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By : KIKI441
  • From ANON - eternal on May 15, 2008
    Poor Dominique.... OMG another great plots!!!
    XD
    this is getting even better and better!!!
    hope can see the rest soon ^^
    wonder what yuu going to do though XD
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  • From ANON - MostlyLovely on May 14, 2008
    You're so fast !! I love your story !! ^^
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 11, 2008
    Wow again!!! Yuuri now have face to face with Drakko to get wolfram back... not to mention have to get wolfram, yuu's heart to win this one!!!'
    Urrghhh i love this story more and more XD
    keep up XD
    and please update soon ^^
    thanks
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 09, 2008
    about #14...

    In the words of Robin, ''Holy Toledo Batman!!!'' O_O

    What's Yuuri going to do now? How will he handle this NEW predicament? Will he
    be able to beat Drakko at his game?

    Stayed Tuned to see...

    Same Bat Time...Same Bat Channel...


    a widdle homage to ''Batman'' the TV series. :-)
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  • From ANON - hwoosh on May 06, 2008
    your story got me hooked! and that's saying something, i'm picky with fanfictions and whatnot xD

    go you!
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  • From monrque on May 06, 2008
    This is very well written.
    I do think the Yuri has suffered enough
    i am not saying that Wolf should through himself at him either.
    Wolf it to blame for not telling him about his father
    IT is wrong to poison the mind of a child against their parents.

    this is a good and sad story.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 06, 2008
    about #3-13...

    Man, this story has more drama than a soap opera.

    *sigh* As much as I like Yuuri, it IS all his fault. Even though, you COULD excuse
    him for his belief as a teenager [..children can't help what they believe or feel,
    as they grow in a close-mided society..], as Yuu said, in a nutshell, he was
    responsible for a kingdom, he should have been open to the beliefs of THAT
    world.

    Now, look at where Yuuri is at, he has some serious butt-kissing to do.

    By the way, I loved the relationship you developed between Wolfram & Ellis, it was
    tender & sweet. I loved how level-minded Ellis was and how he understood Wolfram's
    feelings. You don't get characters like that much in fanfiction.

    Lastly, I liked how you handled Greta, unlike SOME authors who refuse to put a
    character in a story, even though they are IN THE ANIME, at least, you downplayed
    her character enough so she wouldn't be an annoyance and take away from the plot...
    and hopefully, some folks are satisfied.
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 06, 2008
    WHOA!!! nice plot again!! Yuuri proposed Wolfram again!!
    though i like that plot... still think that Yuuri deserves more punishment XD
    Is Draco going to snatch Wolfram away?
    Hehehe this is getting more and more interesting... but.... Ellis!!!
    i love that character so much...
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  • From ANON - MostlyLovely on May 05, 2008
    You're so fast !! And it's so good too. Please keep this speed ^^ Thank you very much !!
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  • From ANON - duren on May 05, 2008
    Excellent work! Every day i'm eagerly waiting for more chapters and you sure deliver the goods! I have no idea how you manage to write so fast, amazing. :)
    And you sure made Yuuri look bad in this story though, heh. That's why personally I dont think Yuuri deserves to get Wolfram back. If only he could get back his soul and heart from that wretched man. (though, you probably have plans with getting them back together... i just feel so sorry for Wolfram. :) )
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 05, 2008
    nice chapter as i hoped XD
    but noooooo.... why ellis have to die? and i already loved that character already =.=
    though kind of jumped from chapter 10... but it is good because of Yuuri is going to meet Wolfram again...
    hehe kind of curious about how Yuuri going to make Yuu likes him XD
    though i can understand Yuu's feeling towards Yuuri as he never received father's love from him.
    but still... Why does Ellis have to die T.T
    but i Still Love this story and hope to see update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - MostlyLovely on May 04, 2008
    You write it so gooooodddd I'm gonna make it my favorite . Please, update soon.XD I can't wait to read ...
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 04, 2008
    WUAAAHHH!!!! nice chapters... wait GREAT chapters XD
    wow! wolfram having a baby of Ellis!!! that's sweet :)
    and now enter new characters that want wolfram too!!! though for no good intention but think its a great one!!
    Go uke wolfram XD wish to see more chapters soon!!!
    your story is great and i agree that your plot are excellent too
    now you are making me impatient for new chapters XD hope they're be soon
    thanks for your story
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 03, 2008
    WOW! another great chapter(s) XD
    love the way u write what happened to wolfram by a letter XD
    but want to hear in details lol but its REALLY great!!!
    aww!! want to see how ellis comfort wolfram hehehehe
    anyway... great chapters really! and will be waiting impatiently for next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - panda on May 03, 2008
    Serves you right, Shibuya Yuuri.
    That brotherly love scene is so sweet. I can't wait to have them meet again.
    Eh, don't you think that Wolf is very fertile? the baby was conceived at first conception. Maybe it's a combination. Luck+great fertility=…
    I hope the next chappie will come out soon.
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