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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
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Ryn said:
I had to laugh when Riki called his father a "man whore" and his little rant about his and Iason's father's. That was hilarious. I also can't wait for what happens at Omaki's party. That will be both interersting and hilarious. When I read the part with Raimon was yelling at Kai throught the fog and said "...I’m not going to lose you once again you old geezer, so you better stay put or I’ll have to put you over my knee..." I had to snicker at that and thought 'hadn't Iason actually done something similar to Riki on several occassions'. And Kai's reasoning the ghosts don't make threats turned my snickers in to a full blown laugh.
I love this story and can not wait for more (especially Omaki's party). Please continue!!
Ryn

Author's Response: Thanx for the funny review! I warned you that when the squirrels want to go out and play, one must do just that *laughs* I'm glad you are enjoying the story...
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12/05/08 - 03:01 am
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From amandatrue on July 14, 2009
Review was transferred from old eFics website.

tamingriki said:
Now that Kai is out of the fog the really difficult process begins-the healing. But with Raimen and Riki by his side he will persevere.
Can't wait for Omaki's shabang. I've been imagining all sorts of action that will be going on. Whips, chains, chips, dip....gawk!!!!! I just went to a VERY dark place in my mind!!! "bwahahahahahahha!!!!!"
Better stop before I give myself a heart attack. :-)
Ciao!!

Author's Response: Thanx for the great review! I'm glad your imagination didn't go too dark...heh heh...but yeah, that is going to be an "interesting" party.
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11/05/08 - 02:12 pm
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From SirynsMagick on April 30, 2009
First let me thank you for the update and apologize for the tardy review. Also thanks for the long but exceptionally well written chapter. In thanks I give to you the following: 1-box king sized snickers ice cream bars, 1-box baby ruth's, a dozen grams of white chocolate chip cookies, sugar cookies, and peanut butter cookies, and a life time supply of Butter Pecan Custard (courtesy of the best custard shop in all of WI, Kopps[also available online and worth ever penny]).

Okay now a review.

Lord Bastard is a fitting name for the 'Bastard' Bastian. I honestly think Raimen will get frisky with anything pretty with a place to put 'it'. The difference in the parenting from Kai and Raimen is defined very well in this chapter by Kai staying close to his son when in their 'minds eye' and Raimen being more concerned with getting into Jake's pants. Riki's manipulation of his father is encouraging. Yes their fathers can get aroused in 'any' situation. The brief moment of a serious Omaki was rather scary. Omaki's logs were a little heart rending but I loved the glimpse into the past and hope to read more in the (hopefully near) future.

Ganbatte!!

Ryn
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From ANON - cricri on April 26, 2009
Yay! He’s one of the ancients after all!! I can’t wait to see what’ll Yousi do in the space ship, must be something fun
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From barrie18 on April 23, 2009
Forgive me if I'm overstepping boundaries, but when I read a story I get involved with, I perhaps get carried away in a one sided discussion and question the characters motives, not trying to influence the authors directions. ..

So to begin. . .
There is love and LOVE. . . .Riki and Iason LOVE. They only have eyes for each other and if they were to have relationships with others (forgetting the mind's eye incident with Omaki) on a regular basis, it would just feel 'wrong' for a better word.

Then there is love. . .where most people past and present in Amoi seem to have fleeting feelings for the moment and bed hop happily with no quarms. Lord Kai and Raimen LOVE each other, but accept their natures to explore and that seems to work for them. They both LOVE their wives and interstingly enough don't take other women feeling that would be unfaithful to them and the wives accept this happily.

So what's my problem. . . Raoul and Yui. . . Yui is not of the past, he only has one memory/life so to speak and he is told he has to learn to 'share' Raoul's love with the 'past'
love from a previous life.

Now he is willing to do this, but Lord Kai for all his humour and light heartedness appears to be the most damaged of all the old timers. In the past it appears that at the end he only had Raoul and that Raoul never left his side until he himself died in Kai's arms.

So when Raoul gets his memories back that is going to be a pretty big reconcile to deal with in the present. And even though he LOVES Ju now, once those memories come into play, I don't think Kai is going to want to 'share' Raoul because of what went on when all he had left was Raoul. And I think Raoul's past feelings will get in the way of the present because of how damaged Kai is even now.

Yui won't have a leg to stand on here, because Kai is so 'powerful' in his personality and in his comments to Raoul is already playing on their past ties. . . I like Yui, and I hope he won't get lost in all of this or that he leaves Raoul, because he feels that would be the best thing he could do.

