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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From ANON - Draug on October 12, 2008
    Please please please you must continue the smut is good the plot is great and i'm in love with ryu-chan so please you must continue soon
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  • From lovelle7 on October 12, 2008
    This was your first time writing a lime? Then you must be a natural :) I'm really looking forward to the lemon if the lime was this great. I like it then it's really descriptive as your was, when you almost can feel the feelnings that's described yourself. And you know that I loved the fluffyness :) Let's go make some more teaddybear-factors explode, hehe. And I think you know that I loved this chapter ( I love your whole story) I still havn't found any story that is as totally awesom as this :) Looking forward for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Aurora Moon on October 11, 2008
    Ahhh, fluff now and then never hurt anyone. =D

    it was kind of adorable, actually. ^^
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 11, 2008
    Nice!
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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 11, 2008
    Wow that makeout scene was hot... really you did great, even though this chapter was a filler you still got that there was some underlining feelings there you know more than lust, even though L still doesn't fully believe Raito but it's getting there, anyway I love this as you know... Can't wait for more.
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  • From Linkala on October 11, 2008
    The only thing I don't like about this fic is the fact that when it's all over I'll once again have to lower my standards as to what a great story is ^-^

    Yay! The Yagami's are saved! L is badass O_o I hope we'll be seeing a bit more of this side of L in future, hehehe.

    Sorry, my review is a tad shorter than my others this time due to the horrible flu circulating our household at the moment *brain dribbles out of reviewer's ear*
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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 11, 2008
    YAY! L Kissed Raito.... This chapter was so great, I love the Ryu-chan in human form thing, Thats exactly what I thought when I read in the last chapter about the toy panda bear that it was just like L. But yeah can't wait for the next chapter.... Your Awesome...
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 07, 2008
    I Like it!!
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  • From ANON - QD on October 07, 2008
    “I promise to obey my future sister-in-law’s words.”
    Ahhhh, so cute! I love how you insert small slices of humor so that it isn't obvious and campy. You've made my day.
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  • From SailorAurora on October 07, 2008
    Sayu is just too damn cute. ^^

    And I can see L teasing Light about the whole bear bit in future chapters, heheh.
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  • From lovelle7 on October 07, 2008
    Aww I loved that with Sayu and her wishes for Ruy-chan, it was so cute I got this ridiculously wide smile on my face X3. And L got so angry, I could see it so clearly and it was kind of scary, hihi. There was so many things I loved about this chapter. L carrying Raito and putting him in his lap and kissing him. L got kind of confident with Raito :D Sayu did somehow see right threw the feelings between L and Raito and even if Raito thougt that was embarrasing I think that will make things easier for him later :)I loved it! And next time there's gonna be a lime!! ( I'm also having that pervert grin you where talking abut earlier XD) I can't wait till next chapter! Anyway I really loved this chapter :)
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  • From ANON - QD on October 05, 2008
    Hey, I'm really enjoying your fic thus far. Its rare to find a Death Note fic writer that takes the time to produce a solid story with plot and intelligent characters. I like my lemons and pwp as much as the next fangirl but if all I wanted was "I hate you!" "I hate you more!" "Lets f***, while I plot your inevitable death...," I could rent it. I get that we can't chain you to your computer and force you to write for food but please please don't let this story shrivel up and die as so many do.
    I haven't finished all the chapters you have posted yet so maybe my question is mote, but is there any chance of Mother Nature making another appearence...to L even?
    Happy writing, and I'm sure I'll love what ever you have written next.

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  • From greeneyes40988 on October 03, 2008
    Love it, love it, love it. SO great, It was so sweet that his family was sleeping in his bed, it just shows how much they care for him. Little Raito is so cute giving up his panda (hehe kinda like L's now his big human Panda) to his little sister. Aww brotherly love. But anyway it's great as usual, your fantastic, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep em' coming lol...
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  • From SailorAurora on October 03, 2008
    well, that was unexpected....

    I didn't think that Ryku would be able to actually regonize Raito in his shigamai form...

    nor did I really expect him to be that cruel.
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on October 03, 2008
    Good chapter.
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