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By : chayron

From ANON - rowen raven on April 28, 2008
Well, I'm speechless in front of yuuri's view, okay so yeah his fears about age are well founded but its going to be a looonnng time before that happens, look at conrard, not even him looked like wolf's dad, and he ages at the same rate the yuuri does. As for dominating, its understandable i guess though i myslef am not that kind of guy, was borned an uke and i love to be dominated, but as a man not as a woman, and i guess thats where we are the same, surrender oneself an still be concidered and treated as a man, thats the only thing wolfram ever asked of yuuri. I guess having been rised as he was has a lot to do with it and it something that can't be really helped. Now as for thinking that wolfram would cheat on him, thats been stupidly dumb, how can he even imagine such a thing its beyond me. oh when he said there had been close calls, i just wanted to smak him myself, and i bet that each and every one of those "close calls" where with women, i can't belive the guy, then he dares think wolf would be capable of doing the same, he is the occation of his own accusations. I can't think of his reaction when he finally finds out what happened to wolf with faraya, and to be perfectly o=honest, i can't wait for it, its going to be one hell of a spat, and a row, and there is going to be so much hurt and angst, and i really hope some one gets hurt *wink* i'm a sadist. Asami for once has showned a sensible side, he is right yuuri should just talk to wolf, oh and he should knock it off with the Kyo thing, its getting old, it was clear that wolf chose him ove kyo many years ago, he should let it rest. Now what surprised me was that Kyo had taken it so hard, after Amae left, he was really affected by it, and I wonder if Amae was affected in a similar way, after all he is the one who left, and him and faraya did loved each other, in a sick twisted kind of way. I loved the trip to the adult store, and i can relate to messed up first times in a way... now cuffs thats an idea, i hope to see a scene in the future involving said cuffs, wolf tied down its a treat, but i'm not sure if he'd let himself be tied down to beging with... now the important matter is who the fuck is this people attacking wolf, are they faraya's? oh well it was a very insightfull chapter, at least as to what yuuri's mind is really like. well ja ne!

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From ANON - prima on April 27, 2008
waiting for the next chapter...so who would be their enemy this time...

Reality...is knocking on Yuuri's door...
Hope that Yuuri will solve his turmoil...
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From ANON - chibi on April 27, 2008
'Well, he shouldn�t have tried that'
The line made me laugh!

One thing I love about your stories is the emotions that you put into them. I really feel sorry for Yuuri! He's really scared of Wolfram leaving him.

But I wonder who was sent to hurt Wolfram.

Update soon!
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From ANON - panda on April 27, 2008
Wah.. Yuuri is so insecure. I wonder how he will deal with it. But I think I can understand that. Having a very hot blonde as a permanent life partner who has so many admirers, not to mention the so-call rivalry feelings (with Kyota),aging issues, and combine with Wolf's own issues as well.

Well, shopping sex toys and then being attacked? Who the hell were they?!

Btw, I've been reading your trilogy all along. I may not write a review but I do enjoy your stories! Good Job!! I hope the next chapter won't take too long like this one!
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From ANON - Naoko144 on April 04, 2008
OMG How can i be reviewing so late xD (after you posted two chapter xD) I love it when wolf is all drunk! And it sure would have been funny to have him suck yuuri in the bar-restaurant xDD (I am a perv..oh well)

Lol, so far, I can't wait to know what is keeping wolf thinking and all bothered and why does Yuuri is being all 'dark' for? oO You've awakened another lot of question now that I know you'll answer but can't help but think about them x33 (is wolf's torment about faraya?)

Anyway! Yeah for sex scene xD you do them good ^^

Oh, if I guessed right, Asami is going out with that girl right? (don,t remember her name even if I just read it xD... I didn't sawed her enough to xD, sorry^^ goldfish emmory)

Continue with the good work, you write amazingly good x3 oh, and will this sequel be as long as the other? (around 20 chapter?) x3 I like long fic x3 (yours particularly x3)
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From ANON - LKLTB on March 27, 2008
You write such amazing stories! I started reading the first part of this trilogy about three or four days ago and I absolutely love it! Though there is something I'm confused about... Wolfram mentions something about how "He was good at pretending, though. Even if it was his own husband to whom he was lying. This evening was just a game for Yuuri, just for teasing each other to stoke their passions. The real mess was going to start after they got back to Shin Makoku. Yuuri was going to kill him after he realized what had been happening while the two of them had been absent. There was no way their relationship would survive that unscathed". I'm confused as to what this could be. It might make sense if Wolfram was planning on telling Yuuri what happened with Faraya, but somehow I doubt that is the case. Does Wolfram know that something bad happened and isn't telling Yuuri or is he talking about something bad that he did and is afraid Yuuri will find out when they get back to Shin Makoku?

On another note, you mention in your author's notes and review responses (Yes, I read those too! They give information and clues straight from the author's mouth that attentive readers might ignore.) that you are frustrated by your limited English vocabulary. I would be willing to give you some synonyms and English "slang" phrases for words that you feel you use too often as well as their nuances if you would like. I'm a native American English speaker though, so anything like that would be something said by an American. Just e-mail me if the idea interests you.

