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Reviews for Inexorable Flow

By : chayron

From steaxt24 on April 06, 2011
It's been 5 days since i started reading all three novels of yours. and now it has come to an end. it was a good story. i just wished the cliffhanger at the very end (Inexorable Flow) didn't really put me on edge as to saying;

"WHAT THE FUCK! WHERE IS THE NEXT PAGE?! (*seriously pissed [mind you])"
hahaha! you seriously got me.

Well I think I like the third novel more.
Then the first,
Lastly the second...

I don't know, to me the second one seems boring...
I found my self skipping a lot. Which I'm not very used to.
Anyway keep it up! Keep making good stories for us.

My rating:
Working Out The Paradox - 9/10
Watch Out For The Green Eyes - 7/10
Inexorable Flow - 9.7/10

I'm seriously hoping for another sequel
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From Resting-Madness on January 24, 2011

Girl, I'm right there with you, hair done up just so, glasses on to adjust, serious look on my face schooling children about just saying 'no' to urges and playing video games instead. It just vomits me hugely the things I hear on the news. And don't you give me that "why would I fear the end" for you to change your profile it seems pretty pointed lamb, about "cute" and all that enternally yours crap. I'm into reality, not cutey-ooty wootsy spoot bleh! But I will say this, I don't believe in just dropping someone like a worn brick because you've been together for ages and think they're boring now what else is out there. I believe in growing very comfortable together not apart, to no longer need desires like some lesser beings. So whereas I love me the drama I roll my eyes when people treat relationships like the end is near when that spark flies out the door. So that's why I'd be weary of your fourth story, you say its different and I'm thinking bleh more Kyota. I like him, he's great if it were a story about him an Amae I'd read it in a heart beat they're pricelessly funny to watch, its like a gruesome movie that you can't turn away from but if he'd be with Wolfram, I'm already feeling annoyance and wouldn't put myself through it. Friends like him sicken me. Hoo boy that's long, I gotta stop running my mouth, but hey its what I do. By the way I changed my e-mail because that one was having major issues, just wanted to let you know if you might have written back and got the "message return"
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From Skimbleshanks on January 01, 2011
Hello!!
Long time no review! Haha!
I am so glad for this story and your first two. Now that I have finally caught up on this one and now finished it, I am not sure whether to be elated that you have kept with this and finished it marvelously, or sad that there will be no more...I think I'll stick with both! :). I have laughed and cried and blushed my way through this adventure and have loved every minute of it!
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent with us! I look forward to the day that you may return to us KKMers and wish you the very best on all of your endeavours!

Much love and admiration,

KittenCeez!
xMeowx!

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From ANON - animekitty421 on December 26, 2010
I just realized that your Part 10 on this site is missing...any reason or an aff.net goof? Just curious. Happy Holidays!
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From SParker on December 16, 2010
Yep, I definitely smell a sequel with the way
the epilogue ended, though it truly wasn't
decided between D' & Lakarde if that really
WAS an engagement slap.

Well, let's see what the boys decided...
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From ANON - animekitty421 on November 25, 2010
Congrats on finishing this fic ^_^ I love the original characters you have created for this series, and your plot twists are always intriguing. I'm impressed with your dedication to finish three super-long fics that are distinctive and unique in plot from any other KKM fics I have read. Thanks so much for sharing this with the comm! And thanks for the awesome sex scenes ~_^
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From ANON - gcbella on November 23, 2010
it was a wonderful ending to a awesome story. The perfect way to start my b day
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From ANON - Ruthaer on November 22, 2010
And will it be followed with a sequel? Cause I really love your stories, and would love it if you would write more with these two!
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From ANON - L. Fantasy on November 21, 2010

