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Reviews for You can't make me love you

By : JenniferC
  • From Ainzfern on August 27, 2008
    I really like the startling comparison bewteen Iason's life and Riki's - evident in the remark Riki made about how a single meal that Iason would have thought nothing about would have lasted Riki an entire week. I liked Iason's reaction to that, his genuine internalized surprise at the realities of life in the slum. I'm really looking forward to seeing how his (and RIki's) perception changes as they inevitably learn more about each other.
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  • From SirynsMagick on August 25, 2008
    Oh wow!! This is going to be VERY interesting. Iason kidnapped Riki right off the street!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!

    Ganbatte!!

    Ryn

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  • From Ainzfern on August 25, 2008
    Hi! Well this story has certainly kicked off with a really intriguing premise. I really appreciated the idea that Riki initially got angry rather than scared... started plotting to talk his way out of the mess rather than panicking. Felt very much in character, even though your fic is an AU. I also liked the line Iason gave him – about having waited long enough. Hmmm. Very interesting indeed...
    The final couple of chapters had an ominous tone to them, which was compelling. I’ll be very interested to see how this story develops. Potentially a titanic clash of two very strong willed men. Gotta love that, LOL!

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