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Reviews for Clandstine Moments

By : slj812000
  • From ANON - doubledamn on August 12, 2013
    This story is great, I look forward to the next chapters. Continue with your excellent quality of work.
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  • From ANON - doubledamn on August 12, 2013
    As much as I enjoy lemons, I'm finding that I actually prefer the fluff between the characters. It just adds a sense of realism to the whole deal. Holy shit, I'm turning into a romantic, well, that's surprising. Still, good chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Seltap on February 05, 2010
    I love all of these short stories. I do hope you continue, it is all beautifully written!
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  • From Confession68 on February 28, 2008
    I love your story! XD This is so cute and behind the scenes! It's very well written and flows nicely! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on February 24, 2008
    Awesome second chapter.

    I will looking forward to the next chapter, but I won't hold my breath.
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  • From Confession68 on February 21, 2008
    That was a really nice chapter! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! :P She seems confersed~ I think Luffy needs to clarrify! Haha! XD Thanks for sharing! :D
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  • From Confession68 on February 15, 2008
    Very, very good so far. You have incredible writing skill! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I loved the part where he asked for a sandwich! XD It was so like Luffy to be serious about a sandwich! Thanks so much for sharing! :D
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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on February 13, 2008
    Here is your first review.

    I don't mind some PG fluffyness, it's good for a relationship, and therefor a story, to fluctuate in intensity, after all it's noting but sex the relationship won't be very satisfying and on the revisers side if it stays too PG one or both parties will grow frustrated.

    But I got to ask why was this story posted twice?
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