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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From ANON - Nyves on July 08, 2009
    Aww that chapter was cute
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  • From SailorAurora on July 07, 2009
    I read both the mini story and this one. I enjoyed both very much. :) This one did seem a little bit fillerish, but nothing too bad! (( compared to my fillers, anyway. -_-;; )) I laughed so hard at L's cute reaction near the end there. ^^
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  • From greeneyes40988 on July 07, 2009
    Yay! I'm so happy I've waited forever and then my computer crashed and that sucked big time. I'm just glad that your back. So this chapter wasn't as long as your others but thats alright. Ummm.... Not really all that much I have to say about this chapter. But If you do decide to get a beta, I'd be more than happy to do it. Just e-mail me at greeneyes_40988@yahoo.com. But don't lose faith in your story, you can do it.
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  • From ANON - lilium on June 22, 2009
    I love it! I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!!!! Good luck!
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  • From DecadentDreams on June 17, 2009
    Awe, that makes me really sad that you almost discontinued the story so many times!
    All of us love it so much...

    I understand your worries though, and just remember that you're your harshest critic.
    So what might be absolute horrid to you might not be as bad (or might be a lot better) for the readers.
    And even when I do find minute mistakes (I'm a grammar nazi, so it's a fault of mine), I'm too smitten with the plot to even care about it (and that's saying something, especially when you remember my grammar nazi-ness).

    But if you still feel like improvements can be made and that it's not your strongest suit, a beta is a very good asset. Not only can they really help with the editing process, but if you get stuck then they can help you brainstorm for ideas. You'd basically get their email, and email them each chapter as you write it. No rush, the beta works to your schedule. When they're finished editing, they'll send it back for you to read over once more (you can never do enough proof-reading!) and then post. Beta work is really easy and fun, so don't feel like you'd be inconveniencing anyone. In fact, if it wasn't for my busy schedule, I'd basically throw myself at the idea/offer to be your beta.
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  • From ANON - Nyves on June 16, 2009
    Woot! I'm so happy you updated, I absolutely love this story!
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  • From ANON - Draug on June 16, 2009
    God i love you this was the best birthday present ever(B-day =16 june) despite the gramma errors. This story has a unique plot the likes of which i have never seen before do DONT YOU DARE stop writting or i shall hunt you down and stab you with mikamis pen ok? Me and my friend have been waiting for this for ages!!!

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  • From ANON - Kenichi Matsuyama on June 15, 2009
    YATTA!!! Arigatou for updating!! I have never found fault in your writing, I'm thinking it's more author angst. ^_^ Your an amazing author so shush!! Update soon and have tons of fun in Disney!!
    -Ken
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  • From SailorAurora on June 14, 2009
    Aw, don't worry about it. I think every artist/writer has a tendency to hate their own works, no matter how awesome it is. Hell, even I hate my own works at times! I think that it's in our human nature to strive for perfection, and doing so we're truly never satisfied with our own creations. In fact you know my AU, Choices? I actually had to rewrite that chapter twice... and Misa ended up taking center stage in that one... ack. Always knew she was an attention whore. :p I'm going to have to work hard to bring L and light back into the full picture.

    I think your chapter was wonderful though... :) it started out sweet, fluffy and ended on a dramatic cliffhanger.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2009
    This story is so good. I love how your following the profiles of the main chrarcters properly. I have only read a few authors that actually can properly keep the characters in the context given, yet build a new world around them. The story line is also very sold. When is the next chapter coming out?
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  • From Jeichan on May 12, 2009
    I came across this fanfic two days ago and just finished reading all 19 chapters so far...I was hooked from the first chapter and it's difficult for me to find a fanfic I enjoy reading, or at least the ones I enjoy reading are never updated. That reminds me, I read your Detective Conan fanfic, The White Moon's Truth, don't think I reviewed though, and I liked that one as well, will you update it anytime soon? I hope you update this fanfic and your Detective Conan fanfic soon.
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  • From kallipso on March 31, 2009
    Must have more. I love this story. I like the way that Raito keeps getting hung up in his emotions, which I can see after having his soul torn from being in Mu. Please keep it coming I can't wait to read more.
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  • From on March 22, 2009
    GAH!!! i cannot get enough of this story!!! i rered it twice already, it's that good

    loved this chapter and the side story you posted, please continue writing both!

    keep up the great work!
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  • From Foxmore on March 17, 2009
    ... ok... you MUST keep writing this. I would threaten you in some way.. probably Misa related, but that just seems too cruel. So instead I will tempt you with cyber cookies. Mmmmm. With chocolate chips.

    I love the switched up words btw (being completely serious), sometimes it just makes the line hilarious. Ex. When they were in the white room, L mentioned the "rectal scanner" It took me far longer than it should to realize that you meant "retinal scanner". I think I scared some of my family members with how hard I was laughing. Just imagining it.

    *cough* Anyway. I hope you update soon. Do it for the cookies.

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  • From lovelle7 on March 11, 2009
    Well well it has been awile since last time. But when I read this it all came back, hehe. This was a funny chapter, I laughed several times. And I wish your imagination was for sale, cuz I would by it for a very high price :3
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