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By : KIKI441
  • From ANON - Kawaii_Kawaii on May 03, 2008
    That was very touching ... oh my god. I read your story on FFNet but I found the update here ^^" weird ...
    Anyway, I was very happy reading this chapter. Made me laugh and cry at the same time haha
    Please update soon
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  • From sonykit on May 03, 2008
    gah!! the weddings did take place! i'm quite surprised really. now i know i hate melinda, and i was right about my initial opinion of her. finally yuuri had enough sense to divorce her. i really liked how you played out chapter 6. it reflected so much on the things that have changed in blood pledge castle and the people in it. i laughed out loud with the starting scene of conrad waddling. i can believe gwendal had a lot to do with the accident at their wedding. the way you wrote bitchy melinda was amusing yet credible. the fact that she did not cuddle to yuuri after yuuri confronted her added to the credibility of her character, even if she is a mean one. i'm glad she's finally out of the story. as for wolfram, i don't know if i should be happy for him. sure, i'm happy that he's okay and safe and happy with his little boy (i love yuu's name - it goes to show how wolfram has somewhat gotten over his bitterness to yuuri and also that he does not feel vengeful enough to deny yuu of his other father). however, ellis poses another problem. he's such a dream man - so nice, loving and understanding. how in the world is yuuri supposed to compete with him? who was there for wolfram all through his pregnancy and even accepted yuu? this character makes the plot more problematic and give the couple (wolfram and yuuri) another conflict to grapple with. moving on. i so love gisela, her rant made her such a courageous woman to stand up against the king and such a loyal friend to wolfram all these years. the consistency of her character is really amazing, she never loses it. i wonder what wolfram wrote though..is he coming back or is yuuri going after him? both chapters were high on emotion without forgetting the plot. the time elapsed gave the story time pace itself so it was great. loved them. love your fic. ;)

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  • From sonykit on May 02, 2008
    gah!!! what's happening?? wolfram's getting married?? so is yuuri?? ack!! will the marriages push through?? i am in a state of confusion and dilemma! wah!! anyway, for the review.. this chapter revealed a lot of things, emotion-wise that is. i found the similarity of this new world, including characters, to the original one very amusing, yet still believable. the way the characters were paralleled to the original ones' personalities was truly witty and interesting. i loved that section on wolfram and corwyn, the resolution of sorts to wolfram's feelings towards conrad was very well relayed. ellis is so selfless, i don't know if i am willing to change my mind and accept him for wolfram. then again, i believe in yuuri and wolfram's love. a lot of conflicts have arose. i am looking forward to how you will resolve them. thanks for the update! ;)
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  • From ANON - reygurl on May 01, 2008
    your story is really great!!!! Its been a while since I read a good fic your plot is wonderful and very anxious for the next chapter I can't wait!!!! Plz update fast!!!! ~=]
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  • From ANON - eternal on May 01, 2008
    WHOA!!!! a really great chapter XD never expected will be like this... and so fast our wolfram finds a guy who admits that he loves him so much... think its really good hehe
    now u really get me addicted to this story XD so please continue this story til the ends :) hope to see the next chapter soon XD
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  • From fireflyfantasy on April 30, 2008
    I absolutely love your story. It is so amazing. The story is creative and different than any other KKM stories I have read. You have a knack for writing and a great imagination. I hope you continue this story. I just love Ellis. So please update when you can. I won't demand "do it know" I know people have lives. I just wanted to leave my encouragements and thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Otaku4U on April 30, 2008
    I hope Wolf will be happy. Good fic ^.^ Update soon pliz 8D
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  • From ANON - panda on April 30, 2008
    COOL!!
    So, they're Shin Makoku looks alike then with clear resemblance to each other.
    Wolfram, finally.. Let's hope that he will have happy marriage. Ellis is wonderful. Very gentleman. COOL! the baby is cute. He's a boy right?
    I wonder how Yuuri will react if he knows that Wolf has got married and even has his child. Stupid Wimp...
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  • From ANON - lijana on April 29, 2008
    Oh I am glad for this update.

    The people think Wolfram is Shinou. And here I thought no one else had seen the ressemblance.

    I really don't like too much angst and Yuuri is being a real ass but the fic is going good so I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - darksweets13 on April 26, 2008
    wow i really love this story
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  • From Limericks on April 25, 2008
    I love the way this story is developing, poor Wolf pregnant and on his own. Yuuri is such an idiot, he deserves whatever that Melinda chick does to him for being so stupid. Gave up a great thing just cuz he had a penis. I also enjoy the interactions between Wolf and captain Ellis, some interesting stuff going on there:D

    I wonder how Yuuri would react if he knew about the relationships happening around him? What's Melinda planning and when is she gonna get caught? I can't wait for the next installment:D keep up the good work

    Thanks for your story, there is too few good Kyou Kara Maoh fanfiction out there.
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  • From ANON - panda on April 25, 2008
    Wow! Wolf is being called 'Shinou' in misunderstanding. COOL!!
    Yuuri is an absolute jerk! make him suffer please!
    And for Wolf, so many options. Ellis, the silver haired guy, and who else?
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Otaku4u on April 23, 2008
    Hi. This is very beautiful and sad story. Here I sit and weeping above Wolfram's fate ... please Update faster :)
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  • From sonykit on April 23, 2008
    wow.. i mean, really.. that chapter was brilliant. from grammar to wording to plot, it was really well-written. i love the consistency of your characters, especially yuuri. i mean, i know i must be hating him for hurting wolfram. but what i find great here is that certain consistency in his character, in that he did not suddenly realize he was inlove or that he did not have a sudden epiphany of how male-male relationships were okay. this constant attitude of him rejecting such notion adds to the depth of his character. he may be hate-worthy, but there's no denying he is well-written. i really don't know what to feel towards melinda. at some parts, she seems all nice and innocent (like going out with greta). but i wanted to kick her when she spoke to yuuri about wolfram in such mean manner, as if she was subtly egging yuuri to forget wolfram. i really don't know yet if i should feel sympathy towards her. conrad and gwendal were humorous in this chapter, especially at the dining table. i love the way you incorporated the other airings here, subtle but very effective. i also love gisela as she is one strong character. she knows to stand up for wolfram and she readily defies yuuri for what she believes in. as for wolfram, i miss him already! i really want to know what happened to him. i really hope he's doing okay. anyway, thanks for sharing such a wonderful chapter. hope to read more soon. ;)
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  • From sonykit on April 15, 2008
    this is an amazing fic. fast-paced, action-packed and wonderfully worded. i like the way the first chapter was written since it did not try to draw out the context of the story for so long. most fics have a tendency to extend the story several chapters just to set the pace. i love the way you did not do it here but still give a vivid idea of what is happening. the characters are amazingly written. each is fresh and unique in his/her own way. the complexity of each character is especially reflected in the second chapter. very good characterizations. i am awed by the plot and by what wolfram is about to do. i am so excited to read where you're going to with your plot line. this is really good so please please please do not abandon this. a lot of good fics remain unfinished. and although i know you are in no way obliged to finish this, i would really really like to see where it's gonna end. please update. thanks for sharing such an amazing fic. ;)
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