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Reviews for Law and Right

By : Chaggit
  • From ANON - blondie3755 on September 20, 2009
    Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed this story. I only came across it after it was completed, and I'm so glad I could read the whole thing all at once, as I would have hated having to wait for updates - the story was just so good. Going to check out your other stuff now. *glomps*
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  • From ANON - dragon_fly126 on September 01, 2009
    I really enjoyed this fic. It's diffently one of my most favorite, it was beautifully written and very compelling.
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  • From ANON - NoneYa on April 02, 2009
    American white girl here who's made onigiri before. o3o^

    You're supposed to wet your hands so that the rice doesn't stick to you, and I seriously doubt that the onigiri would taste any good without salting your hands also. xD

    When you mush it into a ball the salt melts on the rice and stabilizes the entire thing so it wont fall apart (hopefully).

    And the rice is already moist (and hot) when you're holding it so wetting the seaweed is totally unnecessary. Actually I'm sure if you DID so that then then it would be even more likely to tear.

    Just felt like sharing some knowledge. :'3

    I'm liking the fic too, btw. ;'D
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  • From daiesthai on August 03, 2008
    Something I found funny was "American Secret Service." I may not know whether it's real or fake since I don't live in America, but it sort of... passed to me as dropping hints of sexual innuendo[s].

    What I'm saying? "...If that were to form an acronym..."

    I found that funny.

    "...! XD"
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  • From ANON - kati-chan on July 27, 2008
    Hi, I know this is a bit rude of me, but your chapter warnings said that there were spoilers. can I jsut ask, before I read, if there are spoilers for anything after the tenth volume of the manga? Cause this story looks really successful, so it must be good and I want to read it, but I don't want to get eny nasty surprises either... So, my email is mypheonixfire@hotmail.com could you please email me to say whether or not I should be able to read this? Thank you for your time. xxx
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  • From ANON - TenshiHaku on July 03, 2008
    Yes I followed the story till the end. And for me the identity of Kira came as a surprise. I did have a slight suspicion of him when L asked him to join since he is of the 'keep your friends close but enemies closer' type and when he started to give a lot of information to his Watari. Usually it is the other way around. I have to say you completely fooled me with Ryuk in the van and I really thought one of them was Kira. I'm glad it turned out to be Near. I do have a question though. Was it Near who bought the negatives for the pictures? And if not then who did? (perhaps an idea for a sequel?) Loved your story.

    TenshiHaku
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  • From ANON - yuneek on July 03, 2008
    That was actually a really nice, clean way to wrap up Law and Right, I think :) I'm sad to see such a good fic end... but I really enjoyed the ride! The fluff was a nice touch XD I love fluff, no matter how corny. Thanks for all the hard work you've put into this :) I'll keep an eye out for any more of your fics!
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  • From ANON - yuneek on July 03, 2008
    Alright so checking in here at chapter 24! God you update fast, I want to hug you! Aaah I'm trying to remember all the things I wanted to comment about... I liked how the picture thing was resolved (at least partly?) :) I wouldn't mind a set of those photos myself XD But who was taking them and who were the negatives sold to? Is that going to be something important later on?

    Love the fact that Near was Kira! XD I've already mentioned, I don't like that little bastard. But wow, the Kira-Arc got a little confusing for me. Good thing you broke it down at the end of chapter 24 :) I had no idea that Near was going to be Kira! Pfft, but he was like a baby-Kira. L and Light thoroughly owned his ass. Even Ryuk was fooled XD I was feeling betrayed though when Light told Mello and Matt he was going to help them. So the Kira-arc overall was very elaborate and expertly pulled off!

    Is Soichiro going to be okay? I mean how freakin weird is that that he gets hit by a car :( He's not one of my favorite characters but still... I hope he pulls through.

    Oh, I almost forgot to mention! My favorite part was definitely the explanation that all the task force, Mello, Matt, and Light were wired up to take a false heart-attack! I don't know why, I just found that hilarious. I'm surprised no-one hit Matsuda's XD Well I'm gonna go finish up the next two chapters. Thanks so much for the quick updates!
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  • From ANON - yuneek on July 01, 2008
    I get super excited whenever I check AFFN and find that Law and Right's been updated :D

    How did Near get a monitor of L and Light's bedroom?! Near's such a creep, I've never liked his character D:< So for now, L thinks the new Kira's gotta be one of his heirs because they want him to 'decide'? And I loved how you explained L's name only being one letter. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on June 30, 2008
    oooh. its beautiful. just beautiful. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - TenshiHaku on June 26, 2008
    Yes I am still following the story. Even if it slowed down I don't mind a bit since the chapters are still pretty big and you still seem to update daily.I like how you gently eas into this new plot.Having Light meet Sayu was a real surprise! And I can understand her being angry but not to angry. (after all she just got her brother back after thinking he was dead for 6 years) I think I would have reacted the same if I was her. I'm still curious about the new kira. We still don't know to much about him/her. All I hope is that it doesn't turn out to be Sayu. This fic is still great keep it up!

    Tenshihaku
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  • From spoon10488 on June 24, 2008
    Yeah new chapter me happy! That was a twist, Light's sister huh? Interesting. I can't wait to see where this goes.
    =)
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  • From ANON - yuneek on June 22, 2008
    um... WOW. I've read a lot of raped!Light fics before but this is... WOW!!! I mean, you go through the whole healing process and then BEYOND it!! Law and Right is simply amazing and I never want it to end XD Most rape-fics just end with Light somewhat getting over the rape but then you went and threw in another Kira!!! Holy crap! I seriously did NOT see that coming! I absolutely love how you wrote the slow build-up of trust between L and Light. I'd go on but if I point out everything I love about Law and Right I'd basically just be giving you a recap of the whole freakin story XD I'm just like blown away with how good L&R is and I can't wait to read more :) Thank you for all the effort you've put into writing this fic!
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  • From spoon10488 on June 22, 2008
    Awesome chapters. I like this story very much. I can't wait to find out who the next Kira is. I'm hoping for Teru.
    =)
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  • From ANON - TenshiHaku on June 22, 2008
    Al I can say is you're the best! I love your story! It is so rare to find a story with a good plot, decent chapter size, and that doesn't move to fast but you're doing it.I really like how you didn't skip the healing of Light from the rape like a lot of authors do. I find it makes the story a little hard to follow. And you really keep Light in character even though he has changed a little but I just find it shows the change because of the rape. This is aslo something a lot of authors tend to forget, after being raped you'll never be completely the same again. And I have a feeling Light is not completely over it yet. I look forward to read more of the story.

    TenshiHaku
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