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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From ANON - Kenichi_Matsuyama on January 22, 2011
    OMG!!! It's been so long since I've reviewed. I've been so busy and being 7-8 months pregnant I have decided that I need to sit down and read more fanfiction. ^_^ Yours was the first I picked up. I read it from the beginning, and to my surprise you had updated. So YAAAY new chapters!! Keep up the good work!! I hope to read more of your fanciful work. :D
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  • From ANON - ieatglitter on December 08, 2010
    WOW! I hated when I got to the end and realized you hadn't updated in awhile. I sincerly hope you haven't abandoned this.
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  • From rizennyves on December 04, 2010
    Dear Miss mayablackwolf,
    Um, hi? I know I've reviewed before, because as I'm sure I've stated previously, I really effing love your story. And it's been almost almost six months since you've updated, I just wanted to make sure that you weren't dead... So if you would please update again, or at least officially say if you do not plan to continue this amazingly awesome fic, I would be absolutely ecstatic. Thank you for your time.
    Sincerely,
    Nyves
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  • From ANON - Aurora moon on October 04, 2010
    Man, I haven't read or reviewed in a while.

    I have to say this story is shaping up wonderfully since the last time I read it. I can't wait to see what happens when L finally meets Mikami.
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  • From ANON - Hails on September 07, 2010
    OMFG! I fucking love this fanfiction! you're an amazing writer and you deserve to win some awards! I can definitely feel the suspense in these last few chappies and I'm dying for an update! I also have my best friend reading this and she loves it as well! Oooooo, I love part-shinigami Light!...so much in fact that I'm doing FANART! I'll send you link to my deviant art as soon as I'm finished! XD I'm excited for you to see it! :stares at it: i think you'll like it! :drools: yes, you must! ...or I may commit fangirl suicide! jk XD

    KEEP WRITING AND WIN SOME SHIT! YEA!

    Loves!
    Hails
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  • From ANON - Anonymous Fem on July 27, 2010
    I'm a first time reader of your stories. I've been reading this and so far I am impressed at your skill. There are mistakes, and they are unavoidable, but I would love to see more of these two. By what I see in the A/N's, you are busy, distracted or being held hostage by Writer's Block. Please continue when you can ^-^.
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  • From ANON - Stitches on July 08, 2010
    I love this story!
    I thought I should point out something, though.
    In chapter eight, when they were in the white room, an eye scanner was incorporated in the entrance process.
    However, you called it a rectal scanner... but 'rectal' refers to the rectum, or anus... when I think the word you were looking for was retinal. I don't mean to step on any toes, but I thought you might want to change that... for obvious reasons.

    Keep writing! I really do love you work.
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  • From ANON - haley heart on March 15, 2010
    (i forgot to loginto my account...opps...)
    Well-this is amazing! You have to finish it pleaaase??
    Im like...dying to know what happens! :3
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  • From ANON - Nyves on March 10, 2010
    X3 loved the new chapter, I was starting to get worried again about you not updating. Glad to see you're still writing this awesome fic. And please don't make the ending sad! Well I don't care if you take away Ryuk's apples actually but be nice to the boys ;) Please update again soon, I can't wait to see where this story goes
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  • From SailorAurora on March 03, 2010
    Whoo~!!! a update~! so happy. =D
    Well, I think L would definitely use the death note in order to gain those pro-kira supporters' trust. After all, both in the anime and the manga L was often acknowledged as being simlar to Light in the sense that he often would do small illegal things in order to catch others who were doing bigger illegal things. and yes, even using questionable methods to do so as well. "The end justifies the means", so to speak.
    of course, I'm worried about how the Death Note would affect him... After all, as the original story showed us Light was just a normal student who actually believed in goodness and justice, etc... but as the power of the death note corrupted him he forgot about that part of himself. Would L lose himself too as well, I wonder?

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2010
    I have just spent the last few days reading through this fiction, chapters 1-29. I must say the writing at times has been quite poor, with glaring grammatical and spelling errors, and also misuse of words which have interfered with the flow of the story as I had to try and work out exactly what the author was trying to convey.

    However. There is something compelling about the idea behind this story. Yes, most of the story is totally OOC, but I feel with good reason, as the author has done a good job of explaining what has caused the change of characters and their emotions. The concept of the main story is fabulous, and this is what has kept me reading this fiction for the best part of three days.

    In spite of the problems with the writing itself, this story shines and is well worth a decent rating. I would hope that this story is beta-d soon, because then it would stand to be an even higher standard of fanfic.

    I look forward to seeing more of this fic.
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  • From lareinelionne on January 12, 2010
    This is really good. I've really been enjoying this! I'm so glad you updated. Please update soon again!!
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  • From SailorAurora on January 11, 2010
    I loved all the new chapters you wrote so far! :)

    all the new information Ryku had was rather interesting to hear.. :)
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  • From ANON - Nyves on January 11, 2010
    Woot! Another chapter this fast? You're amazing! That chapter was mind-fuck, but in a good way. And I definitely have my theories about this Lucian guy, but due to the fact that I've been thrown for a loop plenty of times in this story, I think I'll hold on to them for now ;) This story is pretty a lovely drug for me right now, so I hope you update again soon! Much luv!
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  • From ANON - Nyves on January 09, 2010
    OMK!!!! I checked in on this story on a whim and I was soooo excited to see it updated, I was starting to get worried. So I'm really glad to see you haven't stopped. I truly adore this fanfic, I love the idea and everything about it. Also I'm glad I can go back to loving Ryuk ;) Can't wait for your next chapter! (oh I'm also curious about your novel, so I hope you post it here or at least give a link)
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