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Reviews for Shades of Mystification

By : Hellagoddess
  • From amenochikara on February 19, 2008
    Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating this! Ahahaha- this chapter was great too. I know I might sound crazy, but I've been checking at least once a day every day since I've read this to see if you've updated it. I was so pleased to see you added another chapter! This chapter lived up to my expectations again. It makes me smile and I can completely see L, Light, Misa, and Matsuda acting exactly as you describe them. I love your line about Light hearing L pout. Such a fresh spin on the idea of an audible pout! Kudos again! I can't wait to read the next chapter~
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  • From IntHellsing on February 19, 2008
    Okay. I am officially IN LOVE with this story!

    I nearly fell out of my chair when I read about the nude!

    I love that Raito is so thrown off by L, and that he was finally able to provoke a small amount of emotion from L in return.
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  • From GreyPenInk on February 19, 2008
    in your last chapter.... I can't help feel you have drawn Raito too weak. I can't picture Raito giving into displaying paintings of himself so easily. I can't see Raito being such a wimp. I can't see him not putting up a better, strong, more organized, agressive fight. I can't see Raito as willingly being so careless and neglectfull with himself or anything supposed to represent him. Raito has always struck me as someone who cares for himself, who takes pride in who he is and someone with a sense of worth from his resources; be it his mind, looks or acting ability. That Raito would cave and let someone imply something so... base... so slutty... about him, to a public audience no-less, doesn't sound like Raito to me. Art piece or not I can't believe Raito would hang a nude representing himself, on a wall to be viewed and sold to anyone, art dealer and pervert alike. Plus that Raito do something so stupid business wise doesn't make sense. Raito's place is famous right? So if he hung painting of himself by L then the media and rumor mill would have a field day with him and print all kinds of lewd spins to it. Plus then people could hound him to for meetings with L, thinking 'hey why not just ask L's lover for an intereview with L.'

    Sigh. sorry for the mini rant. It's just that it was all going so well. i really like your work but this last part seemed to me like a bad move. Like way too OOC. Anyway I'm just sharing my thoughts. It's your story.
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  • From ANON - moose on February 19, 2008
    L is so amazing in this fic.I love him.
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  • From ANON - sak87 on February 18, 2008
    Hey great fic!! I'm officially hooked. I love that you arent rushing it, and wow are the characters written well. I mean L, one of the hardest characters to write in my opinion... and you have him hands down, just perfect. I can really see L in this environment. Thank you so much for writing this fic, and I'm looking forward for more updates to appease my cravings XDD
    Oh and just as a side note, i may have missed it, but what is the pairing? Just curious... It seems alot of ppl are hoping for LxLight, but I'm going to be different and hope for the opposite: LightxL all the way!! I mean c'mon, whats sexier than a L, all flustered and sweaty, groaning and moaning, and being completely dominated :3 *smacks self from thoughts* But seeing the way this fic is being constructed, I doubt it *sniff* But its all good.
    Excellent fic, I love it!! Keep up the amazing work!!
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  • From Kuragari75 on February 17, 2008
    omg, love L! I'm really enjoying your portrayal of L and Light... it's unique to your story and I really like it. Looking forward to another fabulous chapter!!!! LOVING IT!
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  • From ANON - Raad on February 17, 2008
    So far so good, in my opinion, for an AU of DN, you've done very well captureing both Raito's and L's personalities. I loved how L still used the percentage system on everything, including Raito
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2008
    sounds weird...but I like! ^_^ please update soon???
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  • From ANON - din on February 15, 2008
    Dear god, that was hilarious!!!!! I especially loved the part where L was talking about how Ratio was taking their meeting as a future relationship. But c'mon Light's going to go back. He's WAY to curious not to. lol. Really loved how you did L. I thought it was right on target. Haha...poor light has no idea what he's in for. lol, Great story, please update soon! lol.
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  • From ANON - Kitsuna on February 15, 2008
    I love L so much, and I'm so glad you've kept him so close to character. Ok! I suck at summaries too but I'll try:

    The renowned artist and the art dealer who monopolizes his talent, what will happen when these two meet? Will it be a messy spiral of passion or a case of ‘I love to hate you’?

    ok so it's fairly dumb but I can't think >_
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  • From 70SolLaen on February 14, 2008
    Your characterization of L is pure genius. He's just perfect.
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  • From amenochikara on February 13, 2008
    This is so good so far! I want to read the rest so much T_T
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  • From Saka on February 13, 2008
    Hmm I think your summary is good so far, it's what attracted me to this story after all. Though I know how hard they are to write.

    Hehe but man I love your story! It's just such an awesome one and I love how it's an AU but the characters are still in character. And especially at the end when L is analyzing self. But poor Raito may end up not liking it too much. ^_^

    I can't wait to read more and to see what the next theme is. Especially since he's bein so secretive about it. Hmm can't wait. (Poor Raito gets no vacation now...)
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  • From ANON - Kitsune55 on February 13, 2008
    I can't help but laugh at this story every time that I read it. ^_^. It is just so adorable! You take too much time to update though, and hopefully the next chapter will not take as long. =)I do like how in the previous chapter L actually bought his own painting. I probably would have bought it too with the way that you described it. Amazing job on the details by the way. I feel as though I am in the story in every chapter. It's a miraculous feeling.

    Update soon!

    ~Kitsune55
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  • From Siasa on February 13, 2008
    Summaries are a pain to write, but I think your's is fine for the time being. The last line of this chapter got a chuckle out of me. I'm glad that L is still his overanalyzing self.
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