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Reviews for Inexorable Flow

By : chayron
  • From ANON - L. Fantasy on July 10, 2010

    You are so stupid perfect at their relationship I tear up everytime I hear them even say 'hello' to one another. I hope you never break them up, I'm only on chapter 2 and I would split hairs if this ended badly hahaha. Your writing is the best, mistakes and all it reminds me of me- only I have no beta reader and I just flat out suck at grammer- gramma you know what I can't even spell it. hahaha.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 07, 2010
    Understood...and it's good to know there's an
    author out there who takes writing seriously
    and not a brief past-time. :-)
    **************
    about #24...

    It's good to see this story is prgressing as nicely
    as it is. I'm glad to see the story didn't linger
    too much on Lakarde's Academy days.

    A thought just popped in my head, it would be ironic
    if after all the grief Lakarde & Amae caused each other,
    they wind being like a sort of a 'Prince & his
    Consultant/Advisor. Because Amae reminds me of Gunter,
    but MORE flambouyant and I think Amae really hasn't
    shown his potential, yet.

    Just a thought...
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  • From priscel on June 02, 2010
    Ch23 - you were right, I loved it ^__^ Lark is such a cutie. I was surprised he lost himself in the whole fight thing and called his water element. He could just used another lion to counter the one coming at them. But oh well, Wolf will probably school him and he'll be more sleek with it the next time ^_^
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 20, 2010
    Part two on #23...

    Yeah, I can see from your comment you DEFINITELY
    didn't understand what I meant.

    Let me ask you this, do you read a lot of fiction
    and I do mean A LOT. That's the only way you would
    have understood where I was coming from.

    I have read hundreds of fiction from five fandoms,
    and I'm not exaggerating, and the one thing I have
    NEVER understood, especially fiction between the
    years 2003-2007, are authors who start a story and
    completely abandon it.

    Yes, they do, and what's sad about it most of the
    authors were high schoolers OR they give the ''I'm
    no longer interested in the fandom'' speech.

    So, you have these stories sitting in limbo, with the
    authors saying they will update and a year later you
    STILL haven't heard from them.

    It has made me wonder, why start a story you were
    not invested in or will only continue IF you get
    reviews?

    Yes, reviews. There are authors who ACTUALLY give
    what I call ''the ultimatum''....''If you don't
    review, I won't post a chapter.''

    Okay, I understand you want feedback, BUT when ''the
    ultimatum'' is done for EVERY chapter, it makes me
    wonder are you doing the story just for the pleasure
    of it OR to feed your ego?

    So, when I ask you the question, will you finish it...
    it's out of curiosity OR will you leave because reviews
    ARE few & far between, after all the series stopped a
    while back and it's only natural to move onto something
    else.

    But, I'll stick with a story, if I see the author is
    continuing it...and no, I didn't realize your story was
    finished.

    Does that clear things up?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on April 20, 2010
    about #23....

