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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From Iota on June 16, 2008
    Somatose - Haha, I edited like a beast myself and with the help of some beta readers I tried to eliminate all of those pesky typos. Glad you enjoyed, Chapter 6 will be done soon...I hope.
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  • From Somatose on June 16, 2008
    Another great chapter. I love the way you describe the battle and the plot twist at the end is a brilliant line to end the story on (especially the Conti... bit). You've cut down of grammatical and spelling errors significantly. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Iota on June 16, 2008
    shadowed death657 - Thanks !

    Espy - :o ! That's odd. Noah's a cool name though :). I'd love to read your story when it comes out.

    Tai - Cool! I'd love to read that too.

    Fate - I've talked with Slash a bit, he hasn't reviewed it, but he has read it. In fact, he beta-read Chapter Five :o.

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  • From ANON - Fate on June 16, 2008
    Ya know, I dont think Slash has reviewed this yet. *checks* Nope. He hasnt reviewed this yet.
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  • From ANON - Tai on June 16, 2008
    What I find more hilarious is I've been working on my own story, a sort of parallel to Sinners... featuring cowboy Tai James Parry, and his Sonkun (in my head, the Sinnoh word for Kaishakunin), Spike the Lucario.

    Slash has had a pretty big effect on a large number of writers, it seems. Luckily I still have another piece to use as a trump card, which I actually intend to get up here once I have enough chapters.
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  • From puffball64 on June 16, 2008
    You know what's hilarious?

    I'm making a story as well, and it's been in it's development stage for at least a week.

    The main character's name is Noah.

    Bad-timing is what I'd call it.

    But I'm writing it off as a coincidence.

    Excellent story by the way, looking forward to reading more soon.
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  • From ANON - shadowed death657 on June 16, 2008
    amazing! wow keep it up... cant wait for next update :)
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  • From Iota on June 15, 2008
    :D
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  • From ANON - Fate on June 15, 2008
    Aw, Dude, Awesome.
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 15, 2008
    Also, That ropbot was a zerg minion. Guess which brood. Now FEEL THE WRATH OF THE RAGNAROK BROOD!
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 15, 2008
    Gather round guys, Its story time. Lemme tell ya a story bout a man namerd Jed, POor mountain man barely...Oh wait wrong story.
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  • From Iota on June 15, 2008
    YEA! Suck it robo-fag!

    Lucarios FTW. And I have a bodyguard now :D

    Before anymore robots come, I'm going to publish this chapter.

    It should be up in a few seconds!
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  • From ANON - Tai on June 15, 2008
    *comes in the moment before the robot rips out Iota's spine, and dispatches it with an Aura-charged slash attack*

    This author is hereby under Auran protection. Any complaints or queries can be fielded to myself or my companion Spike.

    *a sullen-looking Lucario looks up briefly as his name's called, arms folded*
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  • From ANON - A Robot on June 15, 2008
    *Rips out Iota's spine while he sleeps and beats him to death with it* Ha ha ha. That is one less human to worry about. Feel my robotic nerd rage. All your base are belong to us. You have no chance of survive make your time. Ha ha ha. *Clunks off to own Fate's base*
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  • From ANON - A Computer Voice on June 15, 2008
    Duly Noted. Prepare to die, Meatbag.
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