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Reviews for Darkness Within your Light

By : mayablackwolf
  • From ANON - Sarian on December 12, 2008
    It was great! I knew there had to be a reason why i kept checking on this story today! Lol, even if it's short it's made my day! (again ^_^) You're really good at writing! I really don't want to wait for the next update... but, i will... lol, there's nothing else i can do besides hope and pray you'll update again soon. Good luck and thank you for updating!
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  • From ANON - nyves on November 26, 2008
    ZOMG!! I love this story! It's one of my all time favorite fanfics ever! Please, please, please update soon, I really wanna read more and I want a lemon XD so please update soon, if this means I have to leave you a review everyday until I get more, I will, or I'll just send Misa after you, please do everyone a favor and kill her off. More love to the story and author!
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  • From greeneyes40988 on November 24, 2008
    Yay you finally updated.... It's was an alright chapter, not your best but thats ok. but as you said it was kinda poetic. But anyways I hope that your writers block goes away and I can't wait for the next chapter...Your the greatest just remember that when trying to write.
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  • From DecadentDreams on November 24, 2008
    Oh I love it!!!!

    I love it so much!
    I even love it more and more with each chapter, and I even went back and re-read it while I was waiting for this current chapter to come out.
    Haha I'm such a dork...

    I'll be waiting for the next chapter, as always!
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  • From ANON - Sarian on November 24, 2008
    >^.^< I'm just so happy you updated this looooong ass chapter. ^_^ you couldn't have made my day better, well you could, but it's not likely to happen, and yes! Lets pray to the Goddess of Fanfiction and the Gods of Yaoi, (what? you thought it was just one? how can it be yaoi if there's just one!?) lol, i slept in late but checked to see if you had updated as soon as i got up... big surprise! it took me an hour to read, i'm sooo happy, i can wait a while for your next update... but not too long!! lol
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  • From ANON - Draug on November 24, 2008
    OMK we have an update yay ive been checking in eveyday seeing if youve uodated.Hmm i think whis chaoeter was rather importabntnt really it was a sort of bonding chappter between L and light im just wondering what'll happen next
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  • From lovelle7 on November 24, 2008
    I can't understand why you are'nt satisfied with this chapter? I loved it and I dont care if it was OOC cuz I don't think it was. They're both totally different persons now than they was before, and that adds a little change in personallity ;3 . I loved the lime and I loved this chapter and don't feel bad about not updating in awile since you are allowed to be a human you too :D. You have watched Bleach!! ZOMK I love that anime too, and I am very happy you have seen them too. When I find a new anime-series that I like I can't help to watch all episodes of it in a very short period of time, so I know what you've been through. And when you mentioned me before this chapter I got so overwhelmed so I alost started to cry ;*) I love you too!!
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  • From ANON - gryphonwills on November 24, 2008
    Not bad

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  • From SailorAurora on November 24, 2008
    Awww. I've been there. =

    *makes offering to the great yaoi gods and goddesses* here's hoping your writer block gets better!
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  • From 70SolLaen on November 24, 2008
    I understand how tough writer's block can be, I get artist block, which is pretty much the same thing. You could have post a short A/N or update with news saying that you were on block, I was beginning to think something had happened. Good to see you're ok. The chapter didn't suck, it was just a little off because you're still on writer's block. You'll get past it, I know you will.
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  • From SailorAurora on November 22, 2008
    You know... I had an really werid dream about this story. lol

    I dreamt that in this story, Light never really died, or touched the death note. For some reason, he got an lifenote from the very start and it was somebody else who was Kira. And to get past the whole bit where he had to sarfice his own lifespan to save others using the lifenote, he could summon this vial of life thing (an bottle with endless juice that expended your lifespan by 50 years with every sip). But the downside of using this bottle was that after every sip, he sometimes lost self-control, which made for some rather embrassing situations. :) And it was even in the rules of the lifenote.

    But for the most part the rest of the story was basically about the same as your version. with one expection-- Light actually suspected L to be the real Kira for a while, so he was very careful about not revealing himself as an lifenote user, which ironically made L suspect him too in return. =p
    There was also some other differences here too... misa noticed Light from the very start, and started stalking him at the same time when Raye peber was watching Light. Misa apparently thought he was just a creepy homosexual stalker... and being the jealous posstive type she killed him before Light was even aware of him. She killed Naomi in almost the same manner, not realizing that this would actually hurt Light in a way more than help him.
    Anyway the story kept on skipping ahead in my dream... which was a good thing otherwise it would had made for a very long dream.
    But at the moment where L was going to die because of attempting to bring Misa in, Light finally realized that L wasn't the real Kira, and took him up to the rooftop even though it was raining then. It was then Light actually confessed to him about being a light note user, and how Misa had confessed to him one night how she had been stalking him from the start, and used her shagami to blackmail him into helping her. As well as to pretend being her boyfriend. Light then warned L that Rem was very protective of Misa, and would kill L if he attempted to bring Misa in for the felonies that she had commited.

    L then agreed to hold it off for now, provided that Light gave him his lifenote for verfication. Light agreed. unfountely this part of the dream got a little bit fuzzy, as seeing it was starting to end right at that point so I didn't get to see what L was planning next. :P
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  • From DecadentDreams on November 20, 2008
    Are you alive?

    O w O;;

    I really hate to bother you because you could be busy and therefore not have enough time to update...
    But I'm dying of anticipation!
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  • From ANON - Sarian on November 10, 2008
    you should update soon, it's been ten days since ur last update... and i vote sex >^.^< it's so yummy, lol, but really UPDATE
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  • From Linkala on November 06, 2008
    *collapses* I'm back, and I'm bloody tired. Sorry I couldn't review anything until now, I was away with a bunch of other parents and kids on a trip organized for JD's playgroup ... parenting's a tough gig, free tip: when you have your own sprogs don't associate with any other parents, especially if you're a teenage mother.

    I don't have enough brain power to write a proper review this time, so I'll just say keep it up, favorite author!

    About sex: Yes! Do not wait until they get married, I can't wait that long. If you need help you can always call on me (I just started drawing for a new yaoi website) Also it just occurred to me that it's a tad odd that Soichiro would approve of his son in a homosexual relationship but wouldn't tolerate sex before marriage. I dunno, all types make up the world I suppose, lol.

    Update soon! please? I'm in real need of some cheering up *sniff*
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  • From DecadentDreams on November 04, 2008
    Oh yeah.
    to tack onto my last review...
    Sex yes please and thank you!
    xD
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