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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - Shade on July 01, 2008
    Aa~aa~ah. It feels like I've been waiting an eternity for chapter six. Writer's block? Beta reader missing? Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 30, 2008
    That marks 4008 hits Iota. Congrats!
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 27, 2008
    "Well. I hope you're happy. You are OFFICIALLY late." Says Fate.
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  • From ANON - the wandering stranger on June 27, 2008
    it would appear that the review system hates my spacing. sorry for my review getting a little jumbled, but hopefully it will still be legible to most people. also I have reviewed the activity of this "war zone" as it would appear between the loyal fans and the impatient few. seems like there will be a story in the backdrop of the story so to speak.


    once again waiting eagerly albeit patiently,
    with tea in hand,
    a wandering stranger
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  • From ANON - the wandering stranger on June 27, 2008
    you have quite the good story here. so far it is better in plot, character development, and grammar that a lot of other stories out there. very original story and

    characters. the great chemistry between the characters is a very nice touch. impressive on the amount of detail you have going into the story. the chapters being long is

    a plus. the fact that it is the pokemon in battle making it's own decisions and battle plans as opposed to being told by the trainer ever thing to do is also a nice touch.

    a very good story that I will highly recommend to any and everyone. I will be very interested to see how the story continue.

    I give it a 10.5 out of 10

    keep up the good work.

    eagerly awaiting the next chapter,

    your friend,

    a wandering stranger
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 26, 2008
    Also, If you have ever listened to a chick doing herself, you will know what schlicking is.
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 26, 2008
    Play more Starcraft little nublet.
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  • From Iota on June 25, 2008
    I don't know who any of those people are or what a Schlick is but the new chapter is coming soon :P
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 25, 2008
    The Zerg (Or at least the literate zerg) are getting restless, Mengsk is growing bored, Kerrigan wants a good schlick soon(O_O),Ariston is getting bored too, and Fate is growing impatient.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 25, 2008
    Well the way it reads make it sounds like he's talking to himself.
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 24, 2008
    Yea. The Dr.Ariston thing. I noticed that too. What about it?
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2008
    I'm loving your stories so far, I did notice 1 thing SO FAR however in Chapter 5... Its easier for me to just quote it lol.


    "Are we all set?" the voice asked. Iota had heard this before. It was Dr.Michals.

    "All good over here sir," the female doctor responded.

    "Good," Dr.Michals responded, "how about Dr.Ariston's team in the control booth?"

    "I'll check," Dr.Maizner said, walking over to an intercom on one of the blank walls.

    "Hey Dr.Maizner, you all set up there?" He asked, holding down the COM button.

    "Everything is ready," he answered.
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  • From Iota on June 23, 2008
    OH SHI--!

    I need backup!
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  • From ANON - dark link omega on June 23, 2008
    *dark link and his troops are seen on the horizen watching iota's base* "hardly any defenses" says the dark lord "but we must be careful" *an evil smile creers along his face* "it is to late troops ATTACK!!!!". NOW IS THE END the ruler of darkness dark link omega
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  • From ANON - dark link omega on June 23, 2008
    please hurry up and update your story or an army of dark links will attack your base they are all on stand by waiting for my command. yours sincerly, the ruler of darkness dark link omega
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