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Reviews for Project Crucifix

By : Iota
  • From ANON - a wandering stranger on December 23, 2008
    chapters seven was very well done as always and I agree with Edward that the chapter served it's purpose well. however, as frustrating as cliffhangers are, it was better having a (end of the day the world is open to tomorrow) kind of cliffhanger instead of a (middle of battle will they live or will they die) cliffhanger. couple of errors but that is to be expected of any writer; that is why publishers require authors to have their work read and edited by one or more people. good luck trying to stick to a deadline Iota, I Know you can do it. Happy Holidays to you Iota and to all my fellow readers/reviewers.

    setting another pot of tea on to brew
    eagerly albeit patiently awaiting the next chapter
    a wandering stranger


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  • From ANON - Edward on December 11, 2008
    Cerebrate Fate, I kinda disagree. There were a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but with over 15,000 words, I think even after proof reading it's to be expected there would be one here and there.

    Also, I don't think this chapter should have had more Noah. This chapter was dedicated to Dr. Michaels, and the parts with Noah and Iota were just to remind us of where they are at right now, and not provide any new developments. I think this chapter served that purpose well, and Noah will get his chapter (again) later on as well.
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  • From Jinko on December 09, 2008
    Holy typewriters batman! I can see why it took so long
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  • From ANON - Doctor thoth on December 04, 2008
    It is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's to beautiful to be real. *stabs eyes* it is, It is real. Yessss, God bless this day.

    drunk and crying blood
    Feel-good-ologist
    Doctor T
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  • From ANON - Max on December 02, 2008
    Well, it DOES take balls to end a chapter with multiple cliffhangers (you bastard) but I did enjoy the chapter.

    Now come out with another, dammit.
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  • From Somatose on December 02, 2008
    Chapter 7 was well written and spelling/grammar mistakes were virtually non-existent. You've generally used language to good effect in this chapter. You've also tried to delve into the psychology of your characters which gave them good personalities. However, I personally found the 'Iota' and 'Ariston' storylines to be actually quite dull namely due to unnecessary detail that wasn't exactly 'enjoyable' to read...I also thought they were a bit of an add-on and would've liked them to be slightly fast moving. The chapter was lenghty (which was good) and it should be (you take too much time to update).

    That said, the story still has a lot of potential and is still very enjoyable to read, although it was a bit of a cliche at the end since I was expecting Michals to be saved at the last instant in this way. Far better would've been to just condemn him in order to shock the reader who knew that Michals would be saved at the end. I like the fact that you've given you're characters more 'shades of grey' personalities this time rather than the 'black and white' personalities found in earlier chapters.

    To end on a positive note, you've put in an immense amount of work into the story and there seem to have done a lot of research into different terms and in finding the right words for the occassion. I look forward to the next chapter (which hopefully won't take too long) and will be following this story closely.

    Somatose.
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  • From ANON - markman on December 02, 2008
    great new chappie!! *hugs lota*
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  • From Iota on December 01, 2008
    Mitsua - I'm happy you enjoyed it

    Cerebrate Fate - No violence more violence is needed! It's out, woo!! Oh, and by the way, my birthday is August 29th.

    Seraph - Heh, Pokemon + Max Payne, sounds cool. I couldn't bring myself to write Pokemon in the traditional manner, like you said, it's much too childish. But I'm glad you like the story.

    Jinko - Lol, Violence.

    a wandering stranger - You must be balls deep in tea by now, but nonetheless, It's finally out, woo~

    Xain - Oh god, the violence! On another note, I have no idea who Immortality is o_o.

    Edward - I sure wish haste would work when I write...

    David - Thanks for your review, David. I'm glad I could make you like my story so much. Happily, Chapter Seven is out now (and Chapter Eight will be soon to follow).



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  • From ANON - Edward on November 27, 2008
    *2 weeks from now*

    us: "...Iota when's chapter 7 come out?"
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on November 27, 2008
    Any time great master that you wish to give us the prize would be loved.
    * looks up a sky* " come on Iota i know your watching us.

    *still drinking to a healthy liver* (XD)

    feel-good-ologist

    doctor T
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on November 27, 2008
    "looks like we got a live one." *puts on scarry mask* "welcome to the world of waiting." "here you may sit and drink whatever, talk, or compete against others to see who is the most impatient as we all watch and wait for the glorious next chapter, that forbbiden fruit that hold the power to take us away from our boring lives and give us new meaning." *looks directly up with tears rolling dow my checks* "we await you great master to give unto us the golden treasure." "well now as for rule don't be loud and annoying or some one might challenge you to a fight, ( don't fight them), and if you are a troll cut your foot off and bleed out now. If your still reading this i'm obviously kidding. this what happens when you are bored and drunk.

    funny line fate. XD

    *drinking to a healthy liver* (XD)

    feel-good-ologist
    doctor T
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  • From ANON - David on November 27, 2008
    I must say, Bravo. You have taken a well warnout topic and breathed new life in to it. It takes alot of talent and creative thinking to do that and I congradulate you on your writing. What you have done no other fanfiction writer could do, you created a vivid picture that drew me into your story, caused me to read every word and left me wanting more. I want you to know that you have a gift that lets you take an story and make it your own. I egerly await your next posting.
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on November 17, 2008
    O_o................................................................ I've gotta get out of here,them they are coming to get me and i dont want to be the one to see them when the them geteses here to find the now me ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh O_o *fervantly looks around, screams, and runs headfirst into a tree*

    tripping on acid
    feel-good-ologist
    Doctor T
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  • From Jinko on November 14, 2008
    Woot! I keeps mah manhood! and yet I'm sad... I almost wanted him to put it up this week...
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  • From ANON - doctor thoth on November 08, 2008
    O_o oh thats just painful in text but to feel that,,,,,, * shivers in fear of that much pain* but a dare is a dare; better booze up before then. speaking of, time for a beer run.

    P.S. for your own safety stay if the roads for the next twelve hours


    drunk and crashed into a tree by the time you read this
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