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Reviews for Sinners: Arc 2

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From ANON - InnocentFan on May 20, 2009
    ...wow... This is easily one of the best stories that I've ever read, coorelated to poke'mon or otherwise. Especially in the regard that you can portray the feelings of two confused and...tragic... teenagers so accurately(Well, all things considered when relating to Psymakio, but, you get my point).
    ...But I have a question or two... See, I'm not a regular to this site, and usually I don't take that much time to read fanfic, but this kinda caught my eye, and since I'm the kind of person who always likes to think of... possibilities(after reading the material of course), a few questions linger.
    It seems that the Shadow so far can only corrupt poke'mon, and use their bodies like living puppets, but is there a way that the Shadow can... Manifest itself? Such as having a "Tendril", per say, or a physical entity wielding any kind of portion of it's powers(or all of it)?
    Also... If Miyako was the First gardevoir, and if her child was killed inside of her womb... how does the species exist to the present date...? I know you've probably got some clever explanation for it... but I had to ask(though, with my luck, it'll end up as curiosity killin' da cat).
    Those questions aside, however, this is an extremely good(and highly original) story. Pleeeeease keep up the good work!
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  • From Bishonen on May 11, 2009
    WHAT OVER NINE THOUSAND THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on April 26, 2009
    Double review, but I had to voice my musing;

    As much as it would drive me insane as a reader, if I were writing this, I would make Flannery's pack and Slash's pack part ways without either of them figuring out each other's secret. So close but so far sort of thing.
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  • From ANON - Ragdoll on April 26, 2009
    Loving the new chapter, Slash. Worth the wait as always.

    Having Slash explain everything him and his pack have been through to Flannery really makes you realise just how far he's come. I think I'm going to go back and read this from the start at some point.. it's almost been a year since I started reading.
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  • From NeloAkuma on April 25, 2009
    Long time lurker, first time reviewer; so this goes pretty for anything "Sinner"-related you have uploaded on this page:

    I love the whole story. not only me but also the ladies i live with. we pretty much check each day for updates; sometimes multiple times a day. if things get boring we often enough hook the laptop to the projector and read the first arc and older chapter together just because we like it that much.

    All in all it's pretty much the ONLY Pokemon story we have ever looked up 'cause a friend told me to check it out. I personally love how you use the "kiddy background" to attack a few of the many flaws of our society. I wish I were able to do it in such a quality as you do..... oh well, nobody's perfect.

    The one thing that makes me wonder the most, besides wondering where you will take this all, is how you managed to think of the Pokemon team. I wonder what made you choose the specific Pokemon (though not so much with Gardevoir, that is clear). I tried to find a pattern or a theme but so far i failed to do so. would be kind of neat if you could share some of your thoughts on that with me.

    anyway, keep up your very good work and i hope for a bit more.... frequent updates in the future; but you go by the pace that fits yourself.

    - Nelo Akuma
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  • From Church on April 25, 2009
    A fine chapter and i like the end where they are being looked at XD fuckign goosebumps and shit man! Good fucking job I cant wait to read more oyu rock dude!
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  • From NonaSuomi on April 24, 2009
    Good one. I thought the whole see-who-catches-the-others-first thing was pretty funny, and apparently Slash/Psymakio lost, huh? :P

    I'm anxious to see how true to your word you really are when you say "update soon" this time, and I'm hoping it really is fast, since the whole Falarbor incident seems like it's only going get even faster-paced from here.

    I wonder what Blaze will do with this information though... *evil grin*
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  • From xain34 on April 23, 2009
    I swear to god dude, you have gotta be the biggest cock tease on this site. XD
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  • From ANON - General Review on April 22, 2009
    I don't know what to say at this latest chapy. Horrible cliff hanger. Absolutly cruel of yu for someone as impatient of mine. Will keep checking. Hope to see what Flannary and Blaze will make of this.
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  • From ANON - Jasmin Kaiba on April 22, 2009
    Nice chapter, but I was hoping for something more, I guess. Though I don't know what exactly either :)
    The scene between Slash and Gardevoir at the end was cute.
    Now, I guess I'll waith for the next update and hope to figure out what exactly I'm expecting :)
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  • From ANON - SF on April 22, 2009
    AWESOME!! Other than it being short, it's still an outstanding chapter. Definitely worth the long wait. Sure hope you put up the next chapter soon.
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  • From puffball64 on April 21, 2009
    Another fun chapter to read. I kept laughing at the concept of the two trainers/pokemon teaming up. It would be like a staring contest, but by staring, I mean "who can catch the other trainer fucking their Pokemon first".

    And then I read the last paragraph, and laughed even harder.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 21, 2009
    Anon---Maybe if Sinners was PWP, lol. Unfortunately for some, however, it's not.

    Gus Schade---Flannery/Blaziken might happen in the main story, but only between them (not with Slash and Psymakio) and not until the Fallarbor crisis is over. They're smarter than that, lol.

    AHAHA BEST CONCRIT EVER: Perhaps you should submit this chapter a few weeks ago. Such advice seems meant for me and my never-make-it deadlines.

    Max---Y'all are greedy horndogs, lol

    zero---Next chapter shouldn't take nearly as long, since it's mostly done and pretty much just needs editing. Might get cut in half if it ends up going long, though.
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  • From ANON - zero on April 21, 2009
    greate work i been waiting for a wile for the update hope that you have more soon keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Max on April 20, 2009
    Sweeeeet. Always good to see moar.
    Oh, but it's better to see moar of moar.
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