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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

By : Capitalist
  • From Scorpinac on September 13, 2008
    Hmm, and here I figured he was making a potion to force down Syaoran's throat. I suppose an enchanted pendant works, too. Hehehehehe, I think someone's getting close to the breaking point! Personally, I'm putting my money on Kero telling Sakura the truth first, though whether or not she'll ever learn about Yue's attempted deal with Syaoran back in L1 remains to be seen as only Syaoran can tell her about that(Touya can tell her about the truth, but I don't think he ever knew about the actual deal that went with it). Well, until chapter 8, then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Gryffgruff on September 09, 2008
    Another excellent chapter. :)

    I'm glad that Rai didn't hurt Tomoyo when he found her. (Darn her voice for getting her in trouble. xD)

    I also loved the interactions between the doorknockers and Touya. Somebody's in denial. ;)

    I can't wait for the next update, and as always keep up the good work.
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  • From vix111 on September 09, 2008
    wait, he is the king's son?
    And I think I missed the part where Rai's wings got described, because I was like 'he has WINGS??' XD

    I don't think Tomoyo is in much danger...for the time being. Am I the only one who thinks that those crystal shards ARE NOT pieces of Yue, but some sort of locator of the sort? I said it before, they remind me of his weapon shards.

    Very funny part with the King's consort. Poor sword and shield, though, they are stuck with what they got for being obnoxious. Really interesting twist with Li, and now Sakura is on a second plane XD
    That does not happen usually on CCS fics with Sakura and Syaoran as the main couple ;D

    That's it for this week. And 150 pages already?? WOW. My hat's off to you, Capitalist, how could you write so much without the temptation of posting???

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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on September 07, 2008
    Poor Tomoyo and her voice getting her into trouble...
    Extremely curious as to what exactly Touya dove into the brawl for that magically clicks together... could it have anything to do with Yue? 8D?? (Or I'm just looking for any excuse to drag Yue into this)

    Thank you for the lovely new chapter~ can't wait for next week!
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  • From Scorpinac on September 06, 2008
    Damn, he found Tomoyo-chan. At least he didn't kill her outright, there's that I suppose. But still... Yeah, Syaoran's definitely identifying with Skywalker, ain't he? Poor boy. Nice revisit with the Junk Lady, still crabby as ever I see. And I definitely liked how you used those two crazy doorknockers(and making them Sword and Shield was cute, too.). Oh, yeah, this is gonna get a bit nasty before it gets better, I can see that a mile away! But then, if it I didn't it wouldn't be a Capitalist masterpiece! Until chapter 7, then! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on September 05, 2008
    This was an interesting chapter but I'm starting tom think that whoever said those were pieces of Yue were right. Also, will Yukito show up and if so would he be Yue when he's weak or his own character?
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  • From ANON - Ranna on September 05, 2008
    That darn plot! It never goes like you want it to! *laughs* I love this!
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on September 02, 2008
    I don't think I could ever ever say that I hated you... even with a horrible cliffhanger that leaves me aching for more plot and chapters. I'm very very interested to see how this particular turn of events unfold with Syaoran's life now. And by very very interested, I really want to know... like now. 8D;;

    Wait, does this mean that as son of the Storm King, he has powers? :D???

    ...Would the next chapter be a good one for Yue to appear in?

    Oh and have I mentioned lately how much I love you?
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on September 02, 2008
    I'm going to try my best to review you for every chapter you write from here on out even if all I really want to do is push the 'read next chapter' button.

    Fairies, the little bitches. That's all I have to say on that.

    I love the discussion between Kero and Syaoran at the end in which they both try to push the responsibility of telling Sakura the truth about Yue and Touya. It's as if I could see it playing out right before me. Very nicely done.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how the developments in this chapter help put the next set of events into action. Oh and an obligatory can't wait for Yue's appearance. The good plums in the tree must be linked to this right? :DDD
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  • From ANON - loooplooop on August 30, 2008
    weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loooooooove this story more please more
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  • From ANON - Ranna on August 30, 2008
    Oh my god!!!! Now, that I wasn't expecting! You are so great.
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  • From Scorpinac on August 30, 2008
    No, I most decidedly did not. I actually sort of thought he survived because of this world's version of the Shield card buffering most of the hit, not that Syaoran was the SOB's son! ("Syaoran, I am your father!" "NOOOOOO!!!" Sorry, couldn't resist...) Hopefully he'll get over th shock before too long and something else happens. God, you're good! Until chapter 6, then. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on August 29, 2008
    That was cruel but I'm loving it. I guess this means he has an even smaller chance of being able to be with Sakura because of Yue.
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  • From ANON - Gryffgruff on August 29, 2008
    This was an excellent chapter!

    I still can't believe that Li is Rai's son. I definitely didn't see that coming. xD

    Well keep up the good work and I can't wait till next Friday!!!
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  • From ANON - absinthe on August 29, 2008
    Ooooh, no, I didn't see it coming at all! Evil author you! Poor Li-kun, evil bastard invader is his father, hope he doesn't have to be the one to kill him in the end.

    Can someone PLEASE smack Touya upside the head, denial really isn't a good look on him, it's soooo obvious he misses our pouty winged king, I think he's just miffed because he only visited him in dreams, and didn't come and ravish him in person.
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