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Reviews for Discontinuation of your Dream

By : FatuousOne
  • From ANON - Ming on September 04, 2013
    Lol, i noticed how you didn't use any names during the lemon scene...well at least shirou ended up sith saber...and he really is her sheathe this time! LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon42 on March 02, 2012
    This was an awesome short story, and as far as FSN time-travels go, it was hilariously original.

    Also, it makes me think there might have been a new legend born, the Queen of Blades (pun totally intended). I mean seriously, Tracing? And Shirou's personality? There's no way in hell he'd/she'd not get involved in the conflicts of that era...

    Personally, I think this fic could be continued, and if that ever happened, I'd be happy to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon42 on January 14, 2012
    Wait, what? Shirou got genderbent? Arturia with a penis? Merlin is behind it all?

    ...ROFL!

    Okay, this is easily one of the best, if somewhat short, time-travel Fate/Stay Night fics I've had the pleasure of reading, and the ending is very much one of the funniest I've seen in a LONG while!

    Complete or not complete, whatever, *I* sure wouldn't mind a continuation of this. No, I wouldn't mind that at all. The continued hijinks of Artur, FemmeShirou and Merlin, and possibly Emiya junior, that would be rather interesting.

    Also, the Battle of Camlann. Shirou pulls Unlimited Blade Works. Utter PWNAGE follows.

    And they lived happily ever after. lol.
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  • From Matrias on May 14, 2008
    I really enjoyed this, to the point where I felt I could overcome my embarrassment and actually register to comment. One of my favorite pairings and my favorite fetish (lols, the bending of genders). Fun times.

    I'd love to read a sequel, see some more of these two and how they cope with the change.

    Also,

    "This story starts with fire… a forging… and maybe… it ends happily."

    very clean ending. concise and powerful.
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  • From on April 16, 2008
    Wow! You make the best Fate/Stay Night hentai fics ever! This is one of my favorite pairings in FSN, Shiro/Saber. Another favorite pairing is Archer/Rin, and I'd like you to make a hentai fic with that pairing. I think they're really cute together!
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