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From ANON - SP777 on July 13, 2008
about #7...

Well, I'm not in the frame of mind to do a thoughtful review, so I'll just say
welcome back, it has been awhile.

What kept you?
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From ANON - chibi on July 11, 2008
hmmm Yuuri with an entrusted lady, never thought about that. It would be cool so see little Yuuri's and Wolfram's though!

I like this angle for a Kyou Kara Maou fanfic, it's a nice change from m-preg's (not to say that I don't like them) but this is a spin that seems more real! You can easily imagine that in a society where Kings are allowed to marry men, before all the technological advancements of today, that a selected lady would be brought in to bear the children.

I really like Inexorable flow but Yuuri�s views seem different from WoftGE regarding the dominating with sex but maybe I�m reading too much into it. But from �Anticipating and excited just as if he�d be lying in place of Wolfram, he slid two fingers in, breaching the both muscle rings.� he seemed to enjoy being top and bottom. Am I reading too much into it or is that a deliberate change?

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From ANON - rowen raven on July 09, 2008
Well shori saved me the trouble of doing that exact same question, i was about to ask what about yuuri wanting his own kids, and wondered if even if the wolfram needing an heir hadn't traspired would yuuri still eventually aks about having kids. either way, wolfram can't say nothing about it, its only fair. I want ted to say that that this chapter struck a little too close to home, regarding relationships hangging by the treath, i know how they feel when it seems no matter what its all going to hell, and if it doesn't things will never be the same, and there will be hurts that run to deep that had taken hold, bitterness, resentment and guilt permiate every aspect of the relationship, but still you pointlessly hang on wheter by it because of use and old age or for real unmessure love, i can't say which and maybe some times is imposible to tell them appart. But on to anothet topic, i can also relate to being shy in bed even after many years, especially when being talked diry to so bluntly, i still turn ten shades of red. the sex once again was awesome, but i wanted to ask, when yuuri has wolfram in all fours and wolfram is wantonly offering himself as desperate for more, what did you meant when wolfram wonders how all of it seems to yuuri, i'm afraid i don't get the nature of the question, its probably not even important but you know i think to much and every insignificant detail, becomes an issue with me, so if you could humor my curiosity on this or at least set me straight as to what he meant, if not its okay, i'll do some inacurate speculating as always. I loved Leahir, the guy has as much bite as kyota and wolfram themselves. His sarcasm and bluntness was great, and i was awe struck with the description of him in wolf's study, he is a hot piece of ass at least in my imagination. I don't really like crossdressing but i had to laugh when he is described as a handsome man but a much more beautyfull woman, it made me think of him as yozak little brother, i'm still amzed at how he pulled it off. I can't belive how kyota plays dumb, the nerve, no wonder the guy is pisssed. I would have love to read more in to the whole "substitude" fight, but i guess since its not relevant to the story that will be it, oh well pitty. well ja ne!
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From ANON - dawn on July 08, 2008
great as always am waiting for meat though. you always keep me enraptured.
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From Skimbleshanks on July 08, 2008
Your updates make my day, they really do! Ever since the beginning with WotP.
Your portrayal of both Yuuri and Wolfram is remarkable, it is difficult to find a fic where they have aged AND matured appropriately with that age.
And I quite liked your more violent scenes, say where Yuuri hit Wolfram, because the emotion that is involved in their relationship is quite turbulent and whether it was because Yuuri is a straight-guy-turned or not, it is quite natural to let loose and go, well, nuts when a build up of emotion finally bursts. Emotions are not rose-coloured and nobody can stay 100% sane 100% of the time. It is very refreshing to come across a fic that doesn't...'soften the blow', if you like.
One thing I COMPLETELY agree with you on is Greta................that whiny brat annoys the hell out of me...I hate it when she is in the anime episodes...it makes me want to mute it and simply read the subtitles...or skip it entirely. I'm not completely heartless and I got that Yuuri wanted to understand her reasonings, but adopting her was too much, I would have placed her in foster care in one of the villages or something and let that be the end of her story...she tried to kill him for crying out loud!
I do have to ask one other thing, while your series is solely about Yuuri and Wolfram, you have mentioned the progressing lives of the other main characters both in passing and a little detail, out of pure curiosity, what about Conrart (or Conrad, which ever you prefer)? Is it merely that you're not a fan or not really concerned with him? I am not accusing you if you're not and I really really like reading about Yuuri and Wolfram first and foremost, but with his increasing presence in the new series of the anime (even if you haven't watched it), it leaves the question to be asked of what you may have in mind for the (squickingly) loyal boy-scout's life HAHA! I really like the fact that he was a right little stuck up, cocky up-start when he was younger, it makes him much more hotter as a man...
Sorry, I am rambling! Leaving now!
I am really looking forward to your next chapter!

