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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - Readalots on December 23, 2016

    I love your story and the characters are really detailed and in depth. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, it is one of the best I've read on here


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  • From ANON - Readalots on December 23, 2016

    I love your story and the characters are really detailed and in depth. I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, it is one of the best I've read on here


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  • From ANON - Kojoe92 on November 28, 2014
    Such an excellent story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - wolfofdragons on December 31, 2011
    Well written and intricately woven together. It is too bad you seem to have abandoned the story. However, I hope that you will return and continue this story.






    adaequatio rei et intellectus
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  • From ANON - mason walker on December 01, 2011
    i enjoy the story and love your descriptive writing your spelling could use a bit of work but the story is still very we'll written aside from some normal bumps along the way..now as a incentive for you to continue writing this story i give you a obliging death threat.....finish this masterpiece or ill kill you :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2011
    Not sure if reviewing is going to do anything, but I hope you continue this story. It's the only good Human/Lucario(well riolu, as of now) story, and you haven't even gotten to the good parts yet :p. Hurry up and update!
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  • From ANON - tibarion on July 29, 2010
    Nice story, i love it. First one I seen with a blaziken in it like this so that makes this story one of my tops. Other than the story "Sinners" by FlashFirestorm, I can't really find any good pokemon/human storys at all. Hope you add more blaziken/lota interactions, since I'm only read up to chapter 5 and I'm reviewing the wrong chapter, anyways hope you bring out new chapters soon, good luck. =3
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  • From Darkfirex on April 24, 2010
    I have just finished reading your story (the 8 chapters in a row) and all I have to say is that I really like your story. The characters are very well developed (at least in my opinion) and it has an interesting plot. I'm looking forward to updates. Keep up the good work =D

    PD:Please, forgive me if I make some mistakes; English is not my native language.
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on March 31, 2010
    grumble, grumble, grumble. VODKA!!!!

    passed out drunk.

    doctor t
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  • From ANON - Doctor T on February 21, 2010
    *stummbles into picture with a 5th of jack in one hand and a handle of whiskey in the other* shuffle shuffle shuffle
    *takes a swig of one bottle and looks at the post board* bbbbbuuuuurrrrrpppppppp!!!!!!!!
    man xain, we need him alive*huck* an if you threten him he ll probably leave again *shakes his head at the wall*
    god Iota, the least you could do is give a twitch of live at least every couple of weeks. just that would ease the frustraion of impatience*huck* or at least keep people around.
    *starts stumbbling away and muttering*

    drinking so much fire wate.......fuck this, my head hurts
    you know the drill
    feel-good-ologist
    Doctor Thoth

    ice pack and four asprin please
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  • From ANON - a wandering stranger on January 16, 2010
    hmm? oh hello Iota, nice of you to drop by. I was just beginning to muse over where you had gone. In any case, I'll go make some more tea. hopefully it will be ready by the time you finish writing so we shall be prepared for the unveiling.

    getting up to put on a new pot of tea

    a wandering stranger
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  • From xain34 on January 06, 2010
    8 Months...I'm gonna fucking stab the fuck outta you Iota. >_>;
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  • From Iota on January 03, 2010
    Oh snap~

    I just had a random twine of inspiration. Gonna start writing this story again =].

    Probably not going to have the insane length to these chapters that I once did, I'm going to start getting to the "point" of the story now.

    Keep on the lookout for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - brad on November 22, 2009
    day 1 week 5 andso many people are going CRAZY FOR THIS STORY!!!!
    sorry had to do that.
    so WHEN IS CHAPTER 9 COMING OUT *crys*

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  • From gardevoirfan on November 17, 2009
    It took a few days, but I read through all 8 of your chapters you have up. I'm amazed at the cold dark feeling, of no emotion whenever you describe the White-washed facility with the emotionless doctors. (shudders), I've still got chills down my spine from reading them and I even enhanced the feeling by having some cold, yet soothing music in the background. I did listen to the music you suggested to get a better feel from Dr. Michael's office, but it's play time ran out before I could finish it all so I found other forms of music to fill in the time slot.

    I'm also finding it hilarious to see how powerful and logical Subject_14 (Iota) is, yet he's like a little kid not totally understanding the strange emotions he experiences and then debates with himself as to what could possibly be the cause of these sudden feelings. With Blazikein as an intercepting variable, things can only get all the more interesting for Iota (Subject_14)...

    As for Noah Ariston, and his Riolu, I can see the relationship slowly developing for the two. It causes me to crave more as to how strong their relationship will grow.

    Furthermore, the "how these things" are going to be tied together in the end, will be an interesting combination of logic and drama, or at least if my predictions of your plans for this story to take shape are accurate.

    I only have a minor nitpick: Be sure to take a moment to read through what you have typed/written and make sure when you read through it, that there aren't any small "stumbles" of minor grammar errors. The story is well-crafted, so I can easily distinguish what you actually meant to say, but it does become all the more distracting for my enjoyment. Please continue progressing through this story and I promise to continue giving you my truly honest thoughts and constructive criticisms.

    ~silentwriter~
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