Ahaha, hoo hoo nice ending, although... with the things you think I'm not sure I'm ready for the epilog :-)
I still spit whenever I so much as hear the mention of Kyoto and his definition of friendship with Wolfram, but you don't care about that. I do like him as a person, though. And I'm not surprised he'd married Amae- honestly *lean in* I thought that Amae might be related to him in some way- well I did! I got this odd impression when Amae talked about his past in the story before this one, and the way they kept looking at each other seemed so strange. My mental tv must have been perceiving wrong with the facial expressions. Great story, as always, and I'm excited to see the next one no matter where it may take me.
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From ANON - alice barber on August 22, 2010
I'm intersted in being a Beta. I am English speaking from the US. While I am not a writer I read alot and would love to be involved in being a beta. If interested please email me.
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From ANON - Linkin Fantasy on August 17, 2010
I cannot believe that Leahir wants to buy Amae- whom I adore by the way- he's some piece of work that guy. I didn't want them together before because Kyota is one of those creeps on the outside in when it comes to Wolfram, but seeing them more and more I really like their could-be, you know what I mean? And honey, I only wish I could get beta readers, but no one ever bites when I bait with an asking, so its just me alone screwing up. I don't mind though, I enjoy my stories and all their many flaws. If people don't like it help me out, or don't read it. I don't care. What I'm working on isn't nearly as sick as your fics- sick meaning beyond amazing, I can't wait for the new one. I hope its Yuuri and Wolfram still you are the most beautiful mind when it comes to their relationship- but my story is Batteries Not Included if you're ever free it'd be cool if you could read it. *shrug* I pimp my fics but I don't shove them at people hahaha.
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From SParker on August 17, 2010
about #25...

1. Wooow! :-)

I loved the dancing, you described it so well. Are you Indian, also?

2. You know, now that you've expanded on Leahir's character, I found
myself thinking that HE would make a better match for Amae than Kyota.

To me, Kyota doesn't REALLY want Amae at all. Yeah...yeah, he may CARE,
but his feelings aren't deep enough and it always winds up in the end as
'just sex' between them...and that ISN'T enough. Plus, Amae and Kyota's
natures are TOO fiery, any type of relationship between them would only be
volatile and cause endless hardship.

Leahir on the other hand, even though he loves playing the game and can
be wicked when it comes to pursuing, comes across as 'the gentleman' and
seems to have the calming influence Amae needs.

Personally, I think they'd be GREAT together and would have the best romance,
once this mess with Kyota is resolved.

What do you think?

Of course, now I think Leahir wanting to buy Amae is NOT exactly a smart move,
but I'll see how you handle that one. Anyway, that's my thoughts on that, I feel
putting those two in the right situation [..and sometimes it winds up being dire..]
and they could start off the relationship with an understanding, at least.

Anyway, those are my feelings on that, let's just say I've always been a fan of the
underdog, the character people pays less attention to. I never did care much for the
''hero's friends'' who always seem to reap the awards JUST BECAUSE...

..and I think Leahir is a character who will eventually shine.

*whew* I think I'm finished.

PS-I hope you don't do emails suddenly because I just realized I need
to change mine as in right now.
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From ANON - reviewer01 on August 10, 2010
Hey, no need to be mad or anything. I was posting a lenghty review yesterday in regards with slapping thing, but then they went on the maintenance thingy.

Cause I totally agree with you on how people should understand where Yuri's getting about hitting Wolfram. I don't think I have disagree with you that, so... why you're bringing it up when I'm way okay with it. Wolfram's kinda deserve it, being manipulative kinda sucks especially when the person you're hurting is supposedly the one you care the most.

And I mean, I'm just wondering about the ageing thing, not that I am questioning it, cause besides this fic there are loads of fics that has the same thought as well, so, all I am saying is I'm confuse, but no need to snap like that. I'm asking for your own point of view regarding those thing, and I don't mean anything bad by it. I wonder what's wrong with you? Do I look like someone's who's flaming? Cause if I do, I wonder how you'll handle people who flame without reason. Calm down, ne? ^^ Don't be piss off, you appear to be in a very bad mood. Take a breath.

Now, cheer up. Cause as far as I know, I'm not even in a slightest had mocked your story. I'm not even ranting or whining or hating, do I? I guess I'll just shut up, and keep my thoughts to myself if you think I'm going beyond the line. Good luck though.
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From ANON - reviewer01 on August 09, 2010
I know I'm being annoying, and again I know this is your story. But yes, I'm still as confuse about aging the same with anime/manga/novel and to your story. Half blooded mozuku's aged faster? the same as human? Then how come Conrad doesn't? he's the same as Yuri right?

But then on anime/manga/novel, Yuri does aged like human. Or is it because he's on earth? Anime's weird though, but novel is way more different. More intense and hot... wait, what am I blubbering about? lolz.

Yuri's friend here is okay now. I like him now, cause he's not that narrow minded guy when he first met Wolf.

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From ANON - reviewer01 on August 09, 2010
I'm enjoying this so far, but seeing its angst, I wonder what complication will arise though in the near future.
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