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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From Duomi on March 10, 2008
    ::way too much happiness:: You mentioned Goodnight Moon! Thank you! It isn't better than this though, you're going with a truly original idea and your characterization is more interesting-- I love L having such a predatory side. And I guessed the shower-camera! At least L's getting plenty of new ideas for his paintings, but I get a feeling Raito will pass out when he sees the latest set... Wonderful as always! I kept checking AFF to see if it would update soon.
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  • From IntHellsing on March 10, 2008
    Lol! What a pervert!
    I can't believe him. XDDD
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  • From Tulip32 on March 10, 2008
    Simply wonderful chapter! L is just so cute and Raito's reaction to him is even more adorable. Thank you for the longer chapter. =). Though, like always I wish it could be a bit longer. I love that the two are becoming better friends and that L is opening up to Raito more.

    I have a feeling that L make have cameras in the bathroom or else is going to try something else perverted. Raito seems to feel the exact same way. I find it interesting that Raito did not oppose to L's almost kiss but more that it was a sneak attack. =) I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - LxRaito on March 09, 2008
    yes, i've only reviewed, but I just read another fan's review on making Light seme, so Im going to make another review prodding you to make L seme-- why?

    Because (pouts) if Light is seme in this story, it'll evaporate a lot of the fun out. :(


    Althought it'll be kind of fun to have a naked hot and sweaty Raito as an aggressive seme, It'll be tons more hotter if Raito was an aggressive uke. L appreciates every contour in Raito's body, richer, and more perverted and childish. He sounds dryly like an uke-- which is to be expected- L always get roles as ukes, just because he is skinny, likes percentages, fair with big haunting eyes and a knack for sweets- And Raito always get the roles of the seme, because he is the almighty Kira, with brains And Brawn.

    But this is not a Death note story--- so lets not stick to the same ideas of RaitoxL---

    As much as Raito can be seme, he'll be great as uke too-- Big doe brown eyes at times, half lidded lust sumtimes, vixen smile, and an extremely hot body---
    And as much as L can be uke, He'll Exceed as Seme too-- haunting obsidian eyes, a hot starving artist built, all pale and wiry muscles and his other weird eccentricities- Since he likes sweets so much, he probably could paint raito covered in whip cream and caramel and call it a "a light dessert'' or something-- with L seme, imaginations can run like riots ina rampage!!!

    Dammit, sorry for wasting your time with my long winded ramble-- I Love this fluffy yet not too fluffly story ssososo much-- I hate it to be just like others!

    gambatte on your nextt chap!! if you cant decide, take all the time you want! :D

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  • From ANON - ayuni on March 09, 2008
    heeeheee why do I have a feeling raito was being surveiled and recorded the entire time? including the shower?

    Lol!!!!

    Having L paint him through imagination is extremely hottt--- and it's so L-like for L to buy the painting that he made, just because he didnt want anyone having it, just everyone seeing it. Hahaha!!! awww, the childish immature detective is so ic even in an ooc story! congratulations!

    all the characters are ic in an ooc situation really. I even wished that some yaoi writer would make a manga out of this!

    It'll be kind of sad if L painted a live nude Raito who's unconcious that he is being painted thought... It'll be tons way more hotter if the live nude was done with Raito concious he was doing it...... wink wink

    gambatte on your next chap and pls upload faster!!!

    x0x ayuni
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  • From ANON - WM on March 09, 2008
    *KICKS*

    Ok, all further politeness gone. I have one word for you: UPDATE.
    Wait, let me chuck in another 3: WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS.
    *is very demanding* :D

    Really, you're evil. You can't leave your readers hanging like that. I mean, what?
    *flails*
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  • From Duomi on March 08, 2008
    So! Now I've read up to seven, and I adore your writing. L's characterisation is very entertaining, and I have this fear that the man kept his cameras-fetish and has some up in the shower. Raito would not be pleased, I think. I'm still actually smiling from reading this, and am looking forward to more.
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  • From Duomi on March 08, 2008
    Will try to keep this review a bit shorter. The paintings? Killed. I think I almost fell out of my chair laughing at Raito's reactions...! I assumed L would end up painting him, but not that soon, or so... creatively.
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  • From Duomi on March 08, 2008
    Hi! I meant to wait until I'd read what's here so far, and then reply, but! I was afraid my details would blur. So. My favorite parts so far (as of chapter three) were the description of L as a horror movie extra from the wrong side of town (or something to that effect) and the bit with Misa sniffing Raito's jacket. That cracked me up enough to quote it to my bemused roommate, who's never read Death Note and tolerates my babbles to her with remarkable patience. Anyway, I'm loving this fic! I adore the portrayal of L, he keeps making me grin. I can picture him as exactly that sort of artist. Also, the details you work in from the story are lovely-- the apple eraser, the stalker thing for Misa... wonderful! I'm really enjoying this, and will now continue reading it before my next review.
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  • From ririra on March 08, 2008
    ^^
    That was...beautiful ^^ Can't wait 'till the 'slaughter' XD
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  • From Loquora on March 07, 2008
    Ah! You can't leave it there! I hope you continue soon... it's so good!
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  • From ANON - Lord Xenu on March 06, 2008
    D'aww this story is so perfect! I love your portrayal of the characters (even the OOC-ish parts :D) and L is so perfect in this chapter. I'm diggin' the slight pervertedness. I really can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Pretty Racing on March 06, 2008
    i'm usually not a fan of AUs in Death Note but this one is fantastic! I love how true everyone still is! :) keep up the amazing work!
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  • From quillbabe on March 06, 2008
    you know, I can think of at least 4 good reasons I wouldn't have sold those paintings if I were Raito:
    1) I would find it disturbing to think people would want giant paintings of me in their living room. Especially giant NUDE paintings of me.
    2) It would strike me as somewhat arrogant to sell paintings of myself in my own gallery. Like, yeah, I know I'm hot, wanna picture?
    3) I would find it creepy, obsessive, and slightly stalkerish that a guy I met for like 20 minutes to an hour could and would paint an entire line of pantings in that much detail and intamacy, and then give them to me to sell to the general public. EWWW!!!
    4) It's sort oflike selling your body, so wouldn't that make me a prostitute?
    But I'm not Raito, so he wouldn't be able to come up with such reasons, especially while flustered. Update soon!
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  • From KatzeRaoul on March 06, 2008
    HEY THAT SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!! TO END IN SUCH A WAY*pouts* LOVE THE STORY CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE*smiles*
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