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Reviews for Law and Right

By : Chaggit
  • From ANON - FrozenWishes on June 21, 2008
    Thank you once again for replying to my review. I enjoy the feedback almost as much as I enjoy your story! Chapter 10 and 11 were WONDERFUL. Light's meltdown was a masterpiece of pieces of, well, glass actually.... but yeah!! Heheh. So sorry! In the States, we have this wonderful little engery drink called BAWLS, which is filled with guarana. I'm on a power sugar rush like you have no idea... when did my speech get so impaired? Anyways, I've had cucumbere kimche, and though it was very good, thesaucekindacameoutfunnyandisitjustmeoramIramblingon.. OH HEY BOYS-- ah!! *whomp!*
    Light: I thought you were supposed to be reviewing...
    L: I believe she is trying, Light-kun, she is merely Retardedly And Intoxicatling Talking On... and she appears to have tripped on her drinking bottle...
    Light: Retardedly And Intoxicatingly Talking On.... very funny L.
    L: Light-kun states the obvious, considering the aformentioned words spell out his name.
    Light: Yes well.... wait... they what?? *examines words* HEYYY!!!
    L: Frozen-san would like to make me a cake now??
    FW: *twitch* Mmm... more BAWLS please...
    L and Light: .........
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  • From ANON - FrozenWishes on June 21, 2008
    Ok, the last two chapters were just so, so...... HILARIOUS!! L+Cake= worried Watari??!! Ahhhh... that hurt my funny bone *wipes happy tear* ANywho, nice character development so far. It's nice to take a few breaks from the drama sometimes to show that our boys still have emotions in them that don't always lead to angst (ee gods I hate that word) Keep it up, while I eat this unfortunate onigiri (mine always come out square), with a candied plum of course. I tired it with a pickled one once.... I don't recomend it... ~F.W.
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  • From ANON - FrozenWishes on June 20, 2008
    O.o..........3 chapters... in 24 hours added? AND they continue to impress me? You, my plot-high-bunny fiend, have got my attention. Let's look at chapter 3. MisaMisa surprised me by almost giving up on her Light-kun. It almost through me off, until Ryuuzaki came in and ruined the moment. Nice save. This IS all about the boys now. But I appreciated the sentiment that, though Light still doesn't care much for Misa, he cared ENOUGH to tell her to enjoy the rest of her life (which probably isn't very long anyways, but hell, she's ANNOYING). Chapter 4 FREAKED ME OUT!!! Light put to death???? I was close to tears T.T But another chapter later reunites with our God-plexed super-not-really-genious. It was sweet and longlived, but L starts to show his compassionate side for Light (Raito, J, Toshiro, Yagami-kun, etc.), and Light indeed starts to open up! Im awaiting future chapters from you my dear!!! A devoted follower. ~F.W.
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  • From ANON - FrozenWishes on June 19, 2008
    You know, I've read at least twenty rape fics (between AFF and FF), and they were good, but mediocre. Momentum Mori (if you've read it; I suggest it) was one of my favs and the first one I've read. I congradulate you for rising above the mediocre. You have the potential to make this one of the best fics I will ever bestow my eyes upon. The first chapter almost turned me away. I'm so used to authors describing the scene the way you portrayed: cold, dark, raining, pain, blood; and of course this all makes sense, but I tend to dislike routine. But as I kept going, Light's character stayed just that... in character. The second chapter is always a challenge because, Light's been raped, now comes L's reaction. I liked the point in where a thorough physical came in, so we don't have to go through mindless chapters in where L needs to figure out why Light's demeanor has changed. It was straight and to the point; very puntial and I liked it. And finally (hope you enjoyed the review) I enjoyed how, even though Light was raped, L stiil furfills his role as a detective and enlightens the teen he is arrested for being Kira. Please continue to update, as I will be looking on with hopeful thoughts.
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