    Well, after 50 years I'm back. Of course, that would happen
    when you get stuck in another fandom, but I had mentioned
    I would always check on this story for updates.
    **********
    Now, I liked this chapter, it will be interesting to see if living
    on a military base will change Lakarde's view on things and
    HOPEfully, help him to grow up. Because I can definitely see
    him becoming a good king or Lord, IF he takes his life lessons
    seriously.
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  • From priscel on January 18, 2010
    ch22 - hehe, cheeky preteen! haha Wolf's so red in the face. So awesome! I'm in love! hehe "Daddies.." ^____^ this whole adventure was the best ever! I hope it all works out!
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  • From priscel on January 18, 2010
    chap 21 the other was for chap 20 - wow... loaded chapters! I'm glad that Wolf is taking Lakarde with him and Yuuri to Earth, oh and I so hope he doesn't send him away to the academy. I completely agree with Kyota there. hehe Earth, has lots of unstable teens that Lakarde could meet, even relate too. Wolf, really really needs to just talk with him, they are so very much alike *snickers* thinking that Wolf would leave him in a desert some where *shakes head* an echo of what Wolf was thinking with Yuuri which incidentally got them together. Man, I don't want that to happen to Lakarde. And yuuri needs to stop being a jealous jerk and talk to Lakarde too. Yuuri had always seemed the type to love children.
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  • From priscel on January 10, 2010
    ^____^... I've made all the way through and I want more. I adore Lakarde and want to squish him until he stops being so closed off. I like Amae and I'm glad he's back and I wish his complicate arse much happiness haha now that his king is gone, maybe he can focus and go into healing like he wanted. I love how he and Wolf interact. I can't be he flashed Lakarde(hope I spelled it right - if not, apologies I'm very tired right now)!! You had me smiling, sad and laughing then I couldn't stop myself from reading. I glad I didn't, this last chapter... brilliant. I knew Wolf would do it some how and I agree *snickers* they're all, in some way, idiots in love. The ending scene was indescribably beautiful. Thanks for continuing to write and I look forward to reading more. I would love for Yuuri to have his own child and for Lakarde to open up more and be happy.
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  • From ANON - priscel on January 06, 2010
    going fishing...
    I can't remember the chapter number but wow...if you couldn't tell from my previous comments that I'm hooked, I just wanted to inform you that I'm hooked! Sooo.... Is Wolf trying to harden Yuuri for something? Make him more aggressive for some reason? Because I agree with Asami, Wolf is making him crazy! Haha his poor fat cat Murkis!

    I'm sorry, this is separate but where can I find you Mpreg fics for Yuu=Wolf?
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 23, 2009
    about #22..

    Back again after a 2 months hiatus, reading HP fiction WILL
    do that. :-)

    You know, I'm surprised YOU are sticking with this story, most
    authors would have given up, BUT I guess you're 'the little
    author that could...and will.' Finish that is.

    Good to see that Lakarde has some tact and isn't much of a spoiled
    brat like his father. I take that back, I think he's worse, but at
    least he listens.

    After reading the last 2 chapters I had an uncomfortable feeling,
    that this story will come to a sad ending as we go through the years
    of Yuuri & Wolfram's relationship.

    That's something a reader doesn't want to see, but it happens.

    It'll be interesting to see how you end it.
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  • From ANON - animekitty421 on September 16, 2009
    I'm always interested in the WOTP universe ^_^ and Kyota in bed with Wolf and Yuuri is just awesome! Can't wait to see what you do with the Yuuri-Wolfram-Lakarde relationship.
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  • From KHurricane on September 15, 2009
    You know, you just made my day even better. I did a happy dance when I noticed it got updated. I feel kind of bad for Lakarde. I was laughing a lot at Kyota wound up in their bed. Just, a really amazing chapter! I'm just wondering is Yuuri ever going to get a Trusted Lady? I'm kinda hoping he will. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 11, 2009
    about #20...

    Well, it's been a good 5+ months. :-) But, work [..and being on sick leave]
    does that, but I'll always be back to check here to see what's been updated.
    Surprised to see a lot have,

    Anyway, I'm glad to see Wolfram FINALLY tell Yuuri what happened..and I'm
    glad to see you didn't write that Yuuri was too clueless to have noticed.
    At Yuuri's age, I would THINK he can read between the lines at this point.

    But, what I want to know is, what ARE you going to do with Larkade, because I
    NEVER liked the child and this latest action is unforgiveable.

    By the way, loved the scene with Amae & the mouse...that NEVER gets old. :-)
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  • From ANON - Admamaki on July 20, 2009
    How happy I am, thatyou didn´t write that flogging scene, I wouldn´t have been able to bear it ._. I am happy, that Wolfram finally could tell everything...but that means, that the story is nearly over, does it?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2009
    Umm...so not even...they are so not even!!! Flirting heavily with some chick vs. child-bearing activities and a shared child!? So not even!!!!
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