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By : Iota

From Iota on August 27, 2008
Xain -- Indeed! Thanks!

Ace -- I'm glad you like it so much! I can never get enough criticism, I mean, there's always room to improve :P. The next chapter will be coming up soon.

markman - Thanks!

Cerebrate Fate -- Heh, I'm going to eventually re-write the earlier chapters, I'm going to add more substance and detail, I'd like them to be a bit better :P. As for FF.net, I'm going to publish the story exactly as I post it here :D, if they don't like it, they can take it down!

shadowed death657 -- I'm glad you like it!

Ragdoll -- Heh, I'm still alive! I agree, Iota's new talents are going to be fun to write about as well :P. As for the beta-reader, I'll see what the situation is once I finish Chapter Seven, and hopefully weed out any mistakes myself before I use any beta-reader heh.

Somatose -- Yikes! That's a lot of reading!

a wandering stranger -- I think of Pokemon battle strategy as more like military strategy, where you access any and all resources of your weapons, I try and make them more "Tactical". I WISH nintendo made Pokemon more badass, it's a great concept, just way, WAY too childish. The way I wrote Rorak's philosophy in Chapter Six is quite similar to my own, I usually try not to do things without a definite point to them, and there really is not point in getting angry, so what's the use? And by the way, thank you for the Tea.

doctor thoth -- Nope not dead yet! I plan to contin-- Oh lord, he's passed out and can't hear me.

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From ANON - doctor thoth on August 27, 2008
good to see you not down and out. and what you were saying about damp creativity, the same thing happens with me too. anyway since your back.....................................................Let's crack open a few bottles to celebrate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Passed out on the floor with a hangover
(by the time you read this review)

doctor thoth

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From ANON - a wandering stranger on August 27, 2008
good to have you back Iota. great job with chap. 6. impressive tactic of having physcic pokemon shield the other pokemon. it would be quite interseting if the scarry team galactic caught on and nintendo realesed a version of pokemon in which they all really are "bat shit crazy." looking forward to chap. 7

Enjoy the Tea (it's freshly brewed)
a wandering stranger

P.S. it is a great skill to have in life to not get mad over things. not many people can say that without outside "help" (ie: drugs, beer,sex,ect...) thats something to be proud of.
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From Somatose on August 27, 2008
Great to see you writing again.

I've just had to re-read chapters 1 to 5 to remind myself of the story and will probably start of chapter 6 tomorrow.

Will review chapter 6 as soon as I finish!
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From ANON - Ragdoll on August 26, 2008
Welcome back! I must admit, I didn't think we'd hear from you again.

The new chapter is very good. Story's really getting moving now, and the fighting is well written as always. Iota's new talents are going to be quite fun to read about, I imagine.

I think you need a new beta reader, though. I spotted quite a few silly errors that could've been avoided (a they're/there mixup was in there somewhere, I think, which always looks messy), and early out you used the word "Rorak" way too much. I'd be up for the job if you'd like to drop me an email. I can work rather quick if need be.
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From ANON - shadowed death657 on August 26, 2008
glad to see your back and love the new update
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From ANON - markman on August 25, 2008
that was so freakin awsome this is the best story ive EVER read
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From ShadowVulcan on August 25, 2008
Yay I'm the first to finish reading Chapter 7. Who needs sleep when you have great stories like this. I originally came in the hopes of a poorly written sex romp, but the story line drew me into the point where I almost forgot about it. Almost. I'm a writer myself, but my ability to describe things is lacking. I wrote Krystal's Adventures. It lacks a true story line and it is nothing but a poorly written sex romp, but I also like the critiques for the same reason as you. I guess what I'm trying to say is that your use of imagery is amazing compared to mine. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter already. I'm hoping to see some yiffing soon, but with the way the story is progressing either something is going to happen in the next chapter or once again the story telling will make me forget about it until the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Oh and Dark Link Omega and the impending Zerg hoards. -beep- ::Large mushroom cloud:: I guess that takes care of your impatient forces for a little while. Courtesy of SPC. Ace -Death Dealers-, proud leader of the Knights of the Eclipse.
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From xain34 on August 25, 2008
Sorry, forgot to log in. Anyway i'm going to read your chapter six now Iota. And you are right, i've yet to even see a fucking story on that site. Let alone a good one.
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From ANON - Xain on August 25, 2008
Well, it seems Iota proved the people talking shit about him wrong. Goodjob Iota.
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From Iota on August 24, 2008
Cerebrate Fate -- I'm not dead quite yet! Chapter Six is out!

ragdoll -- The wait sucked, I know, but its out now :P.

