlines. Always. I am much more likely to pull an unannounced chapter out of thin air than I am to finish something on time. My self-imposed deadlines are always wrong.

As for chapter 20...all I will say is that it'll be sooner rather than later. I have a surprise oneshot coming up in the near-ish future, but I do plan for 20 to be out before then.

Remember to check your mail for updates and plotmails! If anyone wants to be put on the mailing list, send an e-mail to me at slashfirestorm@inbox.com!
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From RoboRed on February 06, 2008
Well on one note, I don't really recall Slash ever giving specific deadlines...>_>

However, he said in the e-mail he sent out that he's juuust not quite finished with chapter 20, but he's getting to work on a Valentine's Day oneshot. :)
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From ANON - anonymous on February 06, 2008
Bret 2008-02-06 id # 3000046853
Umm the seed bomb part wasn't a attack per se. Read a few reviews above and you will see what I mean. Like one suggested water sport for gardevoir. Seed Bomb basically has too do with when slash cums on gardevoir.

GenoLiger 2008-02-06 id # 3000046854
Umm the seed bomb part wasn't a attack per se. Read a few reviews above and you will see what I mean. Like one suggested water sport for gardevoir. Seed Bomb basically has too do with when slash cums on gardevoir.

Oh ho ho, this is interesting. Bret and GenoLiger's posts are identical... I wonder what this means....

But just to prevent this from being spam; does anyone have an idea when Chapter 20 is supposed to come out? Slash never even gave us a general deadline, that I know of at least....
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From ANON - GenoLiger on February 06, 2008
Umm the seed bomb part wasn't a attack per se. Read a few reviews above and you will see what I mean. Like one suggested water sport for gardevoir. Seed Bomb basically has too do with when slash cums on gardevoir.
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From ANON - Bret on February 06, 2008
Umm the seed bomb part wasn't a attack per se. Read a few reviews above and you will see what I mean. Like one suggested water sport for gardevoir. Seed Bomb basically has too do with when slash cums on gardevoir.
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From ANON - Tai on February 05, 2008
Bret, what would be the point of Psymakio learning Focus Blast or Healing Wish? While I could see Healing Wish possibly being useful, Recover would be much more effective, and Focus Blast is hardly an intuitive choice. And even working within solely 'statistical' parameters, Focus Blast suffers a lack of STAB, a pathetic accuracy, and a low range of viable targets compared to the much more efficient and potent psychic attacks Psymakio can wield.

As for Slash learning Pokemon attacks... He's a human. Last I checked humans have one huge advantage over Pokemon anyway - humans can make their own weapons and defenses. Such as, say, Pokeballs? The only reason Slash would possibly want a Pokemon attack for is to deal with humans - and it's better to just learn how to use a knife and shiv them instead, or pick up a martial art or two and crack some skulls together. Don't even get me started on guns...
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From ANON - Bret on February 03, 2008
Oh for attacks you could've had her learn Focus Blast. It's a fighting SPECIAL type move. Oh and did you know she can learn Healing wish? oh and there's a attack slash can learn even though he's a human Seed Bomb.
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From Bishonen on February 03, 2008
Originally I was going to post it after you posted the new chapter or the one shot but I got impatient so I put it up right now.

I got bored and decided to re-read everything in a lot of the early chapters you apologized for taking so long to update and yet you still take forever and I agree with you the early chapters aren�ft quit as good as some of the newer stuff but their still some of the best written things on the site oh and by going back I�fve realized a few things plot wise that I overlooked before small foreshadows that only recently started to make sense I�fm beginning to understand more about what Kiako meant when he said that Gardevoir could be what they need.

Not a whole lot to say about the first few chapters other than what I started with but the thing with the Aqua grunts was intense it helped to show just how ruthless Kiako really is and the conversation with Birney also really drove home how much darker the story is than the games or anime that the teams are willing to kill hundreds of people just for there goals.

