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Reviews for Loss of Innocence

By : yakaji
  • From ANON - Aya on August 09, 2011
    wow... this was intense!! i loved every second of it!! i was actually turned on, called my bf to come over asap!! HAHA i swear! email me when you update pls!!
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  • From ANON - Harumine on December 09, 2009
    I really like your fic. And I’m not going to lie, I love when this two are on this kind of situations.

    I find the second chapter kind of sad, but I still like it. I really hope you continued someday. I will be waiting. Unfortunaly, I can’t give you some good critic because English is not my mother language and I can’t told you how ‘well writing’ you history is. I thinks it’s good though, since I can understand it.

    Good luck whit your projects!

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  • From ANON - genkimonki on December 18, 2008
    Really good fic and really hot. You have a subtle eloquence about your writing that I enjoy. Too bad the ending was so sad. Maybe I can pretend it didn't happen by always stopping at chapter one lol. Also nice to see one straight one out of like 80 something fics for D.Gray-man. But it's better than just that, it's a really good fic. Extra points for staying in character and taking the character's backgrounds seriously. Thank you
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  • From ANON - POOCH on September 17, 2008
    wow, that was extremely impressive! such angst.. it's soo beautiful though. pls update soon! oh, i love the doggy style postion, that was soo hot! although, i wish lavi would moan too or have a slight reaction too. but all in all one of the best lavi/lenalee lemons out there! keep up the good job and pls continue!
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  • From ANON - madam_malia on September 16, 2008
    Sorry...too lazy to sign in...

    I'm not going to be very long or deep with this review, and for that, I apologize...but...wow...that was...you made me want to cry for BOTH of them. Very well written and very much in character.

    ...you aren't STOPPING there, are you? (^_~)
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  • From ANON - pooch on June 12, 2008
    omg, that was extremely hoot!! im suprise this doesn't have any reviews... anyways, write more! make him to do her dggy style ^_~ email me when you write another lavi/lenalee fic
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  • From ANON - Lone_ant on May 20, 2008
    Hi great work,. I hope we have more Ledalee fics out there, =)


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  • From ANON - animechick262003 on May 05, 2008
    Simply Flawless! We need more fics for this couple! I loved it!
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  • From madammalia on April 15, 2008
    I really liked this. Both Lavi and Lenalee seemed so in character (so much more so than any other Lavi/Lenalee fic I've read out there), and your description of Lavi's thoughts and feelings felt so...on the mark? It was angsty and yet sweet at the same time. I have to admit that my favorite part, something that you kept throughout the whole piece, was Lavi's insistence that he was still a Bookman...that he was, will and forever be. As such, his reactions followed in kind. He knew he felt something for all those that died and something even deeper for Lenalee, but he said what he KNEW she wanted to hear...not what he really felt... My first reaction to that was "spoken like a true Bookman..."

    As always, wonderful job. Keep up the good work. (^_^)

    madam_malia
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  • From annepackrat on April 14, 2008
    Oh, well done. We need more Linalee x Lavi.
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