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Reviews for A Dark Night

By : PokemonPr0nPal3000
  • From on April 13, 2009
    dude i loved it i want more
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  • From ANON - Kevin on February 25, 2009
    Would've loved a bit more detail on the part where Onix was screwing the hell out of Ash but otherwise it is a great story. Can't wait for the sequel. :)
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  • From ANON - Alipeewee on February 08, 2009
    Just leaving a review to say - do the next bit!

    I would hvae thought that Onix would...kill Ash,rather than just hurting him. Cause his penis would probably be wider than Ash's head.

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  • From ANON - Knykymunky on January 04, 2009
    I absolutely loved this story!
    I am soooo curious as to what other pokemon(and their sexual ways) do to ash. I love the whole Crazy!brocK and the pathetic!ash. loveit, loveit, loveit.

    goodjob fellow sicko

    love--Josh
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  • From girlgold8 on January 02, 2009
    okay yea, i'm totally interested in reading more. i feel bad that i'm taking pleasure from ash's pain, but the good thing is that he's a fictional character. i'm definately encourageing u to write more...and possibly use toys in the next chapter (if there's gonna be one), but that's just a suggestion of course. anyway, hav a good new year ^^
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  • From ANON - Rob on December 27, 2008
    I liked this story a lot... I would love to know what happens next. (srry i know it's not really a review but keep up the good work)
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  • From ANON - Keira on November 05, 2008
    i wanna know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Konkat on October 28, 2008
    Dear god, that might just have been one of the funniest bits of smut I've ever read. You're awesome. That thing about Onyx deciding Ash must be female was priceless. It was very OOC though, but who gaves a damn at this point? That was great. XD
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  • From ANON - Cherry on October 24, 2008
    That story was certainly interesting! Yes, you're one sick puppy, but I'm sick too...write number 2!
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  • From ANON - Miss Mari on October 12, 2008
    You should seriously write the next few chapters. That was pretty amazing.
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  • From tash1021 on September 14, 2008
    ohh continue you pretty pretty pleaseee
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  • From ANON - agnidragon on September 04, 2008
    It was a good story. I like how you did Ash actually. A sequal would be nice. I'm interested in knowing how this develops.

    I'll tell the truth tho, I almost didn't read it based solely on your bestiality warning. Bestiality isn't exactly my cup of tea. Infact, I find it quite disgusting. A key thing tho...if this is supposed to be based on actual knowledge of the male anatomy, then it was really silly to put in Onix of all pokemon... if a creature made of rock ever actually did something like that, esp a creature as large as an Onix, a teenage male(any normal human for that matter) would have most likely been killed, or at the very least been crippled. Try and be a bit more logical and sensible if yr actually looking to be accurate. I'd strongly recommend in sequals you steer away from bestiality in general, and opt for a big vibrator, cock rings, and various other sex toys and what not to further your S/M theme. You can leave the Pokemon(onix in this case) there for Brock to use as empty threats, but I strongly suggest nothing more then that.
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  • From ANON - Rosa on August 26, 2008
    I liked it. A lot.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2008
    that was a fun read XD! Hope to see another at one point.
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  • From ANON - a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h. on August 21, 2008
    This is the first Pokemon fanfic I have ever read and I think you did a good job with it. Wow... Onix... *whistles* That was pretty harsh. Ah, well, I'd like to see what happens anyway. By the way, I LOVE Brock.
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