As for the Birds and the Bees chapter I think that Kirlia asking it seemed very believable I can understand it after all for her that was a teenage stage in her life and that�fs typical when an individual gets curious about it.

The night where Kirlia was looking in the magazine was so cute and funny I loved how Growlithe surprised her I�fm sure that if Slash had caught her the story would have ended right than because she would have died of embarrassment.

During the battle with Maxie I couldn�ft help but think about the phrase The needs of the many out way the needs of the few. I still really wonder which one of them started the dream or if it was either one some greater force might have sparked it and their own desires took over afterwards.

And I love how with each evolution Gardevoir got more mature especially her final stage where she became so adult and funny I loved how she teased Slash when he first woke up. And I completely agree with everything that Slash said about rape it�fs one of the worst acts that can be done there is no excuse for it ever I just loved how real made the emotions in that conversation.

And the part where they talked about the mating process I could feel all of Gardevoir�fs worries and concerns whenever love someone it�fs always tough to think about what would happen if they left you no matter how close you get there will always be a least some fear of rejection. But the thing that got to me the most was the fact that without the improved bond that her lifespan would only be twenty years at most to only be with the one you love for such a short time would be unfair especially since they have to keep it so secret.

When Watson first showed up I had no idea how deep of a past he would have the Burning of the beach was just so horrible it�fs easy to understand why he would leave after being involved in something so awful I�fm sure that his wife would have never wanted him to join Magma if there had been any inkling that they would do something that terrible. But aside form that Watson was just plain great there were so many funny moment with him from figuring out what they�fd down while he was shopping to offering advice and of course his littlie present for Gardevoir at the hotel I hope that Flannery adds at least a fraction of the plot that the old man did.

The scene where Slash was teaching Gardevoir to read had to one of the cutest fucking things I�fve ever thought of and when she corrected his grammar I laughed out loud the next cutest thing is the thought of her growling at every girl who gets near him I would love to have a Gardevoir doll that growls when you push a button I�fd carry it every where and sleep with it in my arms whenever I went to bed just like Slash and his Teddiursa.

One thing that still amazes me is how long it took for the actual sex scene to happen sure there was some rubbing and Gardevoir getting the lollipop treatment but still no real penetration for the longest time I mean here on Aff just about everything is sex or sex after a few chapters but you waited a very long time and I gotta say it was well worth it it took a long time and there wasn�ft as much as there could have been but still it was some of the best sex I ever read and as good as it was I�fm actually willing to wait for it in-between plot development chapters which I just can�ft wait for.

Just a littlie something else to say even though the anal scene was as hot as it was loving it wasn�ft really all that submissive writing loving S&M isn�ft easy but it can be done being rough and forceful but and the same time letting the sub know that it�fs done out of love do some research and you might be able to make something that truly shows a master slave relationship. Also just as a note the lube he used made me think of something I once said to a friend was a joke it was �gYou smell like strawberries and butt sex.�h

And as for who the interloper is I have some new theories all of which point to the prophecy I�fm not saying anything more because I�fm still working it out in my mind as to just what it is but the fact the Gardevoir could read the tablet with no prior knowledge of how to read just goes to show the she has some king of connection with it as does Slash even if he doesn�ft believe in a God there�fs no denying that something is guiding his fate as well as that of everyone he meets.

As for the Thunderbolt TM that Slash gave her I think that was a great choice just to bad for him the attack Miracle Eye wasn�ft available it renders Dark types vulnerable to Psychic type moves which would be great.

The Song makes a lot more sense no that I�fve read everything over again I have a far greater understanding than I once did but still there�fs a lot I don�ft get jus yet oh and One winged Angel is a great song for most of this story

Now on to the dream Kiako had or should I say nightmare I wonder just how much more frightening his power would be if whatever it was that had be done to him had never been done I�fm sure that if he ever finds out that Giovanni was the one who commissioned those horrible experiments and tortures than all traces of loyalty will be gone as if the never existed in the first place. I hope that whatever their plan is for Gardevoir that it�fs nothing nearly so terrible.

