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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on June 10, 2008
    "A young black haired trainer with a tough looking female Gardevoir by his side."

    Slash? Slash Firestorm? What the fucking hell are you doing over in Sinnoh?
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  • From Iota on June 10, 2008
    :P Guess I should Proofread some more.

    I'll be sure to be more careful in the next chapter

    Thanks for the review !
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  • From Somatose on June 10, 2008
    Another fantastic chapter that requires proof reading. The story is absolutely brilliant and well thought out with well-developed characters and great imagery ('to a chilling degree'). The only problem is that at some points, there are grammatical and spelling errors, such as 'start' (which sould be 'stare'), 'word' (which should be 'world') and you've confused youself with whether and weather. Otherwise, an engaging story that flow very well...looking forward to the next chapter...
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  • From Iota on June 10, 2008
    :o Wow, that's quite a review.

    I really appreciate people reading my work :P.

    I've missed a few spelling a grammatical mistakes as I've edited that chapters, but I'm going to go back and fix them eventually. I've always been retarded when it comes to spelling and grammar. Thank god for spell check.

    Anyway, I'm glad you like it, and hope you keep reading.

    Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Zombie-Guy on June 10, 2008
    In all my years of reading random things I've found on the internet, Project Crucifix has got to be the best. The detail, the story, and your ability to keep us interested is simply amazing. The only few things that I'd have to tell you is that it's "stare" not "start" and there were a few other spelling errors, but it was hardly noticable.

    My score for Project Crucifix would have to be:

    Spelling: 85/100
    Grammar: 95/100
    Character Development: 100/100
    Reader Interest: 100/100
    Use of Lit. Effects 95/100

    Overall: 95/100
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  • From Iota on June 07, 2008
    Haha, thanks :P

    Yeah there will be a female that interacts with Ariston for some time later in the story, and a lemon will be coming up soon...The next chapter is big and I want to make sure it's done right.

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  • From Somatose on June 07, 2008
    Just read chapter 3 and it was excellent as expected...hope a lemon comes up quickly and also (for some fun) will you be giving Ariston a human travelling companion (preferably female)?
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  • From Iota on June 07, 2008
    :P Whops.

    I usually am pretty picky when I proofread my stories, but I got the last few updates out in a hurry, I was leaving the house right as I published one of them.

    Anyway, thanks for your support.
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  • From Somatose on June 07, 2008
    Another great chapter. I like your use of similis and metaphors. Be sure to spell check and proof read since I did find a few grammatical errors and you spelt Shane's name Ahane in one case. Anyway, I like where you're taking this...keep it up!
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  • From Iota on June 06, 2008
    Thanks for reading, shadowed death657, I have alot of plans for this story, and tons of ideas of what's going to take place between the traveler and Ariston. Not to mention Shane and Conti.

    I'm not sure if it's going to be in chapter three or four, but some drastic things are going to happen.
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  • From ANON - shadowed death657 on June 06, 2008
    cant wait for next update looks like this is going to get good
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  • From Iota on June 06, 2008
    Thanks for your support :D
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  • From Somatose on June 06, 2008
    fantastic story...very well written...looking forward to updates
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  • From Iota on June 06, 2008
    Thanks for reading, I'm working on chapter two right now, I'm going to try and get a new chapter out everyday.
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  • From ANON - trecers on June 06, 2008
    good story can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work.
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