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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - ssbn on June 14, 2008
    @ Cerebrate Fate

    It's worth noting that I usualy read books, I got linked to this story from fchan.us, till 2 days ago I dident even know this website existed, but I am going to go read the story you mentioned while I'm thinking about it.
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  • From Iota on June 14, 2008
    :P People seem to review more when the new chapter comes out.

    I've gotten lots of Emails though :o

    And yer chapter will be done soon. Editing takes time, sadly ;_;
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 14, 2008
    Hey Iota! Its tomorrow. Wheres mah story? And am I the only one who actually comes on this review page these days or what?
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  • From Iota on June 14, 2008
    Haha, there you go, third time's a charm.

    Chapter Five is done!

    BUT.

    I have to do all that nifty editing work >_
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 14, 2008
    *facepalm* And there I went and did it again! I are an moran.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2008
    Oh...Ops. The above anon was me. Forgot to put my name in.
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  • From Iota on June 12, 2008
    Anon - Haha, thanks. It feels like there's a midget in my head trying to burst it's way out, but I'm working on the chapter. This next one is important :o.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2008
    @Iota: Glad you and everyone else in the pokemon section agrees. Also, hope your headache gets better, for 2 reasons. One: I would hate to have the next chapters delayed, and Two: I dont want you to die from a uber god headache of +5 killage.
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  • From Iota on June 12, 2008
    ssbn732 - :O Thank you for your review. I'm working practically nonstop on the new chapters. I'm actually not entirely sure where the story is going until I sit down and actually type it, but I have a basic Idea of the main events I want to happen. Anyway, enjoy your Tea, Moar will be delivered soon.

    Cerebrate Fate - Sinners kicks ass, too.

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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 11, 2008
    @SSBN O rly? Best you have read in a while eh? Check out Sinners, arcs 1 and 2 if you havent already. All available from this authors page:

    Linky Linky:

    http://anime.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296803608
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  • From ANON - ssbn732 on June 11, 2008
    I must say this is the bet thing I have read in a long while, I enjoy the good writing, lack of typos that most fanfics I've read seemed to be plauiged with, and great use of charecters. All I can realy do is scream "MOAR", keep up this great work.

    /me gets a cup of tea and waits patiantly
    PS: My spelling is a bit subpar.
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 11, 2008
    Responding to the above review:

    Blaziken is indeed an awesome pokemon. However, I do not see Blazikens, or any pokemon for that matter, in a romantic light. But I digress. You were right not to cut Blaziken, as Blazikens are awesome pokemons.
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  • From Iota on June 11, 2008
    Heh, I knew I'd get a review like that eventually, but it's all good, I get to answer some questions a lot of readers might be wondering.

    Here's what I think you're misunderstanding:

    The connection between Slash and Psymakio has developed so strongly due to their bonding, and allowing each other to see deeper and deeper into each other...I haven't really watched much of the Pokemon show, but I assume that a Gardevoir's bond with his/her trainer is an invention of Slash's. The bond is strong because they allow it to be.

    Lucario's, however, don't need to be bonded to shit, and they don't feel anything. Their innate ability is to simply -see- Aura. They can't reach into your mind and pluck out the times when you were happy/sad/angry or anything, it's not Psychic.

    I didn't create that ideal of a Riolu/Lucairio, that's been given to them by the Creators of Pokemon. If you have watched the movie "Lucario and the Mystery of Mew" I think it'll explain it better. The communicating into a persons mind wasn't even my unique trait to a Riolu/Lucario, it's also a characteristic of their Pokemon.


    I didn't want some crazed Pokefan in here yelling "OMGWTFBBQ U DnD INKLUD RIOLUZ ABILITty to ReeeD AURA Wtf?!".

    Make sure you know, there isn't a 'bond' between Riolu and Ariston. She can read the Aura of any living thing, and comminucate with it, thats just what Riolus/Lucarios do.

    As for the Blaziken?

    The Blaziken has always been one of my favorites of Pokemon, and just because in Sinners Chapter 21 there was a Blaziken introduced, I'm not going to cut her out of my story. The only thing the Blaziken in his story and the Blaziken in my story have in common is that they're the same pokemon.

    Trust me, the relationship between Iota/Blaziken in the last chapter is misleading.

    Protip: If you're not familiar with the pokemon I mention, just type their names in google image search to get an Idea of what I'm describing.

    That about covers everything, if you have anymore questions let me know.



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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 11, 2008
    Just finished chap. 4. Must say, I like it so far. The only crappy thing are the damn yaoifix ads at the top of the page, and the occasional spelling mistake. I have no experiance with the Sinnoh pokemanz, however, I noticed that the new pokemon, the one from the egg, (Not good with names that i dont know) has an ability similar to Psymakio. Namely, the ability to read emotions. And the Blaziken x Human/??? relationship? I thought you said that it would not be similar to Sinners in any way shape or form?
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  • From Iota on June 10, 2008
    Hahaha Yes! I was WAITING for someone to notice that!!

    I've always had the idea of this story in my head, but I've never written anything before I read Sinners. It inspired me so I thought I'd give Slash a Cameo in Chapter One.

    Quite Observant of you!

    (Though I don't think Slash has gotten a chance to read this yet.)
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