The part with Rayquaza was so awesome the intensity of the Man with Demon eyes and his Gyarados going up against the lord of the sky was just beyond cool I can�ft wait to find out exactly what ended up happening I know there�fs no way that any of them died but with so many powerful attacks being exchanged there must have be a few serious wounds.

Looking back on Slash�fs original plan I think Watson would have beat his ass big time for one thing Growlithe would have been taken down in no time at all same for Graveler.
And his second thoughts about the plan he was having just before the match made sense right before a battle as important as that it�fs easy to understand why he might have been rather nervous but it�fs a good thing that he went with the team that he did.
And as for the strategy if pokemon were real and I saw someone try something like that I�fd think they were a complete idiot and loser but as it turns out rather than being stupid he was a genius you�fd have to be to come up with something so insane and actually pull it of.

When he used Mud Sport I nearly shit a brick I never use moves like that in the game because it�fs pretty much useless same goes for most moves like that but I suppose that in a real battle like the kinds that you have in this story I bet that those moves really could make the difference between victory and defeat.

When Lanturn got healed due to it�fs Volt Absorb ability I thought for sure that Slash was in serious trouble but he managed to turn it around in his favor and when the first half of the match but to no avail.

When Rotom came out I was surprised that just pain cool I think that a lot of what allowed it to win was the physiological factor it�fs power was a big part in it�fs victory but Gardevoir and Slash had never seen anything like it and all the unusual things that it was doing and saying it�fs easy to understand how anyone could get freaked out by it. And one thing that was pretty foretelling was when Rotom said �gI CAN END THIS BATTLE WITH A SINGLE SWIPE OF MY HANDS.�h he wasn�ft kidding his Shadow Claw was way to strong and with the type advantage there was no hope.

The fact that Watson had a bond with Rotom was interesting a lot weaker than Slash and Gardevoir but still I�fm sure that only very special people and very strong pokemon are capable of doing something like that like Kiako and Gyarados but he�fs not any ordinary person to begin with.

And the after battle that was just so sweet and cute I felt so bad that Slash lost but what hurt the most was how badly hurt Gardevoir was as almost bad as if I�fd gotten hurt myself I hated that that she was injured but it makes sense no one can go up against such a powerful opponent and get away unscratched.
Just one thing that bothered me a bit in retrospect relating to gym matches was in Dewford gym there was no mention of any of the protective measures. I know that it was a smaller gym but still there should have been a least something about it. And about the Xatu sitting on the judges shoulder I think that might look a bit strange because it weighs 33.1 lbs and it stands at about 4��11 so it would be kind of awkward to hold something like that up.

One thing that I wonder about is since Dark types are so hated what about Sidney of the Elite Four he�fs got nothing but dark types. And as a side note I believe I know who both the King and the Shadow but if I�fm write about the Shadow it would explain in part why the Jirachians hate Dark types so much.

Well that�fs it for Sinners proper next I�fll review the one-shot How Many Licks Does It Take...

The opening was really�cSweet�cPardon the pun but a bit risky even if the were hiding kissing with so many people around was dangerous but I can�ft blame them. I can understand why Gardevoir would have liked to join up with a pirate crew than the could be a littlie bit safer they wouldn�ft have to worry about being found out just because of small things like kisses on the cheek or holding hands.

The fairy costume was wearing was so adorable I�fd love to see a picture of that if anyone could draw it very good I�fm sure that everyone else here would be very pleased. A good scene to draw would be her standing in the doorway with her bag open Gardevoir is just so cute and like Slash said she�fs like a adult woman some times but at other times she�fs no different than a littlie girl I suppose it�fs mostly because even though her body and mind are fully mature she�fs still very young in terms of age.

It�fs really a good thing that Gardevoir didn�ft eat all that candy or she would have been in no shape for the battle because she would have been sick to her stomach and probably had a tooth ache and the thought of her sitting in the dentist office is cute I�fd hate for her to be in pain.

