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Reviews for A Doppelganger\'s Bet

By : pinkfeline
  • From ANON - Sarian on January 12, 2009
    please update! I really really want to find out what happens next... there's only a few good stories to read that i've come across... I'm so boored and... something! I don't know but i really want to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sarian on November 21, 2008
    w-why arent you uploading? *big sad puppy eyes* it's been a week... *goes to brand new emo corner* i never thought i'd have to use this!!! WAAAH!!!
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  • From spoon10488 on August 28, 2008
    awesome story. I hope to read more.
    =)
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  • From Nexides on August 05, 2008
    I normally avoid WIPs, but the summary looked interesting, so I checked it out. While I'm disappointed that I now have to wait for more, I'm still happy that I read it. The story itself is VERY interesting. Also, that note and the end of the last chapter, about how some people feel it's just a retelling? Yeah, those people aren't paying attention.

    For one thing, Kira seems to be unable to alter the time of death. The absence of the Death Note itself changes the series just by not being there. It doesn't look like Kira can use a method other than a heart attack. Even if Raito had mentioned Raye to Kira, there's no way for him to kill Raye AND the other agents. Ryuk was working neither for nor against Raito, but Raito is doing the exact opposite.

    Unless you bring another poltergeist in, you appear to have eliminated the option of Misa-Misa appearing. Or at least, appearring with the same role she had in canon. Also completely changes the Yotsuba Arc, if that happens at all. And the bet only lasts for a year. And then the additional problem of hoping people will notice one thing about him, but not a different thing.

    This is a REALLY good story! I don't get to say that very often. Normally, the really good fanfics are interesting and enjoyable to the point where I can't coherently say what I'm feeling, but they're just mindless entertainment. This is enjoyable in a different way. It's been a while since I've read a fic that actually made me think, and I've forgotten how nice that is.

    I don't suppose you've been uploading this on another site as well? Fanfiction.net or LiveJournal? I'm just curious, because I don't come here very often, and I was hoping I could find it at a place I do check frequently.

    Anyway, I really liked it, and I hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - NG on July 15, 2008
    This story is getting pretty interesting. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - fouloldron on May 11, 2008
    A very interesting premise and nice writing style.
    Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From Dhalim on April 24, 2008
    oh, very interesting ^^ please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lila on April 20, 2008
    Yay i love an author who updates....Hmmm okay sorry about the short review last time wasn't sure if this was a new fic because of the new format...Okay soo awesome idea with making Light be the spectator instead of the one doing the kiling...The Doppleganger thing is evil cornering Light like that... Boredom is not a good thing when supernatural powers are involved ne?...The message sent to L was a nice twist...Hopefully that will alert L to the possibility of Light Floating around...Like where the stories going...hopefully moving toward an appearrance by L? Alright you have my attention can't wait for an update...
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  • From SailorAurora on April 20, 2008
    Loving the story so far... keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Lila on April 13, 2008
    Interesting can't wait to see where this goes...:)
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