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By : amandatrue

From KatzeRaoul on February 22, 2009
BLOODY HELL I AM BEYOND PISSED!!!! I made a long review for this chapter and what happens it did not show up, and I'll be damned if I am typing it all again so... I am just going to say this that once again you have out done yourself and I can't wait for the next chapter.*walks off sulking*
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From KatzeRaoul on February 05, 2009
Wow, that was just wow...though just to let you know I did find a few mistakes but...WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I am really glad to hear that Darius is going to try to save Martin and the other medic, I hope that sometime soon he tells Iason what he found out, Iason I think will be able to help find them faster. I am also glad that Raoul has some info. on his father, it was nice of Sir Earl to hand it to him now he just needs to view it...and maybe see Kai and Raimen too. Little by little everyday Omaki is remembering his past from the dance to the poems and now the minds eye with them at the beach with him seeing a young man running and laughing in the waves at the shore, or him walking in the desert alone. I think just one more push and he'll remember everything...and I think that push will be at the Gala when Kai and Raimen get their hands on him. Once again you did a another beautiful chappie, and I can't wait for what awaits us at the Gala....so until then BYE LOVE!!!*chu*
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From cricri on January 30, 2009
I love your story very much, and I've been reading the previous one, which is Aristian Holiday. I can't help but noticed that some of the characters were taken from Kira Takenouchi's Taming Riki, isnt' it? I just wondering if you're planning on writting about Yousi as well, is he turned out to be one of the ancients? And if he is, why Jupiter tampered his mind? What secrets did he find? Actually I pretty much like this Yousi character. Keep up the good work and take care
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From KatzeRaoul on January 20, 2009
Ack...I'm sorry,I'm sorry,I'm sorry I'm just now getting to this but Here it is short but sweet. The only the I have to say about Martin is IASON PLEASE HELP HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*cries* The confrence was very informative. Kai lost his temper a lot but it was to be expected, it was funny when they learned of Omi. Can't wait for when they see him in person. Poor Raoul I hope he did get that drink that he so wanted.*smiles* And it would seem that Omi is starting to remember when he was dancing, getting a litle closer now we just need him to fully awaken so he can tell them where the madiens are.
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From KatzeRaoul on December 02, 2008
So to put it bluntly Omaki holds the key to something huge, and until Lady Yuri awakens and Omi gets his full memory back he can not give back this ring that holds some importance. Right??? And Omi is remembering since he had that flash of Lady Yuri as an old women. I wonder what she has planed once she and Omaki meet again????
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From KatzeRaoul on November 19, 2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have just killed me, how could you cut Iason and Riki off.*cries, then dies**giggles* No but seriously that was a really good chappie. Kai and Raimen are so proud of their boys, and who wouldn't be those two went through hell and back and managed to find each other again and stay together. They battled any and all who posed a threat to them and the one they love.

Kai and Raimen was so happy to see Raoul, it really sucks that Raoul has no memory that would have been something to see. Poor Raoul, he's so confused and yet excited because he has learned though not in detail that he too is an Ancient as well as all the Blondies. Plus that he has a father he never knew he had(father has fist name to my middle, though his is Rene while mine is Renee), since they were all born out of tubes and whatnot. You know thinking about the Gala, I really can't wait for Kai and Raimen to see Omaki. Wonder if he was as he is now!?!?!?*grins*

Toma and Ayuda what can one say to that except glad Toma was restored like Daryl and Katze and WOW THAT WAS HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!*blushes*

Iason and Riki you cut them off!!!!!!!!*cries again* I hope this picks up with round two in the next chappie.*gives puppy dog eyes* Well until next time bye love!!!
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From amandatrue on November 19, 2008
I hope you are enjoying my story, thanks for the kind emails!
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From KatzeRaoul on November 02, 2008
Omaki and Argent in bed- Wow *cough* I *cough* I mean Argent is really a poet that he is. Whispering sweet nothings to the not so sleeping Omi. Omi thinking that the words that was said to him in their throws of pasion and after, was nothing but a beautiful dream. Ah, but Argent proved him wrong, just to have Omi prove that their night together was going to be way more than a one nightstand. He did that with his own words and the sweet lovemaking afterwords. (could one call it sweet lovemaking OR hot very HOT sex????)^_^ Got to love how Omi can really get into something, just one wiff of 'The Lords Dance' and it had him up and about pacing naked while trying to get all the info. on this sent so he could base the gala around it. And Argent is really smart as he came up with the plan on how to get the pets that has the holo-pic together,having them work on the preparations for the Gala.

