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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From on January 22, 2009
    this is totally wonderful...all the confessions and everything, so cute!

    i can't wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From ANON - Nyves on January 22, 2009
    Aww, poor Raito... He's finally about to ask L and stupid Kira has to go and ruin the moment. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!!!!
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  • From greeneyes40988 on January 21, 2009
    Yay!!! I've been checking everyday since the last update. Oh so now L knows all of it, well almost all, and he still loves Raito. So sweet and he doesn't think his shingami forms repulsive either. Heh. Man I love you, I'm like bursting with happiness right now, Can't wait for the next chapter, Your Awesome, You Rock....
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  • From on January 13, 2009
    no worries about length, it was wonderful

    can't wait for the next installment

    the plotline for his is absolutely amazing
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  • From ANON - Sarian on January 10, 2009
    Fouloldron don't you dare diss this story! It is one of the bests i've ever read, (and I've read alot) And a lot of us don't give a s**t about simple grammer errors, though that retina-rectal one was quite funny *snickers* i don't think it should be changed. Leave it as it is *grins* aand when are you going to update? it almost been a month since the last one... i've got no good stories to read but this one *sniffle* and maybe some of twistedhilarity's stories, their good too, but she hasn't updated in just as long... woe is me...
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on December 27, 2008
    The grammatical errors and ooc patterns of speech for a genius such as Yagami Raito are too irritating, and so I will not finish this story despite it's interesting premise.
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  • From ANON - Fouloldron on December 27, 2008
    I’ve really have no wish to repeat it. It seems that the less darkness that is inside the more I’ll feel…maybe if I go farther I’ll get my memories back.’
    That sentence is gibberish.
    Furthermore THEN is an adverb indicating consequential action, THAN is a COMPARATIVE adverb, which comes after comparative adjectives and adverbial constructions such as more, smarter and more accurate.
    Story has an interesting premise.
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  • From ANON - Immortal Senshi on December 18, 2008
    I love it. I love the depth to the story, the characters, the feeling of losing myself in this story, and _being_ there... I love it.
    I especially love the romance, the passion, that doesn't cross the line. Anticipation makes it all the sweeter, that they aren't stepping over that invisible line, so that when they do, it'll be all the more satisfying. And I loved the scene with Raito having to explain that it 'wasn't that he was unhappy, but, L, your hard-on was poking me in the back of the head.' *giggles maniacally*
    And, ah, although funny and good for a long laugh... you have a bit of an eye-popping typo in chapter 8... Now, I got wrapped up in the story and didn't read the various author's notes, so I don't know if this has been pointed out to you or not, but...
    When Watari entered the White Room? I know you meant he looked into the retina scanner that scans his eyes... but you wrote rectal. *snickers* And, I'm sorry, but that gave me such _bad_ mental images, followed with the line, 'he straight when the scan finished and dug out a small silver key.' Something along those lines, and... I just had to mention it, it took me a good ten minutes to stop laughing at the influx of images coming into my head... which end of his body was facing the door and which end did Raito actually have to look at? *grins*
    I can't wait to see more!
    ~IS
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  • From TempestWitch on December 16, 2008
    I'm really enjoying the story! Please post soon!
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  • From DecadentDreams on December 15, 2008
    Ack!
    What a cliffhanger!
    I want to know how L reacts when he sees Raito in his shinigami form...
    That's what'll happen, right?
    Gosh, I love this story...
    Love love love love love!
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  • From SailorAurora on December 14, 2008
    I bet he's going to show L his other form. obvious! :p

    I don't mind the fact that they were a little OOC. Light's changed a lot in a way anyway... so in a way that makes sense.

    hmmm. looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From lovelle7 on December 14, 2008
    I'm so happy! I'm so happy! I'm so happy! I promise I did my happy dance when I saw that you updated X3. I,ve read a lot of fan fics lately, but I can honestly tell that your's is the best on the entire internet. I get so worked up over this so now I'm not going to be able to sleep (clock's 00.30 in Sweden) But that's okay, I feel so happy at the moment, I thougt that you had put this story on ice for awile untill you had motivation again. :) Don't worry I will never abandon this wonderful story, I might watch this 'detective Conan' too so I can enjoy your other story too :) I'll do it as soon I get time for it :) And do I need to tell you that I liked this chaper? (love all the chapters, hihi)
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  • From ANON - nyves on December 13, 2008
    Aww, I can't wait for next chapter! I know updates can take a while, but I still feel obliged to say it, please update soon!! I truly love this story and was so happy to an update today. I also can't wait to see L's reaction to Raito's "true form." Hope you have a happy holidays!
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  • From ANON - Draug on December 12, 2008
    *Sniffle* i missed this stpry so happy to seee it alive again. Im am looking forward to more. OCCs not that bad after all light is a differnt person now and lovedoes chamnge people right
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  • From greeneyes40988 on December 12, 2008
    Yay! Another Chapter it feels like I've been waiting forever.... But Anyways Good Chapter kinda short but thats ok.... It's like getting a taste of what's to come or something but can't wait for the next chapter... We all know what Raito's gonna do... so yeah can't wait....
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