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Reviews for (Story is Finshed)Return of the Pink Candy Neko

By : Sephanie
  • From mamarita on February 27, 2008
    I almost hate to see the story end, but it was a great conclusion. DLS
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  • From mls on February 27, 2008
    i'm sad to hear that your done with this story!! i hope you write more stories like this one!!!!!
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  • From Chocho on February 07, 2008
    I thought that Yuki knew why Shuichi was always so tight? But good story. Love it.
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  • From mamarita on February 04, 2008
    The story is adorable. If I may give some advice, get a beta to help with the punctuation. It's a little hard to read sometimes because the sentences run together. Otherwise, I really love the story!
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  • From mls on February 04, 2008
    loved this chapter!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From mls on February 04, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From RRW on February 03, 2008
    What a great beginning...if you still need a Beta, I am available.
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  • From mamarita on January 22, 2008
    Thanks for writing the sequel To Pink Candy Neko.. I loved that story and missed seeing Shuichi being reunited with Yuki. I agree that you need a beta. Some of your sentences run together and the words are badly misspelled. But the actual story is quite intriguing. I look forward to updates.
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