So yes, I am totally enjoying this story and lookforward to seeing an update soon. . .

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From KatzeRaoul on April 14, 2009
Yousi is such a sweetheart,*smiles* Me liked very much can't wait to see what happens next.
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From cricri on April 08, 2009
wow....thank you...yousi at last
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From SirynsMagick on April 02, 2009
Oh my Gods!!! Where to begin? Ok Argent and Omi are cute together ans Omi's wickedness is enduring.(millennia aparently). Are the maidens hidden in the Path of the Ancients? Will Yousi be able to recover his memories of the past(all of it) with Iason and Riki's combined help?

Then there is Raimen and Kai... and then Raoul and Yui... To be in someone else's rooms and do THAT and then not stop once you've been found by the owners of said rooms, continue and have them join in... I am at a loss for words as to how absolutely brilliant that was.

Meanwhile...

Iason and Riki were shorting out circuitry and causing to lights to explode in their 'enjoyment' of each other. And Omaki's plan to record them in action backfiring was hilarious. It was cute how he and Argent tried to escape the fire sprinklers only to end up drenched. I can actually imagine Raoul's eyes twitching in annoyance. I was laughing for about ten minutes after I read what Riki said into Omaki and Argent's minds.

I'm glad to see Yui coming to terms with himself concerning Raoul. I think Raoul truly loves and adores Yui and I doubt that will change, ever. I'm also glad to see Kai slowly warming (though still no where near thawed) to Elder Petros.

I can't wait to find out what Riki and Iason find when they see Martin and Jake and I hope they rescue them in time.

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From KatzeRaoul on March 31, 2009
Loved the chappie, but why the cliffie!?!?*pouts* Will at least I know that Martin and Jake ARE indeed going to be saved most likely in the next chap. so I will forgive you this time.*gives pointed look* Can't wait to see the next chapter, until then BYE!!*smiles*
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From KotoriSensei on March 30, 2009
Poor Raimen. Remember or well, hear all that from Jupiter, quite a shock.
Raimen...it sounds like Ramen...jijijiji...delicious! Go for it Kai!!! (well...when he wake up)
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From KotoriSensei on March 30, 2009
Wow!!! I wish a have someone like Toma, how efficient!!! Of course, first of all i need a Rike or a Iason...T-T....my life sucks!!!
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From KotoriSensei on March 30, 2009
Hi!!! I'm just starting but your writing is great as ever!!!
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From SirynsMagick on March 17, 2009
I agree with Jake calling Bastian 'Lord Bastard'. He and Gerard are absolute assholes. I am guessing that Jupiter had Argent and Omaki work together on the ball to help them awaken. And the mischievous Omaki strikes again, although this time unwittingly. LOL!! The image of Iason tapping his foot in frustrated anger is hilarious. Now to more pressing matters. When will Raoul awaken? Is Yui perhaps Raouls ancient lover or an 'anomaly' of some sort? What was Raouls father like (I can guess the 'relationship' he had with Kai and Raimon)? Oh I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Its so much fun to read and your descriptions or people and events are amazing! Its easy to picture how the scenes look and the sequence of actions. Every chapter has me completely enthralled. I give you cookies and brownies as a thanks!!

Update soon please!!

Ganbatte!!

Ryn
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From ANON - mistysooty on March 11, 2009
I know I haven't reviewed very often, but I love what you have done with these people. The game is now on, Iason and Riki with their parents are gonna kick ass, aren't they...

Please keep up the good work.
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From KatzeRaoul on March 11, 2009
OMG!! Omi after everything he had been through wants to go back to the sea of darkness...God Omaki what are we going to do with you.*giggles* It was nice that they woke together, seeing as they did die together. But Iason will have Omaki's head before the night is through, while Kai, Raimen and Riki will just sit back and watch with laughter in their eyes. Can't wait to see the Gala continue on though the night, seeing as how the food was the source of the real entertainment, instead of the punch this time.*grins* Raoul should wake soon enough, when you think to the fact that Riki picked up on his awakening, it's only a matter of time.

All I have to say about Lord Bastard is that I hope he dies a very painfull death after what he is putting Martin and Jake through. Speaking of Martin I wanted to cry knowing how close he was to dying. Martin, Jake hold on just alittle longer, Iason will come and save you two once he knows that it is indeed you who are in need of saving.
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