Jupiter summoning the two Lords- Jeez, at first even I thought that somehow she found out about the holo-pic that is making it's rounds thanks to that blasted pet Enyu, but thank goodness that she is clueless. All she wanted to do was help with the plans of the bash now turned Gala. Poor Omaki all of a sudden he isn't in control of his own party anymore. He can't do half the things he wanted to do like the 'Welcome back old farts' banner or the spiked punch.(Now I myself would love to have a repeat of the events that follow the drinking of the punch) And what is it that Argent knows about Omaki it must have something to do with the Ancients, obviously. And what is up with Jupiter calling Omaki 'my jewel' now that gets one thinking. It's clear that Omaki plays an even bigger part in this whole Ancient thing then even he realizes. That's how I see it, and it's made clear that he holds importances as this was said, and I quote:"But Jupiter had more in store for Omaki, her "jewel" was indeed as beautiful as his heart, Omaki's playfulness was one thing, Jupiter could never find the will to entirely erase from his character, although she did not always approve of is activities or sexual appetite. But she found that in the many Blondie's she brought back from extinction, that certain characteristics would survive the birthing on each one, and not all could be completely removed just lay dormant for some future event she would not be able to undo. Omaki is as she remembered him, as she remembered all her children." end quote. So is he as big as Iason and Riki and just don't remember it yet??? I am leaning towards that. And you just about gave me a heart-attack when Omi was questioning Argent's trust, how could he think me*cough*I mean him as a spy!!!!*cries* Their love was almost ruined because of that, but thank god Omaki knows that what Jensen said to him on the way back to the Taming Tower can be trusted as truth.*breaths a sigh of relief*

Iason, Riki, Jupiter, Raimen, Ian and that asshole Eric- what can one say about that, except that, that bastard got what was coming to him. If it were up to me I would have made him suffer a lot more. I'm happy that Iason and Riki was able to get their revenge on him by showing that ass the last moments of what was left of his clan. It also gave Kai closer, to see that. But the one thing I didn't agree with was letting him go to jump in the pit himself. I would have killed him then tossed his sorry ass in, but they let him go and he did the typical(which I knew he was going to do)grab Iason and pull him down with him. Thank the GODS Iason can float, and he didn't have the satisfaction of pulling Iason and Riki apart again. Shit I was laughing my butt off when both Riki and Raimen made Iason blush with their little SEX jokes. Poor Ian at first it made me sad to think that he couldn't be reanimated, but I'm glad that Iason remembered that they had DNA there in the lab and that it was still intact. Now they can all be back together again as it should be.*smiles*

Can't wait for the next chappy, until then BYE LOVE!!!!!!*smiles*
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From amandatrue on August 20, 2008
Now MJ2001-it would not be fair if I told you EVERYTHING now would it? Hmmm....nope...you'll have to wait *grins*
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From mistysooty on August 20, 2008
Hi, I was wondering if Iason and Riki find out want Enyu did? That will be fun to read about.
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From amandatrue on August 20, 2008
Thanx for the really nice review Coco! Glad you are enjoying my story *grins* Sorry to make my muse blush Jenn...*or AM I?* Hope to have Chapter 10 out faster than this one! Thanx!!
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From cocoke5 on August 20, 2008
OH THAT CHAPTER WAS GREAT AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE STORY TOO I HAVE READ THE FIRST ONE AND FELL IN LOVE WITH IT AND NOW I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY TO AND CAN WAIT FOR MORE . YOU HAVE DONE GREAT WITH THIS STORY AND CAN NOT WIAT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THE STORY AND SEE WHAT HAPPEN TO ENUY AND LORD STEEL . WILL OMIK SELL ENUY TO LORD STEEL. UNIT NEXT YOU UP DATE.
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From KatzeRaoul on August 19, 2008
Oh you suck!!!! Here I was going to do this really long review, but after reading THAT!!!!! THAT SCENE WITH OMAKI AND *cough*ME*cough*JENSEN I have lost ALL train of thought and just died and gone to heaven.*drools* OK next chapter I have to makeup for my lack of words and do a REALLY BIG REVIEW!!!! *smiles* Until then BYE LOVE!!!!
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From mistysooty on July 25, 2008
This is a great story with a unique plot. I hope you will keep going with it as it gives a nice change from the origional. I like what you are doing with Iason's and Riki's fathers and look forward to their reaction to Omaki.

I also like what is happening with the other characters. Please keep going as I'm looking forward to where you are leading everyone with enthusiasm.
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From ANON - Adi on June 25, 2008
Just thought to say it's really nice to read a fic in which Iason and Riki are pure lovers, without the constant beating&punishing sessions. A thing or two in your text irritates, but all in all I like your way of writing the charachters and a new chapter just makes my day. *beams*
And yeah, Enyu got off a bit too easily. But I love Omaki&Enyu pairing, so I guess I just hope you'll let Enyu stay...
Anyways, thanks for the story, as well as the previous.
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