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From ANON - SP777 on May 08, 2009
about #17...

I dunno, but it seems like it's about to get complicated brfore it gets better.

As for Amae[?], I don't know about unnerving but his cockiness to me hides
borderline stupidness. It seems he always makes the same mistakes.

As for Wolfram, don't tell me Faraya had the NERVE to do it again! I think the
man needs to die...painfully. Let him what it's like to REALLY piss off
Yuri!

In the meantime, summer is here and time for blockbuster movies! Can't wait
for Terminator 4.

PS-out of curiosity, what keeps you from here so long between updates?
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From Tru6768 on April 18, 2009
[�You are in no position to refuse,� Yuuri said.

There was a short gasp, and the guards gasped as Amae slumped to his knees. Some of them stepped back, others came forward to see what was wrong with the man. One or two tried to raise him back to his feet, but the dark-haired male pushed their hands away.

To lose contact with his water element was never pleasant and to be cut off from it so instantly and so deliberately shockingly was heart-stopping. Trying to even out his breathing and fight the nausea, Amae raised his head. Wolfram�s husband was pissed. The man�s dark, usually calm and friendly eyes now were scintillating with fury, his entire posture screaming of a barely suppressed desire to crush him.

He was breathtaking.]

I absolutely love this part: Yuuri getting in touch with his inner badass ;-) There's just something about a guy who seems so compassionate all the time but can be a cold and calculating bastard when sufficiently angered. Plus it's not like Amae's his favorite person. It's...kinda hot.... Yup, definitely hot.

[�A hell of a beauty, isn�t he?�

Arachi turned to his partner whose eyes were taking in the concubine�s face with a great deal of admiration. �Don�t even think about it, Kedash,� Arachi chuckled. �He would cost you your entire life savings."]

Hehehehehe. Amae =) I'm so glad he's back! Even though it's not under the happiest of circumstances.

All kinds of possible action to come from this new turn of events... Most of all I'm thinking about Kyota and how he'll react to Amae's return. And what the King will do with that horrible Faraya.

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From KHurricane on April 13, 2009
I absolutely love this story! I read the first two stories of this series in maybe three days. Well, I would really love it if it was updated soon. I keep checking everyday. Anyways, great story!
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From ANON - SP777 on March 30, 2009
one other thing...

I'm sure at this time, you've heard about the new DB movie, the one named
Evolution? What is that based off...and even though I'm not a DBZ follower
it doesn't look like they're following the format of the anime.

As a matter, there are a FEW anime series getting the live-action treatment,
I heard DeathNote is one. *growls lowly*
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From ANON - SP777 on March 30, 2009
about 16...

Ooo...ACTION-PACKED!!! O_O

Now, that's what I like people fighting and Yuuri being 'fed-up', it's nice to
see him just go 'F*** it!' and go a bit ballistic every once in awhile.
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From ANON - eleni on March 30, 2009
wow this story is amazing they all are. so wens the next chapter comin up?
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From ANON - carrie on March 29, 2009
Hi!
I just found Working out the Paradox on FFnet and went through the entire series in a day.
I love your stories and the way that all your characters are just so real.
Great chapter, fic and series. And I'm eagerly waiting for the next part of the stories. :D
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From LadySesshoumaru on March 10, 2009
OMFG!!!1 i just read all three of you kkm stories in one week and once i started i just could not stop...i am so sad to hear that you are leaving this fandom. i mean you are so good at it but i would like to know if you would consider the naruto or inuyasha fandom i would love to read that....you really need to start writing books. i do have questions 1.is wolf ever going to tell yuuri what happen to him in Ekara. 2.well kyoto come and confront amea. please please please update soon i thanxz for sharing these wonderful stories with us.
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From ANON - animekitty421 on March 03, 2009
yeah update!!! ^_^ I'm happy to see lots of action in this chapter - I was waiting for a fight between the four rulers. I can't wait to read the next chapter and hear about how Wolfram is doing...I'm also interested in learning more about Nuuos. Poor Amae-I hope you give him some happiness in the end... Good luck and please update again soon!
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From ANON - alicem on March 03, 2009
I hope that Wolfram is alright? I hope so.

I hope that they kick Fayre's ass.