Espy -- Heh, "soon" was supposed to be about a month ago... It's all explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six.

dave -- Thanks for reading dave, I'm glad you like it.

markman -- Heh, thanks for your compliments, I've tried to make the story feel as 'real' as it can get, and I actually have already posted this on FanFiction.net, my Penname is "Noah Ariston" over there though.

David Davidson -- Go for it.

Shade -- Oh its been entirely writers block, Lol. I couldn't care less about AGNPH, really, it's trolls trolling trolls 24/7. Even if no one read my story I'd keep writing it, there isn't anything that will or can stop me from finishing the story.

Anon -- I'd never stop writing my story because of critique...Ironically from people whom have never read it...but anyways, Chapter Six is out and Chapter Seven will be coming (I hope) this month.

a piss off reader -- Errr, lets not do that... I'm not dead, I'm still writing heh, no one needs to invoke the wrath of SPARTA on anyone. I never get angry at anything, epically something as trivial as people angrily typing on forums. So, lets not get angry at anyone or troll anything, and just enjoy Chapter Six :D.

a wandering stranger -- You've hit the nail on the head. I'm actually really glad you were perceptive enough to know that I wouldn't get derailed by something like criticism, and that you know I wouldn't decide to end the story. I enjoy getting critiqued, it helps me become better. The entire delay is explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six (which is out, woo!). I hope you enjoy Chapter Six.

doctor thoth -- I see it like this: I find that If I read other stories, it dampens my creativity, because I'll see an element in the story that I've wanted to use in the future, such as a character trait, or a certain twist, and then when I sit down to write, I'll have to not use that element because I've already seen it done. I just enjoy writing the ideas that come to me, but of course, if a story is exceptional, I'll read it just for fun :P.

Ragdoll -- Heh, I agree. Though, he IMd me at one point, and I eventually had him apologizing after I got one of the site admins (who enjoyed my story) to tell him to shut the fuck up. So, everything worked out :P. It never discouraged me though, I've just hit some...'speed-bumps' .

Jinko -- The internet sure is scary, but I've managed to survive!

Sam -- I'm glad you like it so much! I'm defiantly going to continue it until the end...which will eventually make it a long, long story..But anyway, Chapter Six is out, and I hope you enjoy :D.

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If you don't feel like reading every response to every review, here's the important stuff:

� I'm alive
� Chapter Six is out
� The delay is explained in the Author's Notes of Chapter Six.
� I could care less about AGNPH
� A site admin told the forum moderator to shut the fuck up
� I love criticzm in all forms, educated and ignorant (one is helpful, the other is funny) and it never discourages me
� I'm going to finish this story no matter what
� And uh, yeah, that's it, go read!

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From ANON - Sam on August 24, 2008
Holy canole! This story certainly was a good read so far, I do hope very much that you continue it! I mean, I'm not usually one for fanfiction, but dang, this is certainly a gem of one, so that says something for me.
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From Jinko on August 22, 2008
To dash down any false hope, That "was" my "review" and yes, I obviously didn't read the reviews first. Jinko apologizes, I removed my own and replaced it.
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From ANON - Ragdoll on August 20, 2008
Urh.. I swear there was a complimentary review in place of yours, just this morning. It should be between yours and mine, but it isn't - it was left as if the reviewer hadn't read the review page.

Can only authors and mods delete reviews, or can users delete their own? Because if it's the former, Iota must still be lurking.
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From Jinko on August 20, 2008
Well the story seems great... but Iota seems to have gone missing for a month now. I fear for the worst. You never can tell over the internet.
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