KittenCeez!
xxx

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From ANON - naviarex on July 07, 2008
What a great chapter! It is so nice to read a long and fulfilling read.
I really like the couple tension. It is done very realistically. I seriously don't know if I could ever do something like Yuri intends to (allow a third party) do in real life. I have read stories where that complicated relationship is well done and I've enjoyed them a lot, but boy you really must like challenges. Because you set up two heavy challenges there, Wolfram getting a child and Yuuri needing one too + the bitterness that at the moment only one gets to have it and not the other?.... Oh I get carried away. But you never dissapoint, and I'm curious to know what the next plot turn will be :)

PS. Hurray for a Kyota comeback. I've followed him since the early days and that bad boy still rocks!

Thank you so much for a wonderful story.
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From ANON - Lauryn on July 07, 2008
Wow, this series is amazing... I feel so bad for Yuuri at this point. So much has happened between him and Wolfram. My favorite parts of this series where when Wolfram was convinced that Yuuri hated him in the first book (when he made him drink milk right before Yuuri confessed) and when the whole love scene at the start of the second book. I like the idea of Wolfram wearing a golden bracelet. God, I feel so bad for Yuuri though. Wolfram could literally tear him apart so easily, that's how in deep they are. After fourteen years... I wonder if Wolfram will be able to even go through with it sober. I wouldnt be able to have sex with someone I didnt love if I was IN love with someone as much as Wolf is in love with Yuuri. You are an amazing writer. I am so emotionally invested in the characters and I enjoy the smut too... because sex is just as much a part of life as all the other romance. But your smut isnt the stupid emotionless kind. The sex in here has character development and meaning behind it. I look forward to reading more of this!
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From ANON - panda on July 07, 2008
Nice entrance, Kyota! and borrow Wolf's shirt just to piss Yuuri off, you're an asshole Kyota :)

I hope there wouldn't be anymore woman. Esp. if she's for Yuuri just to have a baby of his own. Okay, he wants his own child, but to actually do it I didn't think Wolf would let him easily. Maybe a threat of divorce from Wolf? he hates sharing. And if one of Yuuri's reasons why he did that was 'if he could, why I didn't?', he's a so much more selfish man than Wolf then. So, I do hope that no more woman involved.

Was that doggie style?
Sex was the greatest invention ever!
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From BabyInACorner on July 07, 2008
I know Yuuri thinks he is going to hate the child now, but later when he finally sees it, he is probably going to change his mind. Who can hate an innocent child?
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From ANON - naoko144 on July 01, 2008
sorry for the repost. I read a bit of the comment of this chapter 6, and my thought would go a bit like those of Ivy xD (if it can help make my comment a bit clearer^^' sorry)
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From ANON - naoko144 on July 01, 2008
I hope it'll go well, just like what yuuri is thinking even tho he has now agreed ( which as and not suprised me, since there wasn't much solution possible xD but it still did in a way following yuuri's aptitude so far in this fic) and well, lotsa sex in there xD(two but it took half of the fiction^^') if I recall, you had just wrote once wolf taking yuuri right? (I should prolly re-read but I am a bit not home lately and I cannot recall clearly but there was once I know...or think I know >.>
I wonder, will kyota see wolf's face? I'd like to kow how it would end (he'd prolly be the type to kill the guy who did that to wolf right? or a least beat him up a lot)

it,s really surprising cause I read this chapter (6) in two separated shot oO and I don't remeber what I wanted to say on the firt half of it TT.TT *cries* oh well, it'll maybe return to me one day^^'' and I can't wait to see what the next chapter and the others will be xD (I say it often but it doesn't matter: your fic are just way too good and I cannot klnow what will happen next cause you really are such a good writter! xD continue with your good work!)...I can,t help but feel I have written this way too badly for what I wanted to say, oh well.