Thank you for writing such a complex storyline. I'm always ecstatic about finding authors that don't rush their plots, and you are one of the VERY few that I've found. You've also written one of the longest fanfics I've ever read, but I don't mind! *smiles* It gives me more time to appreciate the psychology behind the characters!
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From ANON - chii-yuki on March 27, 2008
didn't sign im cause was to lazy anyway i love it update soon kay so glad there a sequel cause many things were circling my brain of the green eyes one of what heck cnat end like that and then a sequeal appears and i'm just happy hell. update ^_^
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From dawnmm on March 26, 2008
i like that yuuri is the jealous one right now and the fact that he is starting to look older than wolfram is really well done. the intrigueing thing though is what is happening in shin makou while they are away?
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From chronoofdarkness on March 25, 2008
It's been a while since I've been able to read something. And I'm glad it was one of yours! I miss reading your stuff. Glad to be back and I can't wait for your next update.
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From ANON - rowen raven on March 24, 2008
WTF! my review was lost!!! now i have to type it again, which gives me the oportunity to write what was left out in the prior one, so you knon me by now, this is going to be long so get comfy and cheers! OMG!! up till now this is the best chapter of this story, it was filled with a variety of themes and scenarios, which made it just balanced and great.
First there was the way youexposed the psycology of their relationship, which is very real. I've been in a relationship for 7 years now and it goes more or less like what you've described here. I just get so 'irked' when he gets all protective of me, when i'm quite capable of taking care of my own sorry ass. I'm very concious of this and don't do it to him like ma he has pride in being a capable independant and relaible man, i expectim to be as independant as me in that aspect (is that bad?). He gets all jealous over all kinds of stupid things too, but i guess its in his nature, I'm not the jealous type myself (or maybe i'm an overconfident fool). There are dominating issues, but mostly the oposite, its funny, in our case we are both too meek,Him probably cause he sees me as frail *rolls eyes* and me cause i'm the submisive kind, its in my nature, and we both whish the other would be a bit more dominant, agresive, idon't know, thats not what i was supose to write, sorry, but its just as fucked up at both parts being so powerfully dominat, like yuuri and wolfram.
Back to the story, umm, oh yeah the spats, and I most say I LOVED it, that was one hell of a row, I loved and liked all of it, from the shouting and curseing to the threats and physical violence, it was ver satisfying, i trive from the drama and angst and tention. Their anger and fears are so human, it makes their relationship all the more real. I hope they have a few more of those spats, and it sounds fucked up, but as much if not more than the sex scenes, i enjoy them more arguments are welcome as long as they resolve the issue in given time and specially if they end up with rabid monkey sex, no one can stay mad forever right?!!*wink*
And last but not least the sex scene!!! as always it was great, on the kitchen table that was so hot and intense, and flashing the neightboors, i just had to laugh at that one, it was so plausible and mundane that it made it all the more naturaly real, and normal. You've manage the present a reallife relationship and its brillinat.
What has me intrigued is this new dark something wolfram is sensing in yuuri, i just hope it doesn't bouts ill for wolfram, whatever it is. Hmmnn, Amae and Kyota... is there is till a chance for them, in my opinion they are too fucked up, but then again maybe thats what makes them so fit for each other, 'takes one to know one' or so they say.
I look foward to all that you've promise to come and every twist and turn up ahead, i'm with you all the way again, ja ne!
ps. of curse i noticed they are a different wolf anf yuuri, they have grown and lenghty years in a relationship can do that to both parties, take it from me, specialy if one has dark secrets and fears as wolfram does, bye ^^.
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From ANON - chibi on March 23, 2008
I really like this chapter!!! (Yuuri is my sugar daddy made me laugh)
But I can't wait to see what happens to Faraya after Yuuri finds out what he did to Wolfram!
There's going to be trouble!
And I really want to see how you get Amae and Kyota togeether.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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From ANON - tangylove on March 23, 2008
Surya�s attention went to Yuuri. �Yuuri, I hope he�s legal?�

For some reason, this line really amused me. ;]

Your fic was wonderful
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From dawnmm on March 11, 2008
great ending 1st chapter i started laughing im so glad you started this one off lightly. ive been looking forward to this sequel but surprised the number of years. i was also surprised to see yuuri in charge of fayaya(sorry forgot the spelling) planet. i know anticipation is good for the soul but hope update soon
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From Genderless on March 11, 2008
I've been waiting for this, for what feels like forever!
And you delivered, just as I expected, though not what I expected.
Drunk horny Wolfram for the win!
I love the KKM world you create, and next-to-no authors do it as well as you.
I can't wait to read what ever you've got planned, and find out what happened to Faraya and the rest; though I must confess I'm looking forward to Yuuri finding out about the rape.
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From ANON - rowen raven on March 10, 2008
omg you're back, this is great, and once againg i'm here to be with you all the way, glad this is going on still, i can't wait to know how all the unfinished affairs will end up. This was a nice start i like the hommy feeling about it, the familiarity between the characters and their relasioships. the way wolfram adapts to earth is quite funny, i'm only a bit disconcerted about the time passing by and the noticeble ageing diferences. oh and i love the drunk wolfram, poor asami. well i'll be as always waiting for more and thanks for continuin your wonderfull story.
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