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From DeathNoteFangirl on July 15, 2008
Oh! Right! I'll have a think about it.

There is another story coming. It's nearly finished, but I need someone else to finish their story first as I've bounced mine off her's.
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From saigocage on July 03, 2008
Yeah you can post this story there, since they have a section for mature content only.

And cant wait for your next story.
^___^
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From DeathNoteFangirl on July 01, 2008
Thank you very much. I've recently found someone arguing that Jeevas sounds like a Greek name, though again there's no evidence that it actually is. From what I can gather, there really is no language in the world where Jeevas would exist. The Sanskrit has Jeeva, but the plural wouldn't be Jeevas. So Spanish he is. :D

Morgie was the first to really highlight Mello's Catholicism and it was that which inspired much of what followed. I've since been back to the manga and can't believe that I missed it the first time round. It's definitely written into the original.

I envisaged their sado-masochism as both of them fully engaged. Mello can definitely be a bit of a git independently of Matt (see footballs being killed in people's faces and small children dragged up the corridor by their hair, in Wammy's House for a start). Then you have to look at Matt's psychology. The Wammy House doesn't produce balanced people. They all have their idiosyncracies, but they also all have a fiercely competitive streak, just see L (with Raito) and Mello and Near with each other for that. Then you get Matt. The whole pattern should have him in absolute competition with Mello and Near, but instead he's helping Mello. Nowhere does it say, 'Ohai Mello, I'm watching this wall for you for six days, but it's only so I can catch Kira and prove I'm the best.' He just does it. That, to me, suggests someone who has emerged from the Wammy House either extremely well-balanced or in a self-effacing relationship with Mello.

Oops! You're right, Takada didn't have Shinigami eyes! :o :box:
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From Ninelives on June 25, 2008
First of all, I remembered that indeed, there are some words in spanish with double 'e', but they're all verbs. Examples: Leer (to read), creer (to believe or to have faith). Jeevas would be a weird name in spanish, anyway ^^U but I liked the idea of Matt and Mello speaking Spanish so yay for Spanish Matt ;)

And now, to the real review. I've just finished reading. It's one of the longest fanfics I've read lately (i usually go for one shots) but it was more than worthy, each chapter. You were able to fill the holes in the plot, those spaces that left me wondering what were they doing at that moment, and specially, I loved that you gave an reason for them to not kidnap Raito instead of Takada, cause it's been bothering me for ages hehe. I know, it's just cause it was Near who had to win, but I liked that you gave a real reason. Also, it was lovely the use of small details you did, as those mannequins we see randomly thrown on the floor, and you assumed they were what Matt and Mello shot at. Very good.

You're Mello is very well displayed, very IC, in my opinion, and incredibly sexy. Also, I never liked Mello as a Catholic, or believer in any way, but you did such a good work that I'm changing my mind about it a little. It adds one more layer to the character, and makes him suffer and self-torture in an interesting way.

Last chapters made me wonder if it was Mello who was a sadist, orMatt, being so submissive and masochist, who pushed Mello to being like that. I think it's called "topping from the bottom", right? I0m not sure about it, cause in one hand, Matt looks like he really asks for it, he really enjoys it. In the other, it may be just cinditioning, since Mello loves to make it clear that Matt's his. Or it may be easier and it's the two of them who like it, and they just match together.

Matt, you made such a good job with this character. I like to think of him like that, like the tender spot for Mello, the thing that keeps his sanity,as you said. That's why I love this pairing so much. Being a Mello fan, I want him to finally have something of his own, cause it's sad that he was always the loser, the one who left, the one who died, the one who never had anything. Matt, portrayed like this, makes Mello finally have something. And it's that what makes Matt such an important character (for a 15 panels-character, I mean), and makes their relationship different form any other in DN. I can think of them, as the only character with real feelings and bounds. Yeah, I'm aware it's all fanom, but I like thinking of it like that.

I don't want to write a Bible with a comment LOL so I'll stop here. Just thank you very much for writing this.

P.s.: Sorry! I have a few questions I need to do for the drawing, but i odn't know if it's fine to make them here or not ^^U

p.s.2:Did Takada have the eyes of shinigami?? I thouhgt she didn't o.o
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From DeathNoteFangirl on June 24, 2008
Thank you very much for your kind words. :D

*takes requests* An AU where they don't die. Check.

I didn't think I'd be able to post things like this on fanfiction, because of the graphic smut. Can I?
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From saigocage on June 22, 2008
This is the firs time ever that I am actually sad that a fanfic ended. Honestly, your fanfic has been one of the BEST Matt x Mello fanfics that I have ever read. And hands down, you protrayed their relationship better than anyone else I've ever read. It was a wonderful, beautifully written, well thought out story.

I think you should post this story on fanfiction.net
Because it doesnt seem like you are getting a lot of readers here, which I know that you deserve so many more readers. Good job and I hope you write another Matt x Mello fanfic, probably an AU, so they dont have to die. XD
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From DeathNoteFangirl on June 17, 2008
Hi. :D

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No 'ee' in Spanish? :( My thinking is here: http://mrsjeevas.livejournal.com/1016.html?thread=760#t760, which is how I came to the conclusion that he's Spanish.

As for Mello, that's a mixture of Morgie taking me under her wing and teaching me what a Mello is; and the natural arch of the story. I keep stopping and thinking, 'Imagine being Mello right now! Dude thinks he pwns Near, which means that right now, he thinks he's the only person standing between Kira and Kira's world domination; then he's got added pressures of Matt being Matt; add to that pure Mello angst...' I figured it's not so much being calmer, as forcing himself to be so, as he feels like he's managing everything. It's not like the Mafia, when you can just bark orders and they'll get done. He can still bark the orders and they'll get done, but then he'll have to put up with Matt being moody afterwards.

Poor lamb.
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From Ninelives on June 17, 2008
Hi!!^^
I'm reading, still in chap 15 but yeah...I'm on it.
Matt's Spanish? Wow I'm too LOL Actually I odn't think Jeevas could never be a spanish name (I can't think of any spanish word with "ee" in it), but it was cute ^o^ We're seeing a nicer, less sadistic side of Mello in this chapters. It's good (although I loved the roughness like woah).

Keep up the nice work!
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From DeathNoteFangirl on June 13, 2008
Too late. :D

I enjoy your stories and your English is extremely good. I'm also looking at your pwnage art. Nice one! :D

Thank you for telling people about me. *little shivery grin because it is lovely to have your stuff read, even if you writing it because it's fun*
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From Ninelives on June 13, 2008
Love it.I really hope yo'r continueing this soon cause otherwise I'd have the same problem Matt had at the airplane XD
Oh and how cute was the safeword?? It made me giggle.

I'm recommending thi fic (and the prequel) to everyone ^^

((BTW, please!! don't read my stuff XDD I'm a bit ashamed ^^U))
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From DeathNoteFangirl on June 13, 2008
Thank you very much. *all grins*
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From Orditz on June 13, 2008
I really enjoyed "It Matters" and now this series. You write very graphically and the descriptions are well constructed. I really hope you are going to write more. Thanks
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From DeathNoteFangirl on June 12, 2008
That could work. :p

You realize that the LxLight pairing is supposed to pwn MattxMello, through sheer quantity, but there's only 10 more there than here.
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From ryuuzakilover2008 on June 12, 2008
Cute!! We should though, no one seems to anymore but us... lol
Maybe we can even work together in the future!! I really want to do
an Mpreg... but I always need someone to help keep me from just
making the characters tear their clothes off and fux!! lol
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