(oh my! A little comment oO)
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From ANON - Evana Wierde on June 24, 2008
I had been wondering what secret Wolfram was keeping from Yuuri. I knew it had to be serious, but damn.
Wolfram should be happy Yuuri found out sooner rather than later. Because later the conversation would've been: "Yuuri, I am having an illegitimate child by the woman you unwittingly agreed to let me have an affair with. I can't agree it won't happen again if it's a girl this time. But either you accept this or we'll get a divorce."
Now I love Wolfram, and love him with Yuuri , but even I would've been like "Bitch get the papers, and I want to see our pre-nup!" Yuuri has forgiven people who have tried to kill, but that level of deception would've been too much. I'm g;ad they made up.
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From ANON - chibi on June 23, 2008
If this wasn't a fanfic I would wonder how anybody could get over something like that and stay together and if it were any other author I would wonder how them getting through this could be made into a believable fic.

You've got your work cut out for you!

And I agree with what you said about Yuuri�s blind rage and anger being understandable and reasonable. I don't think anyone could act in any other way, unless they where brought up in a world where having an entrusted lady was common, even someone as placid as Yurri.
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From RealPoisonIvy on June 21, 2008
Review on chapter 6:

I liked the sex scenes... but I see a problem with Yuuri being almost everytime on top. I know, you wrote that they switched, but I want more Wolfram seme!! You thought, that ppl were shocked by Yuuri hitting Wolfram because they viewed him as uke and thus as the female part of the relationship. I don't think this is entirely true (at least in my case it isn't like that), but if that's the case, it is maybe connected to the role Wolfram seems to take on in their sexual relationship.

I think violence just isn't right. That goes for every kind of relationship. Parents shouldn't hit their children, men shouldn't hit their women and vice versa. Some ppl think, that it's ok for women to hit their husbands for cheating. NO IT ISN'T!

You are right, that Wolfram is the more violent person. That's one of his character traits I really don't like. It shows his insecurities and inability to deal with his jealousy in a more mature way. So violence is weakness in my eyes. That goes for both of them.

I was surprised, that Yuuri finally agreed to this. They will have many issues with the Entrusted Lady, that's for sure, but he is willing to do this for Wolf. I am proud of you Yuuri! And of Murata, too! You clever little fellow! You brought tham back together. I hope, you will be around when Yuuri learns of Faraya!

Will we read someting of the actions between Wolfram and the chosen Lady? My perverted mind leaks through this, but I am really curious how Wolfram feel pull it of. If he really isn't the least bit interested in women.

My regards, Ivy
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From ANON - rowen raven on June 21, 2008
Yes after that longass review i still have got more to say, but you already know that i think too much specialy after i log out, so here is my reverie. I know you're going to hate me for this but i have to say it. I know you despise all the seme uke thing, you've made it quite clear a few times, and i'm sure you are right in your views of it, but... yes there is a but, there are preferences, even you made that distingtion in this chapter. Yes you did, and before you bash me let me say firts that i love it, i'm refering to the part were you distinguish the meaning of penetration for yuuri and wolfram. Yuuri be it because he feels that way or influenced by his culture has reservetion in being penetrated by a man, and preferes to be the one to take, even if he enjoys being taken it not his real high, thus he is primarily a top, as it is know commonly in our gay slang. Now wolfram is another matter, though he has no reservation in taking or being taken he relishes the feel of penetration and i most say i agree with him, make of wolfram primarly a bottom. Don't go getting all pissed at me just yet let me explain a bit more. you associate the top and bottom or seme uke trend as a way of redefining a man woman steriotypes in a homo relationship and many see it that way, but its a lot more complex than that, you said something about equal relationships, let me asure you that preferences have nothing to do with equality, i'm a bottom at heart and don't really like to top, and i don't unless i really have to, and that doesn't make me any different then partner, we are still both 100% men and equal in all aspects exept that i prefere to be the one being taken. I'm not defending this trend or anything so don't get me wrong, i'm just saying that there is a complex gama of shades between black and white to many gradetions in shades of grey, that even you made a distiontion in them with yuuri and wolfram. So there go ahead and chew me out, i deserve it, apart from that, i wanted to say that even if i seemed a bit shocked i liked the violence in the previews chaps, i've already told you i love the angst and like it when my fav char (wolfram) gets hurt, so feel free to bash him some more after you're done bashing me that is for this lovely review, which is not a review at all is it? oh also i liked the mention of yuuri not being able to supres muratas powers, there should be more of him in the story, actually you should writte one for him as the main character, oh but obviously as gay, i still shuder at the three maids orgy in wotp. well i'll let you be so you can rave and gett all pissed at me, like i said no offence intended and i'm not defending the seme/man uke/woman trend, ja ne!
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