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Reviews for Green-Eyed Monster

By : Lunarwench
  • From ANON - arya on December 15, 2009
    absolutely LOVED it! I loved yuki... though it would have been even better if a scene was added at the end of the fic where yuki punishes shuichi after finding out about how shuichi tried to make him jealous. But i did love the ending, because even the thought that shuichi would even think about leaving yuki is absurd. anyway, keep up the good work! I would be very happy if you could make a sequel where this time it's shuichi that get's jealous, because this guy is hitting on yuki...and then where shuichi becomes a pushy uke.
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  • From ANON - rose on December 02, 2008
    That was really good, and really hot. I love these two boys a lot, and I think that is the exact way that Yuki would react to being jealous. Thank you for sharing such a hot story, I'm off to read more of your work!
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  • From DuosAngel on May 16, 2008
    That. Was. Brilliant! I didn't even think that Shuichi was playing Yuki! And the lemon was just fantastic! I'm glad you gave poor Jerry a potential someone there at the end.
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  • From ANON - AlphaOmegaPsi on May 08, 2008
    You, my friend, are a genius. This story was absolutely brilliant. I can imagine Yuki getting jealous over that, since we all know that his attitude towards Shuichi is all a facade. Great story, really.
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  • From libelluledargent on April 04, 2008
    Good characterization. Love, love, love JealousYuki. Thanks
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  • From drake220 on March 04, 2008
    nice! and the spanking scene was good but that phone call- Hah! i loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Viriginia on February 26, 2008
    Wow. I don't often write reviews, I admit (especially not on aff) but your story was just so amazing! I have to say- you're a great author and I hope to read more from you.
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  • From NettChan on February 26, 2008
    WHOA! NICE!!! Absolutly loved the unadulterated HOTNESS! & Yay, even Jerry gets a happy ending ^_^
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  • From mamarita on February 25, 2008
    This was perfect!!! I love the way you added that little twist in there(although I kind of saw something coming). This story makes me giggle.. I'd love to read another of your stories.
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