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Reviews for How to Shoot Somebody Who Outdrew You

By : ellief
  • From Rina76 on March 06, 2009
    Finally, something that's not a rape fic! I enjoyed this because they both want it equally (even if they pretend they don't) and both understand their weird, twisted love-hate relationship and why they can't leave each other alone. I especially loved the bit where Mello grabbed Near's wrist and the way you described Near's surprised reaction. The little details you put in were great and made it easy to visualise what was happening. I really liked how playful and teasing they were together; the joking banter about each other's quirks and knowing which buttons to push to annoy or frustrate or get a particular repsonse quite amusing to read. Their interaction was fun. The boys' (reluctant) affection shone through and how gentle and loving they were to each other in places makes a very welcome change from cruelty and harshness which most Mello/Near fics seem to contain and for this reason I must vote your story my favourite in this sub-category. You prove that a fic doesn't have to be violent or the sex forced to be hot. Very, very nice!
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  • From ANON - Riven Liether on May 22, 2008
    Mmmm... nice. Love the first part, since it was more exactly how I would imagine their first time. The second part took me a little it more by surprise, but somehow still fit. It is semi-PWP, but I like it like that. ^^
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  • From cukid9 on April 18, 2008
    At first I was a little bummed that this was a one-shot when I first started reading it, simply because it's so well written. There's so much tension and emotion, that I couldn't stop reading. However, the end was very well done and, while it left me wanting more, I was content with it (I even think I almost teared up a little -which is really rare for me). A nice angsty, sweet story wrapped in a well done bundle. Loved it.
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