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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From lovelle7 on September 20, 2008
    :) Thank you for all the nice words you said about me. That, and that I saw that you did put out a new chapter made my day a lot better. Thank you so much. As usual your story's totally unpredicable and I totally love that. I liked your new character Zaki too and that Raito killed his darker self, I didn't saw that comming :) You have an amazing abillity to keep the characters in-character and it feels really true. Even if Raito is different from what he is in the manga he feels true too. You really are an amazing person to have such great imagination. I'm really looknig forward to the next chapter, I'll be waiting :)
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  • From SailorAurora on September 20, 2008
    I'm totally digging the story so far. ^_^
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  • From pinkfeline on September 19, 2008
    Absolutely lovely! It is a whole new look on the second chance thing, and so very very interesting! I am very eager to read more, to see what Light will do, what will happen.
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  • From ANON - Linkala on September 19, 2008
    Oh my god ... It's happened ... A story has finally come along in all my years on this site that's made me actually hit the review button. I can't find words to describe my thoughts so far but I can say this, DON'T STOP!!! From just these few chapters I can tell this is going to be a story that will redefine my standards of what a great, original story is. I've heard of the idea of Life Note before but this is the only story I've found where it has potential. I wish I could still write like this ... for the sake of all uninspired artists and those who have given up on their creativity entirely PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.
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  • From greeneyes40988 on September 18, 2008
    OMG! I Love It, Yay I'm so excited to read the next chapter. I can't wait. I think Mikami should be the new kira your right he is the best for it, complete wacko. Also I don't like misa at all so maybe you should have her join the new kira just to make things interesting. but it's whatever you want either way I think this story is gonna be great...
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  • From lovelle7 on September 17, 2008
    I know I reviewed earlier BUT GOD this story is good!!! I don't wanna wait two whole weeks 'till next chapter... Your whoe idea is original and I love your writing style. Please, please, please update soon, I will be watching everyday if there's any updates :)

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  • From greeneyes40988 on September 16, 2008
    Oh, I'm liking this story alot. It's something different, I haven't read anything like this before....but please do keep on, I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From lovelle7 on September 16, 2008
    Oh I like this. I usually predict what is going to happen, and I'm usually right. I can't tell what is going to happen now and it is really exiting! I really like this and I want you to continiue, 'cause I wanna read this fic to last chapter. I like your writing style, and that you don´t use the hardest word to understand (im from Sweden). Please keep writing *
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