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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From greeneyes40988 on March 03, 2009
    Yay I'm so happy. I like love you. This was awesome, your getting to the plot. The whole gang thing was great and then when L slapped Raito cause he scared him was sweet. But yeah I so can't wait for the next chapter. Stay cool in all your awesomeness.
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  • From DecadentDreams on March 02, 2009
    Aaah yay, you added a new chapter!

    And I understand about wanting to work towards being a beta.
    Just know that my offer will always stand.
    :D

    Just like these reviews are like water for fish, bananas for monkeys, sugar for L and killing for Kira, that is what your chapter updates are for me!
    So I'll be excitedly yet patiently (for the most part) awaiting your next update.
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  • From SailorAurora on March 02, 2009
    The mental image of Light being scared to go outside and being a shut-in, well... it just had me rolling on the floor with laughter.

    Gonna love L's sense of humor. :p
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  • From ANON - Sarian on March 01, 2009
    sorry it took me so long to r&r! Works been wearing me out lately... the latest chapter was awesome though! and i can't wait for the special chapter, _> heh heh, where is it? i kno ur hiding it around here somewhere... *rummages through the closet with a crazy gleam in eyes* Here kitty, kitty, kitty. momma wants to read you, no harm will be done... momma promises! 'I promise that you'll be safe with me! I won't let anyone else read you!' lol, i sa crazy... @_@ woo hoo! funny...
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  • From ANON - Kenichi Matsuyama on March 01, 2009
    *squeals* YATTA AN UPDATE!! i do love this story Maya-chan, and am anxiously awaiting for you next installment!! Soon I hope! Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Nyves on February 28, 2009
    I liked the gang fight and L getting all defensive about Raito and I adore the story L told to the innkeeper, that was cute and funny. Also I like that L's not the only letter out there and that it's something bigger than the Wammy house with Near, Mello, and Matt.
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  • From Zerayah516 on February 13, 2009
    Plzz update this story! This is one of the few story's about Light and Lawlet that are worth reading... And i really want to know what comes next.
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  • From ANON - Aura9969 on February 13, 2009
    I an so glad that you have updated. There are very few stories that I follow anymore, due to people not being creative or just the overall grammar that they misuse. I do have one critique on your last chapter though, there were some sentences that needed to be added on to or just revamped to help the overall flow of the chapter, and a few spelling errors but, other than those two minor things (English minor in college here) the chapter and story are superb. Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Kira's Light on February 06, 2009
    I love this fic please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kenichi on January 27, 2009
    OMG!! This story had me hooked from the beginning!!! Plz continue!! lol...I just realized how dorky I sound....but...and addict must be sated.OvO
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  • From DecadentDreams on January 26, 2009
    And to tack on...
    I noticed the reviewer before me mentioned a Beta...
    If you don't know one, I'd be more than happy to be your Beta.

    I've done some beta work before, and certainly wouldn't mind helping you out!
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  • From DecadentDreams on January 26, 2009
    Aaah you're back!
    YES!

    Haha... I loved this chapter.
    Hell, I love every chapter.

    But hopefully you'll update sooner...?
    Eheh... I know exactly how life can be sometimes...
    But after a while I started to worry about you.
    xD

    Again, I'll be awaiting your future chapters with baited breath!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2009
    I just started reading your fic today, and I must say...it was worth it XD
    I'm looking forward to the next update(though, if you keep your word, chp.20 will be the one I'm looking forward to the most;3)
    Is this big, awfull new Kira Mikami? I doubt Higuchi would be smart enough to kill off 50 mill convicts in one night...
    a small side note at the end of my review: have you ever considered getting a beta to read over your chapters?
    there are some constant spelling errors and wrong usage of words (such as pacific instead of pacifist*early chapters*, and though instead of through) that I think should be fixed to make the flow of reading easier.

    Ibe
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  • From lovelle7 on January 23, 2009
    Im so happy there was a new chapter out :) I was so worried about how L was going to take the confession and I'm so happy and relieved that it went so well. Seriously you are the best author ever lived! I love this story above all others I've ever read. There isn't a single thing that is bad about it. And this chapter seriously rocked! I hope you don't feel forced to write just because of us that is obsessed with this. I don't want you to have any bad feelings of feeling forced, we will wait for you forever if necesary :) I can imagine that I would have been feeling forced :/ Anyway I truly and sincerly love this fan-fic and Im so happy that you updated :)
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  • From SailorAurora on January 23, 2009
    Ahhh!! not a cliffhanger!

    I'm happy that L managed to be so accepting of what happened to Light though. :)

    the moments between them was just too cute! ^_^
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