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Reviews for Heat

By : yakaji
  • From EternalUniverse on October 06, 2008
    That was hot!
    But, you have to write another chapter! It's too good to just leave it there!
    *curls up and cries*
    We need to see more action and Kanda needs to get satisfied or he'll end up with blue golf balls. ^_^
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  • From nightfox39 on August 29, 2008
    i think i need a cold shower!! nice story, i think you should add a chapter about kanda finding his own way to satisfaction, maybe he makes one of them wake up?
    or maybe an unsuspecting komui comes on scene to see how his 'addition' turned out and is seducted by that gorgeous kanda.
    but yeah, this was really good ^^
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  • From ANON - JK on August 28, 2008
    Hahaha awwww poor Kanda. He should drown them out of spite.
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  • From madammalia on August 27, 2008
    LOL

    Oh my GOODNESS, I laughed so hard! Poor, poor Kanda...you made him cry! And he's just gonna let Lavi and Allen drown, isn't he? :P I really liked how Lavi was STILL thinking like a bookman--as in rationalizing why the heck he was doing what he was doing in the middle of an onsen--despite the fact that he was obviously...well...busy. :P

    Although...I have to admit...the thing that made me laugh the hardest? Your second review on aff.net: "missy"?

    Now, THAT made my sides hurt from laughing. (^_~)

    Anyway, I hope to read more from you soon, whether it be crack or not. (^_^)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2008
    ......oh no....no no no no no...
    you do not, I repeat NOT(!!!) leave me hanging here missy *points finger at you*
    I demand a second chapter...I need a second chapter.
    what will Kanda do? will he stoop so low as to take advantage of them in their sleep, or break his resolve not to masturbate and whack off to some made up tune in his head?
    my ponderings must be answered...please provide
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