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Reviews for Inexorable Flow

By : chayron

From ANON - White_Youkai on December 22, 2008
Aw... It's perfect as always... Damn I love this story... It's a pitty you are going to leave this fandom after you finish the trilogy, but oh well... I guess you are already fed up with KKM, right? Heh, I will start reading your other stories then, do not worry (as if u would... heh). Actually, well, I'm thinking about drawing one more picture with Kyota, Amae, Yuuri, Wolfram and Lakarde in it... Hehhe, I cannot guarantee that I will really do it but... The image I have in mind is not that bad. :D
So keep it up, and I'm looking forward to the other chapter.
P.S. Good luck with your beta. *wink*
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From LuvKKM on December 17, 2008
update soon pleaseeeeeee~
can't wait no moreee~
XD
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From ANON - SP777 on December 10, 2008
about #13...[good to see you back]

Yes your reader is back again, I do check here every other week to see who has
updated.

Read the first story in the ''trilogy'' one more time, because I like how you developed the budding relationship between Yuuri & Wolfram. :-)

1. You know, it's sort of..kind of hard sticking with a fandom, especially when a lot of people don't know about it and the authors are far & few between...meaning you never get that many stories and the scarce amount of authors you have either disappear OR their updates are long in coming.

Those are just observations of mine.

2. Hey, have you discovered Code Geass yet? Personally, I'm more interested in
the relationship between Lelouch & CC, so no room for yaoi in that department.

3. Do you know where online I can lookup how to write letters overseas? For
example, I'd liked to mail a letter to Japan, BUT I noticed there seems to be
different..districts? Also, it's hard to tell which is the address and city.

4. Also, I figured you'd disappear after writing this ''trilogy''. Too bad...I can see you doing one shots every now & then, but IF you ever slide back into KKM fandom, check out the situation between Sara' & Yuugi.

It kind of makes you wonder WHY the writers don't have Wolfram having a hissy fit when Yuuri becomes concerned about Saraluigi...and trust me, Yuuri becomes concerned about him more than necessary. :-)

5. Why do I have a feeling this child will cause problems in the future, especially when he becomes a teenager? Besides, we do know how most teenagers are...

6. I'm glad you're starting to acknowledge the fact Yuuri is noticing that he's getting older, brings more reality to the story. BUT, wouldn't he age a little slower being half Mazoku [?], I would think by the time he was 80, he would look like he's still 32.

After all, Conrad is half Mazoku...and he has lived for decades.

7. One last thing, while reading your first story I wondered have you played with the
idea of telling a story of what happened in the timeframe between Y & W getting married and before Wolfram & the gang disappeared.

I thought it's be interesting to see the dynamics between Yuuri & Kyota and Wolfram & Asami.

..and that IS enough for now.
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From ANON - sillyme on November 14, 2008
I always love all your fanfics. After reading all 13 chapters, well, I'm just wondering, that I thought at the beginning there were some kind of danger to wolfram. I think that maybe you save it for the last, but until the son grew up, there is no such danger. Well, I just thought maybe - I'm sorry I forget his name - the owner of harem, is still haunting wolfram, as he is kind of love wolfram. That would be a great disaster, right? Give some spices in your story line. I expect there will be great adventure for the following chapter. Keep on writing my friend. I am waiting... btw, thanks, I really enjoy your story as I am one of the huge fans of wolfram. Cheers.
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From ANON - SP777 on October 22, 2008
about #12...

Man, talk about problems and I get a feeling you're about to introduce some in
a difficult triangle of epic porportions, how does the song go...''so you wanna
be startin' something.''

...will Yuuri find out about what happened to Wolfram or is it no longer relevant?