Great Update!
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From ANON - SP777 on February 09, 2009
about #15...

1. well, the ending of the chapter had me like this... O_o
Even though I get a feeling I know who was the one throwing the vase. :-)

2. You know, I'm SO starting not to like Wolfram's kid, unless he does something
that shows he IS a noble child at heart.

3. Okay, I HAD to laugh about the Saraluigi thing[I know I'm not spelling it right].
It's only ONE person, NOT two. :-) You keep separating the name.

4. I wouldn't make fun OR constantly comment on someone's grammar. I would only
mention it one time and be done with it. Besides I can tell you're sensitive about
certain things.

5. I didn't realize this until you wrote it, but I TRULY miss the times Yuuri &
Wolfram would stay on Earth. I dunno, but it's just a truly different atmosphere.

..and that's it for now.
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From paintsy on January 22, 2009
Another great chapter! I'm just waiting for Lakarde and Yuri to have a big confrontation. I really like how Yuri actually cares about Lakarde and is not jealous all the time. Where did Wolfram end up? I can�t wait for the next chapter.

I have to say that your KKM story or series of stories, has just ruined me for any other author in this genre. I first started reading with Working out the Paradox, and I just can�t bring myself to read anyone else�s work. I love dextrousleftie�s work and I just can�t start her KKM series. I think that this is the 3rd time I�ve read this chapter. I know that you update about once a month, but every time I visit the site I double check to see if you�ve updated.

Anyway, enough rambling. Love the story, keep up the good work.

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From missella on January 21, 2009
And seriously, just as I was asking myself where the hell Amae had gotten to... Like seriously! As Wolfram was talking to Yuuri's parents, and I noticed I was getting to the end of the chapter, and that I'd review soon, the first thing that came to my mind is 'Where's Amae in this story?' I missed him... And then he appears out of nowhere! Though I could of done without the Faraya. -coughidiotcough-

Oh hey! Sorry, forgot to introdue myself. I know, probably a freak for wanting to introduce myself on a review, but if I really like a story, you can expect constant reviews from me, whether people reply to them or not. And from what I can see, you reply:P

So I'm pretty much known as Ella. I've been reading your stories for about 3 days now, after finding the first one while browsing through KKM stories. Pretty much fell in love with it on site, when found out there was a sequel, and a third one in the making, I was soooo excited! Like, damn! That's a lot of writing!

So the reason I didn't review the other two was mainly because if I read something with a sequel, I'll wait till the very end to review. Forgive me! But don't worry! All will be reviewed in here! So this might take a while... the future reviews won't be quite so long, I promise ^^

I loved the first one. Kyota's easilly one of my favourite characters, and even though I knew he couldn't be with Wolfram, it still made me sad, ya know? Like, he should get some lovin' too! But he handles it well. I think that a lot of people would of handled it worse, ya know? Which is good.

The second one was fricken amazing. At first, I soooo wanted to see an KyotaxAsami pairing (If you ever think of using that pairing, I'll be right behind you supporting you!) but then as time progressed, I could kinda see how the KyotaxAmae pairing would work. But at the same time, I knew that Amae would eventually choose Faraya, because Faraya was in love with him, no matter what anyone else sad. Even bad guys need some lovin'. I was so happy when Kyota finally admitted to himself that he liked Amae, but then Amae had to go and fuck it up by chooseing Faraya.

Neh, the third one... slightly different. Like, I think I read in the first chapter or something that this one was going to be written differently then the last two, and I can definetely see what you mean. But it works, as well? Like, if you had tried to put this one into the last two's story format, it wouldn't of worked as well. And the kid's sooooo cute! Sorry for my lack of name remembering, but anyways...

And now I'm waiting on the edge of my seat patiently to find out what Faraya's gonna do to Wolfram, and how Wolf will react to seeing Amae again.

Till next chapter!

Ella
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From ANON - alicem on January 19, 2009
Don't tell me that Wolfram was again kidnapped and returned to the other third space where he was sent when he followed Yuuri into the fire in the first story?

I hope not since he was drugged and raped in the first story.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From LuvKKM on December 23, 2008
hiahhh~
another chapter!
XD
XD
plz...do continue this story till the endddd~

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