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Reviews for A Dark Night

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  • From ANON - brill story on July 29, 2011
    This is a brilliant story.
    Will it be continued?
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  • From ANON - Siren13443 on July 17, 2011
    I was a little scared to read this at first but I read it and I love it.
    Are you going to add any chapters in the future or is this it?

    Anyway the four chapters that are up are a good read. Hope you decide to finish it cause it's one of the better stories on here (Even if it has hints of May liking Ash...)

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  • From ANON - banditte on July 13, 2011
    This is good. You should let us in on that poker scene that Ash is so scared of.
    Are you still updating?
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  • From ANON - Tamper118 on July 10, 2011
    What is this? And why can't I stop reading?
    I'm liking the plot. Glad you are kinda sticking with the episodes and added May! But she Loves him?... wait what?

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lemonlime77 on June 21, 2011
    This story is dark, twisted, and just plain f***ed up, and for some reason I just cannot stop reading it. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Darcy on June 17, 2011
    This story was well written (as promised) and I never thought anyone would ever write anything like this!
    I would like to hear about this poker incident!
    Good to see it's being updated again.
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  • From ANON - epleop on June 16, 2011
    This is... This is horrible but in a terribly good way!
    Very exciting. Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2011
    Absolutely amazing as usual!:D Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Manly on May 02, 2011
    Well if it's reviews you want!

    This story is so sick it's great! I love the plot (and it makes me feel less like a pervert)
    I always come on this website once a month to see if you've updated it or not.
    Keep it up!


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  • From Loulybob on April 07, 2011
    Yay, new chapter ^-^ This story gives me faith that it doesn't matter how long a fic is left there is a chance it is continued. Anyway, I'm loving the story so far, everyone is IC apart from Brock (obviously). The Jennys are getting suspicious though...PLOT DEVELOPMENT FTW :D And poor Ash and the 'poker' incident D':

    Keep Writing :D
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  • From ANON - pippyplease on March 18, 2011
    Keep the chapters coming! I need to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - gen on January 12, 2011
    I'm going to keep an eye on this. Are you still writing it?

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  • From ANON - Jessica on December 24, 2010
    Poor ash...
    nevertheless, this is an excellent story, you should continue it!
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  • From ANON - Alex on November 19, 2010
    This is a review of both chapters as a whole, really.
    I came here by means of Topless Robot, a nerd news site with a fascination with posting sexual fanfiction, usually involving rape or gore, so the site runner Rob can make funny comments about the horrifying sexual acts. These fan-fictions have made me notoriously hard to shake or disturb.
    So, onto this disgusting fan fic.
    It's obvious the author is a talented writer, and it's obvious he gets his rocks off by thinking about gay anime rape. That's fine, we all have gross fetishes, most of us just don't plaster them on the internet.
    From a technical standpoint, the story is quite good. It builds suspense and uses dialogue very cleverly. The bit about Onix fucking Ash was certainly disgusting, but thankfully did not go into detail (though the description of Onix's cum made me laugh out loud.) Brock's reimagining as a horrible manipulative bastard is excellently done, especially as all of it is explained. His threat to let Onix rape Dawn was chilling, and while the first chapter was disgusting, I look forward to reading the next chapter. I'll keep my eye on this story.
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  • From ANON - ebony on October 29, 2010
    Next chapter! In the cruelest way possible!
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