Too bad you won't get into the 3rd season of KKM, because I think you could do
wonders on a Saraluigi/Yuuri/Wolfram triangle.
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From dawnmm on September 26, 2008
i meant when wolfram said that yuuri and she couldnt meet at all. if that was yuuri or wolfram's rule. very good though wonder if murata gave a demon world version of viagra or one of the (for lack of better word please forgive) date rape drugs so wolfram could get it up
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From dawnmm on September 15, 2008
will have to try again-alright there. i am enjoying what i am reading but have a couple of questions that i obviously missed when was the class reunion? even though i understand the jealousy issue is it wolfram or yuuri that doesnt want the 2 to meet? as always thanks for sharing
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From paintsy on September 15, 2008
Another great chapter! I'm happy that that baby making 'seems' to be just business, I can't wait for the next part. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - chibi on August 26, 2008
I love the reasons benhind the wars between Mazoku and humans. I never really thought about why Humans and Mazoku hated each other but your take on it make sense, it's very human to fear the unknown or the different.

Did NOT like the image of Yuuri's horse after it set off the trap. But it was a pwerful image none the less.

Poor Wolfram, having his horse usurped! Loved the conversation between the two there. Also loved this too "Sometimes Wolfram was dense. Yuuri knew that. And he loved Wolfram even more, because that let him think that, from time to time, he was also allowed random stupidities".
Both really made me laugh!

And a first since WotP, yaoi without anal, which considering it's painful for Wolfram to absorb Yurri's power, you'd think there'd be more scenes like that (but I can't complain).
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From ANON - Panda on August 24, 2008
Sometimes, I think Yuuri needs a swift kick in the ass. He's a king for, say 14 years, and yet, he still acts impulsively. Although not as much as when he was still a teenager. But that quirk makes him, him.

Mix up tent.. that soldier's lucky Wold didn't burn his ass :)

Too bad Wolf and Yuuri didn't go all the way. But that's too messy, right? in the middle of their soldiers..
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From ANON - SP777 on August 20, 2008
about #9...

I've been curious, you've read the books, right?

1. In the canon story, IS Wolfram & Conrart relationship strained? Because,
in the anime, of course they don't have time to go into details, but I had
the impression that they had an understanding AND they were close again,
once it was found out that Conrart was only trying to get close to the Box.

2. Are the books ongoing still, do you know? Because, personally, I DO
want to see Wolfram & Yuuri get together in canon and NOT this constant
circling on the idea. Even though, it's entertainment on the author's
part, I WOULD like a little realism.

3. �Birds of a feather flock together � one is handsome and stupid, the other stupid but handsome.�

- I take it Wolfram is the first and Yuuri is the second. :-)

4. Have you checked out the 3rd season yet?
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From Tlynn on August 20, 2008
I have really enjoied all of your stories. They are often harsh but that is the edge that many KKM stories miss, running a country is hard and wars happen, etc.
I just though you might want to mention why Wolf and his entrusted lady couldn't go to earth and concieve Wolf's heir the way gay men do here in the hospital that Shori has control over. I am assuming that in your world that there is a biological reason that artifical insemination won't work for mousaku as that would really solve this delima.
As I said I am really enjoying these stories and am anxiously waiting for Wolf and Yuri to deal with everything that happened in the last story.
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From ANON - Panda on August 14, 2008
Hmm, not a very eventful chapter I see. But it's a nice distraction. Sort of.
And Yuuri is Yuuri. I wonder when the confrontation with Faraya will begin. Yuuri and Wolfram's mental states now are jumble mess with the 'Trusted Lady' problem, add Faraya to the mix, and then...

Kyota could use some love :D
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From ANON - chibi on August 07, 2008
It's nice to know that some things don't change: Kyota still sucks at swordplay and Yuuri still goes off into dangerous situations without thinking it through!

Poor Wolfram, still having problems with what happened, can only imagine what will happen when Yuuri finds out!

And Yuuri still can�t get over the Entrusted Lady.

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From ANON - SP777 on August 06, 2008
about #8...

Wolfram's nightmare, is it because of the incident that happened in..''I can't
remember the name'' or are they an accumulation of the worries between him &
Yuuri and just being the ''usual'' nightmare people have?
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