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By : chayron
  • From ANON - SP777 on May 20, 2008
    about #5...

    Weeelll...I have to say Wolfram screwed up big time by not sitting down and having
    that discussion with Yuuri. Therefore, Yuuri has the right to be angry, BUT...he
    is going a wee bit overboard, though I can understand his feelings.

    That and the fact his insecurities which is deep in his subconcious is coming into
    the forefront or should I just say his green-eyed monster got loose?

    As much as I'd like to say that Yuuri should understand Wolfram's position, I wouldn't
    want my husband sleeping with some other woman either...thank God for modern
    medicine & technology. So, hopefully, once Yuuri calms down he'll be able to see
    this from Wolfram's POV, though I suspect Yuuri already does.

    Also, WHY is it Yuuri doesn't know these basic stuff yet now that he is older? I mean,
    I understand him resisting learning about things when he was a teenager, but the
    man is OLDER now, you would think he'd learned something even a child would know.
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  • From ANON - Otaku4U on May 20, 2008
    Meow… It’s the BEST XD imagine Wolf say meow *grin* Aha, so lovely… :3
    Wolfram lying son of a bitch! Hahaha no one expect this from him ) Pplz don’t sign documents when you drunk *devil grin* Well if Wolfram need Bielefeld heir? Then Yuuri need Shibuya heir too… XD Anyway, good story ^^
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  • From ANON - xsinfullyxtangyx on May 20, 2008
    Wolfram got hit. *sobs*

    (of course, it was his own fault for keeping something that big from Yuuri...but still T_T)

    &thank you very much for the explaination & this chapter. Its all beginning to make more since now. ;]
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  • From ANON - panda on May 20, 2008
    Oh. My. Gooood!! since the first chapter, I was, am thinking that Yuuri is 'unstable'. His unstability might lead into some insanity, likes violence for that matter. I know he's upset, but still, beat the shit out of Wolf and then drag him around the castle like a dog as Murata had said? I can't blame him of course.
    And Wolf, yeah, he's a coward this time. Instead of trying to talk things, he hides everything and be sneaky. I can't blame him either. With a husband like Yuuri, and Von Bielefeld's descendant, etc etc, that's hard.
    I wish that everything would work out well for them.
    Keep the good job!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 14, 2008
    about #4...

    WHY do I get the feeling when Yuuri finds out what happened to Wolfram, and he
    eventually will, there's going to be a HUGE blowout???

    ...and Faraya's head on a stake?

    Considering who the author is, I wouldn't expect anything less. ;-)
    Besides I sense a buildup happening in this story.
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  • From ANON - xsinfullyxtangyx on May 14, 2008
    I ended up reading this recent chapter like three times trying to decipher the cryptic conversation that Wolfram had with Asami. I was wondering if you could provide a little insight into what Wolfram is feeling right now. I felt like I got the everything about the update: insecurities that Yuuri is feeling & Wolfram's reaction to everything..right until this chapter where based on the conversation, I feel like Wolfram is....*arg* I can't think of the word to describe it...okay. honestly can't think of the words for it....sorry >
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  • From ANON - chibi on May 13, 2008
    Well that was interesting!
    Although I'm not surprised that Wolfram knows that Yuuri thinks he's cheating on him, as Wolf has been around him a long time and Yuuri was never good at hiding things. I'm surprised that he's not telling Yuuri that he isn't.
    Guess what happened with Faraya had a deep affect on him.

    And poor Asami, I feel so sorry for him! But the handcuffs were worth it!

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  • From ANON - rowen raven on May 12, 2008
    very interesting, you took me by surprice with the cuffs, its not what i had imagined at first, but good none the less. I'm not surpriced the Wolfram knwe whats going on in yuuri's mind, but how has he kept quiet? even if he is not, about to tell him about faraya. i am amazed that he is taking the risck of allowing his marrige to drawl on in danger, after all it took him to get there. It most driving him as crazy as its driving yuuri, he is just better at hiding it. Now yuuri sending Asami to talk to wolfram its weird, and what is asami going to tell yuuri about his conversation with wolfram. What's up with gwendal by the way? Now back to that conversation, oh yeah, when wolf said that yuuri is getting ruthless and was verging on violent, during sex, now you know what that made me think, don't ya, *wink* will ya, will ya! *exited* pretty please tell me there is going to be a "violent" sex scene somewhere in here. It was halerious the way they got rid of Asami, rock paper sissors, i can't belive they actually did that, poor guy, he is always the bottom of their jokes. but he is a nice bloke. well untill next one, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Otaku4U on May 12, 2008
    Good story. I love it. LOVE, love, LoVe IT!!!
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  • From ANON - dawnmm on May 12, 2008
    slow start i thought want to see what else is happening and meet the others love the handcuffs how did yuuri's friend get there he's not from shin makou
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  • From ANON - naviarex on May 11, 2008
    This triology is fantastic. It only gets better and better. Hot damn sex too ;)

    I think this part 3 is shaping up to be the best yet. I like how every little psychological detail is tied in and leads to something. The others were good too, but this I particularly like because it is hard (hence more satisfying) to tie in small psychological details rather then plot lines without making it cheezy.
    I'll be happy to read more of your story!
    Thank you
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  • From ANON - panda on May 11, 2008
    Healthy sex life then. That's heavenly hehe
    When will Kyota appear? I miss him! I thought after the whole 'ordeal' with Amae, his character development will be interesting :D I love his role.
    I wish I had Anissina's invention... that'll be fun! the jan-ken game to decide who's bottom and who's top is hilarious!!
    Complex plot ahead I think
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 04, 2008
    Well, after 2 & 1/2 weeks, I finally...FINALLY!...caught up.

    I have to say I like it when an author takes it upon themselves to base
    two characters in a reality-based situation. It really gives a story some
    'bite' and the story goes in places that is limited by the anime.

    Seeing Yuuri & Wolfram as a 'real couple' who have problems like any other
    couple, while still being in love, definitely gives them a new light.

    I like how mature it makes them look and how grown/adult Yuuri is.

    Question: have you thought about doing a story with them as teenagers?
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  • From ANON - drinkbydateoncan on April 30, 2008
    the end of that chapter was just prefect.
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  • From dawnmm on April 30, 2008
    getting interesting where are they is the big question. I have my suspicions and am waiting impatiently for the answers though it looks like yuuri is getting closer to questions with answers he really doesnt want to hear. I loved how they twice killed the information guy. But shouldnt some of the others be alive to question. Its so good to see yuuri jealous of Wolfram I bet Wolf will get all weak in the knees and call him wimp when he finds out. as always thanks for sharing
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