The part where Psymakio complained about her feet hurting really got my hopes up of a foot rub for her after all I have a big time foot fetish maybe later on you can fit something like that into either the main story or another one-shot.

When Gardevoir started sucking on the lollipop I could tell just how Slash felt if I had a beautiful girlfriend doing something like that I highly doubt I would have been able to hold myself back at all.

And the part where she offered to share it with him there�fs no way that I would have been able to turn down an offer like that I already love blueberry and I�fm sure that it would taste even better if it was shared with someone as sexy as Gardevoir is.
After it fell down her front it only made sense for him to want to clean her with his tongue after all on their first date he said he wanted to do just that when she got a bit of ketchup on her face. Plus any excuse to lick her is a good one.

Oh and about actually doing that kind of the thing with a lollipop it�fs very doable I�fve seen a lot of porn where that sort of thing was done and once when I got bored I shoved a sucker up my own ass it was a bit itchy and sticky but there were no problems.

Last thing to say about the story is that it is without a doubt one of the hottest sexiest stories on the entire site and even better it had some very funny moments such as Slash saying that everything might have just been a plan to steal the candy. And of course where she pointed out that she gave him a treat and he pointed out that he still owed him but the funniest part was without question when Watson asked about what happened and Gardevoir teleported of leaving poor Slash all alone. And I thought up a new and better answer as to where the rest of the team was they could have been helping Watson out with whatever it was he was doing.

Now on to all the Ash bashing some direct some more subtle in Sinners anyway but in Liek, use thundershock okay it was the most blatant and open bit of out right hate toward a character that I�fve ever seen.

Now with as and Pikachu something you said in this story got me to thinking. I once read a fan fic where Oak said he�fd made a drug that would make a pokemon stronger when you sodomize them I believe Ash must have used some of that and because of it his Pikachu is strong enough to violate the laws of nature either that or the other pokemon feels so sorry for the poor littlie thing having such a stupid trainer that they just act like they lost.

Now that I�fve got that out of the way on to the violent rape�cThat didn�ft sound so awful when I first thought of I but I digress. First of all I�fm not a big yaoi fan but for some odd reason this kind of turned me on just a littlie I don�ft know why I guess it�fs mostly because your such a good author that no matter what just so long as you wrote it�fs going to be good.

One thing I kind of missed was the quote about Ash trying to think of Pokemon metaphors for the experience most of which I must say were pretty clever if a bit disturbing.

When Team Rocket burst in a cracked up I�fd forgotten just how funny that was it took like five minutes for me to stop laughing I don�ft blame them for running away if I saw something like that I�fd have been long gone the second that I saw something like that.

I think that unlike Ash I would have been a bit more worried about the giant rock snake fucking me than having something put in my mouth that just came out my ass.

The line about an orgy of Grimers was one of the worst images I�fve ever gotten which is strange hat out of every thing ing this story that�fs what bothered me the most.

Just one thing I�fm kind of curios about and at the same time disgusted by at the same time is what would Onix's cum look like would it be the normal color or more gray and since it�fs made of stone would there be gravel if so than that would mean it had chunky cum which would have made things even worse.

A few more questions and I�fm done Where did Onix get the cigarette and where can I get Poke-Porn 1 trough 7?

Okay now for the very last things I�fm going to say I now have two Kaishakunin one of theme is a Blissey that I raised from an egg and the other is a Roserade that I caught as a
Budew.

Another attack that Gardevoir could learn is Mud Bomb (For those who don�ft get it that�fs a scat joke.)

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - Negativety101 on February 01, 2008
Valentines day. Slash, both the writer and the charecter should make Gardevoir very happy for this occasion.

Oh, and I have succesfully bred and hatched Rotom. It's not a legendary. Well it's cool if it is in the story, I just wanted to check that.
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From RoboRed on January 30, 2008
February 14th
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From xain34 on January 30, 2008
What day is valentines anyway?
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