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Reviews for Return to the Labyrinth

By : Capitalist
  • From ANON - snapelicious on August 28, 2008
    OMG YAY! Capitalist is back! ^^

    Those damned fairies. Li should have Hoggle-sprayed 'em. Only good pixie's a dead one.
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on August 24, 2008
    *fangirl moment*OMG I'm love with this story. On a serious note. Is this going to be anywhere as long as the first one? Or maybe even longer, yeah longer's good. Will Sakura ever find out about Touya and Yue.
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  • From Scorpinac on August 24, 2008
    Okay, crap... Stupid carnivorous fairies... And would I be right in guessing that those shards that Touya's been find are, in fact, pieces of Yue? If so, ouch... Well, hopefully they'll get away before the gargoyle's come, and maybe Sakura can get to meet Spinner and Ruby(though that'll probably not go down well...). And is there any chance of Meilin making an appearance this time? Well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Gryffgruff on August 24, 2008
    Another wonderful chapter!

    I wonder if Sakura will be hurt when she finds out that Yue loves Touya, or if she will have gradually fallen for Li so that when she does find out, it won't hurt as much (or even matter). I love the re-introduction of Kero!! xD

    Well, keep up the great work and I'll see the next chapter on Friday! :3
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  • From vix111 on August 23, 2008
    I missed on reading tomoyo's chapter last week, so I got to read two chapters today! yay!
    Good to see she has managed to stay well all this time. Touya should have taken something useful from the castle (at least a pair of shoes!) but I guess he's so driven he *sometimes* forgets the most needed things.
    Those evil fairies! Coincidentaly, I read the part where the fairy bites off the girls finger in the first labyrinth, so I actually got the joke this time around! Also, the 'big damn heroes' episode was one of the few firefly episodes that I actually saw and the phrase stuck with me. That, and I have been reading tons of TV tropes this week.
    Great chapter, and yay kero is here! Hopefully, Li's next fight will come at the day (and not the middle of the night!) so kero can help.

    ...I hope Sakura is not very serious about her Yue infatuation. Unless you are playing with the threesome (lol! like in that other story you talked about)...but then again, you wouldn't do that to Li.

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  • From ANON - Absinthe on August 22, 2008
    Oooh, bad fairie, rip her wings off, I say! Poor little Syaoran, even in fantasy land he can't get a break, he loves Sakura and she's hung up in her brother's boyfriend, lol. I am so curious about those crystal shards Touya keeps falling over, are they the pieces of Yue's poor broken heart? Ha!! I have it, he collects all the bits of what he broke, puts them back toghether, and Yue returns!! *g* Seriously though, still loving this.
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  • From silvergirlrox on August 22, 2008
    Great chapter!! im really curious to see what role the chunks of clear crystal has to play. Aww poor Sakura shes gonna be so sad when she finds out Yue loves Touya!!! And poor Li! *runs away crying*
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  • From ANON - Ranna on August 22, 2008
    I can't wait to see the expression on Sakura's face when she realizes Yue *slept with her brother.* That should be hysterical.
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  • From ANON - Mica on August 21, 2008
    Oh, bless you for coming back!

    I missed you and your wonderful chapters so much!
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  • From ANON - cherrixwolf on August 21, 2008
    I love the (re-)introduction of Tomoyo in this chapter, especially with her specified role as servant to Touya. I'm interested as to how Touya and Sakura/Syaoran meet up with each other in the Labyrinth (if they do at all since it is called a labyrinth for a reason) Poor Syaoran, already suckered into leading Sakura to the most dangerous place she could possibly be because of her tears. Ahhhh~
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  • From ANON - Hinata's Twin on August 20, 2008
    Yaaay A sequel I'm glad I foundt it. I loved the first and I'm sure I'll love this one.
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  • From Scorpinac on August 18, 2008
    Well, at least Tomoyo-chan's kept herself safe, that's good. And Touya, he's gonna get himself into some pretty decent trouble before he catches back up, if he ever does, to Sakura and Syaoran. And now the only previous charcters still unaccounted for, not counting Yue, who' still sulking somewhere, are Ruby, Spinner, and Kero. I look forward to what happens next(big barbecue buffet with Gargoyle as the main course?). Laters.
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  • From ANON - Gryffgruff on August 17, 2008
    This was another excellent chapter!

    We finally got to see what happened to Tomoyo, and I can't wait till Touya and Yue meet again. :)

    I can't wait for your next chapter on Friday! I'm looking forward to it. xD
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  • From ANON - Absinthe on August 15, 2008
    Oh, please don't say we're going to have to wait for Touya to admit he loves Yue before he'll turn up, that could be ages away! lol. And ew, no, Rai can't have Touya, he does belong to Yue, whether he'll admit it or not, someone should take his hands off if he tries to touch Touya again *coughYuecough*. Next Friday is sooooo far away *mopes*
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  • From silvergirlrox on August 15, 2008
    awwww!!! No Rai/ Touya slash!!oh well. I thinks it was so cute when Syaoran agrees to take sakura to the castle even though he doesn't have to take orders from her. It's so funny how clueless Sakura is! It nice to see tomoyo in the story it was interesting to see how she hid herself for 5 years!!!
    can't wait for next friday!

    *silvergirlrox*
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